SS: Koi Apna Sa...Chapter 11 Pg-22 updtd - Page 17

Originally posted by: nneeiill

hi mini Saamya🤗

wat a chappi..confession and chi ek saath...

totally loved it Thank you😳

omg ye vasant sharma...kesar ko chodo..mujhe hi bardasht nahi ho rehi thi gulaal's vasant jaap
aww i really felt bad...when kesar ditched his plan and dint go outside...

sachiii mujhe bhi likhte hue bardaasht nahi ho raha tha😆but I had to do it to bring out Kesarji's feelings😭

poor kesar ..i could relate to what he was going through...u described his jealousy and restlessness perfectly.. awww thank you so much
and on the other side..biwi ko pata hi nahi ..she was so lost in her own world...she dint had iota of doubt that vasant is the cause of all fiasco...but i loved how she was opening to kesar...

bechaari Gulaal...she thought that she had made her feelings for him perfectly clear and so she never thought about Vasant being the problem😭

and she had to miss the bus na...hahaha.varna humre kesar ji gussa kaise hote...gussa nahi hote tho confession kaisa hota..confession nahi tho chi kaisa hota.. sahi bola😆

btw was it last chappi ?

Actually no...I was planning to write a few more chapters

Originally posted by: MR21

res 😳

Mini 🤗...both confession n chii night ek hi chappie mein☺️...me loved it😳

Atlast gullu n kesar r happy after the conversation na...she is doing so many things which she never did before...she ignored him in the morning while she never did this any one before...kesar planning for some special date 😳...Vasant ka entry...kesar doesnot like him n more over the students think he is gullu's pati...n upar se she is very existed to tell abt vasant her college mate...did vasant liked her in college or what??? but kesar ka toh mood karaab kardiya na...woh toh date ka plan bhi cancel kardiya...like kesar i am liking how gulaal is sharing her thoughts to kesar but why it has to be vasant...ohh she admired vasant for being a guardian to Devika...but how can kesar accept her admiration for vasant...he is totally jealous now...n upar se dinner n she is totally talking to vasant...he will do such things na to get her attention...offo he is avoiding her n she is missing her kesar...n upar se usse vasant drop karega toh kesar is totally in angry mode na...usse ab baba ki dhaat padegi...at last he is opening up abt his jealous abt vasant na n in his anger he said what he should not n there he gets a tight SLAP...he realized his love for her when he thought of losing her n here she accepted her feelings for him...then ahem ahem n chii night bhi hogayaa...good na wait karne ki koi zaroorath nahi hai like in tv shows...i liked when he asked her permission to continue...atlast ab they r together n i am very very happy for that...

loved the chapter Piu...I am eagerly waiting for the next one now...do update soon...

Hehehe me late again but this time no apologies, kyunki tujhe pasand nahi…

Gulaal toh total goner na, she doesn't even realise how she has started exercising her right of having that undivided attention from him, his withdrawal even though within the boundaries they had defined earlier is not acceptable, her expectations are growing with her affection, her haq is being exerted so subtly unknown even to her….

Kesar on the other hand is still not clear about his growing jealousy and possessiveness is just part of his love, his sudden scowl the moment he sees her with Vasant, forgetting all about why he was waiting for her and getting all worked up shows this immature side of him that one can relate with …completely Kesarish…jumping to conclusions w/o giving anyone a chance to clarify things…

I loved that lil conversation in the car where Gulaal is opening up to Kesar,just conveys her growing comfort and trust in her best friend and Kesar though happy about this new found openness can't get over the fact that it was Vasant who had brought this on and not him…can't blame him really…

His attention grabbing technique by demanding that he is served vegetable was so cute,it not only signifies his need of acknowledgment of his presence from her but also depicts how ignorance from her is the last thing he will put up with….nicely done…

And then finally his rant,jo dil mein wohi jubaan pe…after all this is Kesar,who can never hide anything that's troubling him for long…downright honest even at the cost of being slapped around and then the realization of what he accused her off…very well written this part..beautiful…and then the amzing confession from Gulaal…wow..wonderful..she was hurt,he was not only questioning her affection but also character…he was the only one she trusted in all these years and he was accusing her of infidelity….but you know what I liked about it all instead of sulking and keeping all within her like she would have done otherwise his honesty and possessiveness made her open up and finally confess….and the rest well who toh hona hi tha….

Thankyou for a lovely update Mini,please bring on the new chapter really quickly…a big hug for a wonderful update