SS: Koi Apna Sa...Chapter 11 Pg-22 updtd - Page 9

Originally posted by: princessofkesar

mini is back wid bang! Shradha🤗finally you are here.I was getting a little worried when I didn't see you here.Now I am relieved.I missed you a lot Princess😭

lovel;y lovely chapter mini,

again a new concept, i loved it.

par kesu ko puri duniya mein sirf talli milli thi crush rakhne ke liye. hehehe chorry about that but I hope all your complaints will disappear after reading the future chapters😃

but i m happy that atleast talliji can support gullu in hostile house.

sr in sasural ! ab kya karein shaadi hi itni unconventional tareeke se hui hai toh SR bhi thoda different hona chahiye na😆

aab yeah ladka gharjamai banega ya talli dahej mein aayege ?nahiii...Talli aur dahej🤢

jo bhi ho , i m already hooked to this story.Thank you so much.Glad to see you here😃

n piyu lovely poster

Originally posted by: sauris

Sorry today no like button but yeah to aadat ban rahi hai ki main hi sabse pehle comment karne lagi hoon.Minzz fab chapter,ab ye dekna hai ki aage kya hoga,isliye jaldi se next chappi la

Originally posted by: kalika.j

Mini , for this wonderfull SS.

kalika

Originally posted by: nneeiill

mini both the chapters were really good.

dont have much time so only chota comment.

Originally posted by: without-fathom

Sorry about being terribly late Mini, but this and that held me up. awww Jzee no problem yaar🤗

Talking of. I think you always excel in showing transitions, and this is definitely not the first time I'm saying it. True😳The way you showed Kesar and Gulaal taking over the situation of being wed, and their first night interaction, conversation, and ultimate resting - the morning's changed nuance of awkward getting easily misconstrued, but never getting out of hand - I'm loving the egg shell walk between the two of them, because it's liberally treated with an intuitive compassion of the two of them have as individuals, and it seems with each other. While trying to comprehend things and gestures and reactions might confuse either or both of them, at a very subconscious level they seem to just get each other - which is such a wonderful feeling with someone you technically don't know so much, the feeling that you could, do, and would belong... Without needing logic to define why and how. awww it sounds so romantic.I loved the way you put it.This is exactly what I was trying to convey 😳

Kesar's room being "war zone" was typical and cute and I didn't worry about Soma turning red on GK, because he's just not a character without the largest heart and wisest head! =)) haan soma was practising his acting skills😆I enjoyed writing the part about Kesar's room.I had lot of fun😃

Enjoyed the updates much, and looking forward to next. Piyu - as always, great stuff with the posters and pictures chosen! 🤗 to you both!

Originally posted by: deb2002

Thank u so much for super long chappi Mini .🤗Loved it. OMG Kesar is a complan boy 🤣 but he loved to be so for Gulaal 😳. How cute r these two. Both are falling for each other but they didnt realize it fully yet and plz plz plz dont make them realize so soon Mini 😊. Thanks again for the lovely chappi and waiting for the next eagerly.

Originally posted by: sharmishta

Mini, Sharmishta ende kootugaari🤗

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awesome chappi... their intimate moment was sho rmntc... *blushing*... my dil goes hmmm...hehehe I am happy you liked it.I was a little nervous writing it woh bahut dino ke baad likh rahi hoon na😆

jst lved d sulky complan boy😉... so possessive abt wifey, na... yes he is very possessive about her😳

sorry 4 dis late cmmnt... am really busy... my students 😡... arrgh... drivng me nuts...🤔😆

awww you took time out of your busy day to read and comment.I am emotional now😭 aaja jhappi de🤗

waitn 4 nxt update with looots of romance...😳

for u

Originally posted by: MR21

Res 😳

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Mini 🤗...this is awesome chappie...Ramya🤗thank you😃

So kesar is a complain boy😆...that is too much to handle...ha ha...but i liked how he just accepted her teasing without getting angry on her...n then i liked how they r both comfortable with each other now...I am very happy that now gulaal got a family n their love which she always deserved but never got...awww I like all these awkward moments between them😉...wow they both r totally attracted towards each other...but yeh kya KMH talli😡...always ruins the moments...haan yaar at this stage KMH is needed but don't worry baad mein yeh problem nahi hogi😆So he is not being blind for his attraction on his wife...good n i like how he is trying to think abt this...so he is unable to see her crying...so cute na😳...n he is trying to make her happy...wow they will be going on bike...love it yaar...so gulaal is all tantrumy though she likes to go on bike...So vasant is here...did he have more role here in this story or he is just a guest appearance😕...he might reappear but not to worry 😳OMG he is totally jeolous😉...arey vasant is just talking to her n kesar ka yeh haal ho raha hai...I expected a kesar n gulaal date...par kya yaar u brought up a talli n gulaal date...arre Ramya yahaan toh yeh behenein hain yaar...they love each other a lot😆but its ok he did it for gulaal's happiness...wow what a great idea of telling a thank you from gulaal...loved it...I am happy you loved it

Mini...loved this long update...now desperately waiting for next one...update soon...

I will be posting the update soon.Hope you will like it😊

Originally posted by: enchanted23

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Aha! What a lovely start, rude awakening for dreamy Kesar'welcome to reality dude, ek mahine ke baad bhi dreamworld mein jee rahe ho..hahahaha'..but he does have way with words na'knows how to charm his ways with her NOW'awww Kesar'.of course Kesar ki deewani koi shaq😳

I loved reflective Gulaal, she is not only opening up and happy but is also more aware of her internal self, like discovering herself, she never had that chance before, she is perfectly blended into her new family with her new friend on voyage of discovering new her and this new her is demanding, self-assured, more assertive and wanting more from life something she will discover with time''.

This is exactly I wanted to show.I hope I can bring that out properly later on.

I loved how you described the nuance of her confused mind with being relieved about Kesar's indifference to that embarrassing moment but also same time disappointed of him being indifferent'I know this is not the end of that moment right?hehehe no,it is not😳

And then on to Kesar's trip of revelations, yes he had known her for about 4 years but only as Talli's sister a gal who he though he loved, a gal who could not have guessed his nervousness, a gal who never could read affection and love in his eyes, a gal he who he had not thought about even once since the day she walked into his life, she who looked so beautiful with her hair open, she who could blend with his family so easily, she who with her dazzling smile always mesmerised him, she who had a melodious voice and she who's eyes always lit up when he tuned up around her'.he was losing himself around her'awww you have described it so beautifully.I loved it

Ohhh the almost kiss description was so beautiful yaar loved it'I will await the completion without disturbances next time round'..and the way he pushes back his biggest news that he so wanted to share with her, the moment he sees her disturbed and distressed after that call with Talli, she is already starting to rule his heart and mind I guess'sigh will wait for the realization'.yep he hasn't realized it yet though the seeds of doubt have been sowed.He is confused about his feelings but he doesn't yet understand that what he feels for Gulaal is love...true love...the kind which only a lucky few get to experience😳

I loved how you described Gulaal's love for bike and freedom and thrill it offered through Kesar's eyes'it was spoke so much of their comfort level with each other, the slow but steady build of trust and understanding they had'beautiful'.Thank you😃

Aww I love jealous Kesu,and expressive at the same time trying to draw attention'aww so sweet'Kesar from the show in the bike scene was my inspiration😳Loved his surprise for her,he did that for her and only her'was a very nice gesture 'he understood her pain,her closeness to her sister and just gave her the best surprise he could'am looking forward to the next update Mini'please bring it soon'

I will post the update soon.Hope you will like it😊