FF: New Beginnings? Updtd Chap 12 on pg 37

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Ankita

@radhikarani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

wah! Nyc ff. Just read begign.
Hmm 9 parts! Gv tym 2 cmplete.
Wat a supersonic writr. Thnx dear 4 pm.

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Hye prashu,
nice and intresting part dear,
this Rajveer i will kill u for hurting my arpi so much,wait wait avi is cuming.
so i guess next will be sum dhagardham part.
Happy dat arpi remembered avi also.
Hope dat manjari tell the truth to avi and he could solve the probs.
I felt really sad for arpi on her situation,must say dat u described dat in a authentic way.
Will wait for next one.

Sorry i got little late.

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ozzyie

@ozzyie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Superb prashu ... so sad for Arpi ...but i guess...nxt update is goin to be some high voltage action !!!!!!😉

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Rajveer you better say your last prayers😡

He is beyond words🤬

Avdesh is as always on time...

I am sure Manjari will answer Avi now

Loved this part too Prahu...

Cntnu on

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MuktaJaiswal

@MuktaJaiswal

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

wt a UD,👏👏

oh !!!m culdnt stop reading😉

m 2 got scared once🤢 fr poor arpi😭 , when rajveer entered 😆

gosh relived when Avi saved arpi👏👏

cannot wait fr the next part UD soon😃

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: jes_jade
Finally we got few updates & new OS frm this forum...😲😲

U shud all give double updates when updating so late...That's ur punishment...but then maybe Priya wud have to update 4-5 updates together...🤣🤣Just Kidding..Don't take seriously...😆😆😆

Saku Chan ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

do i ever take anything seriously regarding my late UD from anyone esp you 🤣 🤣 🤣

Jaanu i am working 11 chapter of FF seriously but i am not able to plan any jhatakas in it because this chapter will be turning point of FF which i have to handle it properly or else everyone will throw chappals on me 🤣 🤣

if i complete by this week then i will post it soon and sincere apology for delaying it for my reader who bear my writing not to CKD group 😳

btw saku if i should post 4 to 5 update then wat abt our baby 🤣

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

I Edited my post on pg 24,26,29,31 😳

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sharan

@danno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

yeah...i finally read it
its is just as awesome as previous ones
ab tera kya hoga rajbeer
heheheh
hum humre avdhesh ji tohra ka haal kart hai eh toh next patiya me hi pata chalega...
love it c2