Time Wheel - Page 4

Originally posted by: swamini5

Hay Nandini

Lovely writing

I liked the Title " TIME WHEEL"

What an Irony Avdesh is going through the same phase as Arpita had once.

I guess he has to learn it in an Hard way.

Originally posted by: chatterbox

yo nandu ab itne pyaar se kaha toh i would write what i wanted to say.😆

see this is such a unique love story thats why we like it so much

arpita being a young girl fell in love with a person who was unknown to her and he was sort of prince charming for her. arpita was infatuated with this avdesh and went against everything to be with the man she loves.
even when she was faced with all sorts of difficulties her love for avdesh didnt falter at all and she still sustained and nurtured her love.

and for avdesh he had never experienced love before and never knew what it felt to love someone like that.
he was taken aback by what he felt when arpita fell in his arms in market the first time. he didnt know anything how to express his love or his feelings and he had it all easy for him.

and he just didnt realise that he had done any wrong till he lost his arpita..

love is never easy and at every step the lovers have to give test of their love and faith towards each other

i would say in exams of love arpita passed but avdesh failed

now he is having the hard way to learn the lesson again and come out of it with flying colors

now he wud understand the real value of love in his life,

and here arpita has come back as pihu ( though i m still confused about it 😆)
and avdesh feels pihu is arpita as he feels the soul connection

so the lines from om shanti om movie fit here

itni shiddat se maine tumhe paane ki koshish ki hai ki har zarre ne mujhe tumse milane ki koshish ki hai...kehte hai agar kisi cheez ko dil se chaaho toh poori kaynath tumhein usse milane ki koshish mein lag jaati hai


now for avdesh arpita is back and whole kaaynat whole universe is conspiring to make him meet her

and this time he is not going to let her out of his sight or out of his life and this time he wud make his love work

and then we wud say this is the true love which triumphed despite all odds


and oh yes time wheel. life has come full circle for avdesh again as all said now its his turn to understand each and everything arpita went through and through this he wud understand the true meaning of loving someone😳

I loved wat u said and as i always say ...ur comments are so touching I like this dialogue of OSO lots ... never realised it fits in so well for Avi 😃

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

first of all a big hug from me for this lovely post, u have taken out ur heart and the whole story in just few lines, which is incredible... it is true what man did in this life he has to get back that and the same thing happened with Avdheshji but after all he is a human being and human beings are the one who do mistakes, this time the mistake was something which cannot be forgiven, if I would in place of Arpita I would also do the same thing, but one chance he should get to rectify his faults, after all he realized that he made a mistake, but its ok, whatever he has done, he should get his due, let him face that.

Originally posted by: chatterbox

hehee thanks for liking it and the more i see avdesh going after pihu and her comeback into his life i m reminded of these lines from oso

and in daily life also these lines work a lot

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Hey Nandu di 🤗

it is awesome and i am speechless also no words from me 👏 👏 👏

i don't know what to write especially when i am not good at it

i agree with everyone completely 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Fate, Time and Love are clever witch and don't know when it will change love in to hate or hate in to love with change of time and Love doesn't know what time or where or when it makes the person who was merely stranger to us yesterday becomes our whole world today and also the more time we will come to know about the person more we love them.

"The first time you fall in love, it changes your life forever, and no matter how hard you try, the feeling never goes away."

Same thing had happen with Avita but Avi always taken her for granted because he knows that she is HIS and will be always with him but later he realized true value of her but at the time she left him and now for him every moment without her is a moment of time lost.

"love is like a butterfly hold it tight it die and hold it lose it fly way"

Now fate had given him once more chance to prove his love and this time i think he won't leave a chance to bring her back in his arms and locked her in his protective embrace think One day she will love me and the loved way i do.

With changing of time people change too yesterday she was in his position and today his in same position as her.

Gosh di i think i bored you alot 😆

Love you alots 🤗

After such fabulous FFs, Brilliant OS, u still mean to say that ur not a good writer ??? 😲😲 U shock me Sweetiee. Someone who cud write such excellent One shots and FFs has abundance of grt writing skills. Especially ur One shot "Coffee shop"" was such a Masterpiece I was amazed to read it 😊

Lovved wat u said especially those lines in Bold

Originally posted by: BenNevis

Hey Nadu
sorry for commenting late.
Thanks for sharing ur heart for the awesome Avita.
I have been thinking this wonderful updater and commentater never posted any topic before why? (im sorry if i missed since i joined IF or if u did it before)As i have seen Dreamy, Vista, CB, Swamini, Lax but never of our coolbie's.
I know im not speechless that hamara coolbie can write this cool , as i do know how cool she is.

What would i say as all the fellow members agreed and appreciated with what u said.Its so True ,from bottom of ur heart, u pouring down everything for the Lovely Avita what exactly feeling for them.Wow!!! U did write its, really touched my heart.

As every one said that its the time for Avi to go through the same phases that Arpi went before.

One thing i did not understand did Arpi want to take revenge from Avi ? If so its not true love, coz love never takes revenge even though we suffered from the same person whom we loved.Coz

Love is patient, Love is kind. It doesn't envy, it doesnot boast. it doesnot proud, does not rude, it is not self- seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no records of wrongs.Love doesn't delight in evilbut rejoice with the truthIt always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always,perseveres.

Above all love never fails.

As he needs to be tested more and more to become strong(mentally , not physically) and pure just like the gold which becomes more puriifed being burnt in the furnace again and again.

Please dont get angry with me, as this is just my opinion.

sorri nandu i couldn't complete it as my princess woke up in the middle of the night and i had to post it incompletely what i wanted to say.will edit later.

Originally posted by: chatterbox

sow if pihu is arpita she is not taking reveng from avdesh

she mayb wanting avdesh to use his brains


bt if she is pihu then she is going too far with this hatred thing
and as i said in promo post mayb its filmy that after hatred anger accusations etc the love blossoms then mayb pihu wud understand avdesh

i m still clueless

on pihu and cant make up my mind if she is arpita or not