FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Oooh Neha..........so much angst.😭😭😭.........heartbreaking.😭😭😭.........dono ko jaldi mila do, please😊

Luv the song..........Bin Tere.......so apt in the situation.........

Can't wait for the update.........😃

Oh, almost forgot......why do I get the feeling that Arshika (nice name btw😊) knows exactly who Avadesh loves and is doing this to make him declare his feelings for Arpi? Maybe I am wrong😕

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Sidda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Wonderful update Joliefille, Avi is in love with Arpi and Arshika and Rv are in the way. This reminds me of the movie Janne Tu Ya Janne Na where Imran and Genelia are jealous of each others dates.

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Hey Jo 🤗

i will read it again n comment today 🤣

ha ha ha it's good to be editor you get to read story first 😉

*Edited*

see down 😉

What a twist jo and hat's off to you 👏 ⭐️ 👏

that RV 😲 😡 stupid guy i think my Sheila is away better than him 😡 🤬 how dare he flirt with Arpi 😡

thank god Avi is there with her or else don't know what he may do more 😡

it was a Awesome chapter Jo and this is best chapter according to me 👏

you portrayed everyone emotions very well 😳

love ya 🤗

PS UPDATE SOON 🤣

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PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Hey Jooooooooooooooo🤗🤗

The update is

It was really beautiful..! you depicted each emotion very well..!👏
👏
Tht song.." Bin Tere" suited them so much..

They havent yet realised they are in love with each other

Tht RV😡😡😡 He can do whtver he wants!!😡😡

Awwwwwww😭 My Avita😭😭😭😭

Avi is dating Arshika😭 and vil get engaged to her juz because Arpi told him😭 Awww😭

Hugs🤗

Update it sooooooooooooooooooooooooon😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Vistaa
Oooh Neha..........so much angst.😭😭😭.........heartbreaking.😭😭😭.........dono ko jaldi mila do, please😊

Luv the song..........Bin Tere.......so apt in the situation.........

Can't wait for the update.........😃

Oh, almost forgot......why do I get the feeling that Arshika (nice name btw😊) knows exactly who Avadesh loves and is doing this to make him declare his feelings for Arpi? Maybe I am wrong😕

thanks di 😳

don't worry itni jaldi nahi milney wale .😆

thoda pareshaan hone dejiye, after all they are contradicting there own thoughts😉

realise karne me thoda to tang honge na,

n nice guess about Arshika, may be true but can't say.😉

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: yoga23priya
Hey Jo

i will read it again n comment today 🤣

ha ha ha it's good to be editor you get to read story first 😉

ya ya ya,😆

wow madam read the story last night and not confermed yet wheater she liked it or not

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: joliefille

ya ya ya,😆

wow madam read the story last night and not confermed yet wheater she liked it or not

i have few doubts abt lets talk through pm 😉

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Nice part dear.too much shocking dear.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

What a heartbreaking chapter Jo🥺..........mera bechaara dil toot kar hazzaar tukde ban gaye..........Arpi is right in her position.....she can't ignore her sister's feelings...but are Arshikha's feelings genuine for Avi.....she just seems too sugary.....i dnt hate her...but my heart doesn't want to like her either..........RV is a pervert....Avi you better make raita of him.....nahi tho mein hi banaoongi....gadha kahika.....emotional but wonderful chapter updt soon hun

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

OMG!!!! I feel like killing Arshikha & RV...especially RV...he is such a creep..😡😡

Yaar Neha....this part was full of heart breaks....All incidents were going against AVITA & even us.. 😭😭 😭

Poor AVITA..😭😭

When will they declare their feelings to each other..

But mindblowing update!! 👏👏

I am sure RV will do more creepiness in nxt part!! 😡

Plzz cont soon.. 😃

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