FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47

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NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Hey jo this part was awsome.....thoughthere was some problem with the font........Avita as usual rocks..........but Mr. Thakur how dare you hug someonelse...i'll give you sound thrashing nxt time you do it.....lol.........poor Arpi......but who the hell is in his arm..........waiting on tenterhooks for the next update

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

hey JO 🤗

Just love it and OMG!!!!!! you are so amazing writer 👏 👏 👏

Dang you portrayed the their emotions very well and you call me master in emotions while it's you who it is 😡 🤣
i am truly impressed and proud of you dear 👏 ⭐️ 👏

What a hug Joieeeee 😍 😍 😍

i know that girl is his former lover and she want's to come back his life but he is falling for Arpi..now the twist and turns...i am waiting for it and i will be the person to read it because i am gonna edit it

love ya 🤗

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago

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angili

@angili

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

omg this is mind blowing part i can not wait for next parts this marvelous 👏

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sharan

@danno

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

omgggggggggggg
this part is also too good
that girl must be her ex gf

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Hye jo,
i just loved this part so they started loving each other.
O i have involved a bit in your ff i can guess that girl avi's first love had returned but why she came back.

Waiting....to see next part.

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Amazing update Neha!!!!👏👏

It was really sweet..😳😳

Frm the fall..till..they hug...all was so cute!!!😍😍

Who was the girl who hugged Avi??😡😡
Am sure she is dat senior girl who broke his heart..🥺🥺

Waiting for nxt....

Plzz update soon..😃😃

Edited by jes_jade - 14 years ago

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PrashT

@PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Jo🤗🤗

Who is tht girl....😡

I think its Arshika😡 I dont want her to come between Avita 😡

They both are already falling for each other😳

Again Superb lines of Romeo- Juliet⭐️👏👏👏👏👏

I love this play😳

Update it soooooooooooooon..

Waiting fr next part😃

😡

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago

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jasveensokhi

@jasveensokhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

WOW JO ANOTHER VRY EXCELLENT PART BY U

LUVED ITTTTTTTTT😳

I REALY LIKE D WAY U PORTRAY D CHARACTER OF

AVI N ARPI U PUT LIFE IN D CHARACTERS N WHILE

READING I FEEL LIKE DAT I M SITTING N WATCHING

IT ON STAGE IN REALITY WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

U R AWESOME 👏

(n hey i edited mah first post on page 12😃)

Edited by jasveensokhi - 14 years ago

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Hye jo waiting dear

for the next part as there lot of suspense.

WAITING..........

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Here is precap hope you like it, as you all like previous ,😳

". He was completely amazed what going on there. Before he can get anything his father came to him and gives him a hug,

"Son what do you think we don't know what you want we can fulfill your all desires without saying, we are here for you, congratulations you are going to marry Miss Rai, but after completing Graduation."

Arshika-"Hey my sweet lil sis, so how are you feeling now tensed or excited they are agreed to your condition, you don't need to get engaged now they can wait till your exams

is this true or just Avdhesh's dream which he never realized but want to live it,

one suggestion dekhawon pe na jaao , apni akal lagao😉

some surprises or shocks😆😆😆

Edited by joliefille - 14 years ago