SS: 'Woh Kaun Hai...??' CHAPTER 4 PAGE 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys, how r u all? main phir agayi 😆 n this time i have tried to write a SS, look what idea have come into my mind 😲 per my sweet hearts k bohot insist karne pe i thought to give it a try so here i bring u a SS, "Woh Kaun Hai...???" plz comment n tell me hows this n should i continue or should i stop??

Heres the introductory first short chapter 😊
(Poster By Meri pyari... Piyu Mhaari 🤗)
(Poster By Me... Kiran 😊)
Chapter 1:

"Hey Gulaal !!!! Ready kya?? Is baar toh its going to be fun yaar, spooky places n haunted mansions, teri toh nikal pari gulaal, tujhe toh bohot pasand hai na yeh sab kuch, ohh but I m afraid" said Bulbul.

A girl with long silky black hairs, wearing jeans n top n a pretty jacket on it, turned around to face bulbul:

"Dar... hahaha dar ka word gulaal ki dictionary men nahi hai bulbul, u see dar bhi gulaal ka naam sun k darta hoga, u never know gulaal kab kya kar jaye toh these mansions etc should be afraid of me, n when gulaal is here no fear, my sweetheart dear hehehe"

Bulbul: "Haan haan tu toh jese exorcist hai na, sab aatmaon ko botal men band kar k jaib men rakh legi"

Gulaal: "Shut up bulbul, daikh main yeh nahi kehti k aatmaen etc nahi hotein per see sab ka apna place hai is duniya men, jab tak hum unhe tang nahi kartay, who hamen kyun tang karen geen, so v shouldn't be afraid of them like this"

Bulbul: "Per gulaal, is baar research men toh who museum aya hai na... wohi jis k baray men kehtay hain k wahan pe vampires k coffins etc hen, people have preserved them n logon k liye museum men rakha lekin wahan jo raat ko jaaye who toh wapas nahi aata"

Gulaal: "Bulbul yeh vampires etc ko tu aaj k zamane men kahan se k agayi hai, aaj kal aisa kuch nahi hota, yeh toh bas fantasy world ki stories hen, bachon ko daraya jaata hai is se aur... hey..."

They both jumped when a hand came from behind n was put on bulbul's shoulder n she yelled loudly.

"Hahahahahaha hamesha ki darpok, dar gayi na, I knew k tum log us new museum research se related baat kar rahay hoge"

Bulbul: "Dhaani tu pagal hai kya, haan darti hun main toh aisay daraye gi tu mujhay, idiot stupid, I m going huh"

Dhani: "Aray ruk na, sun toh sahi, I was joking baba, sorryyy, meri maa rukkk" n she went after bulbul to convince her that she was joking.

While here gulaal standing in her class smiled n moved her head to n fro, "yeh nahi sudharne waalen, per acha hai jab gulaal nahi sudharti toh us ki friends kyun sudhren, hmmm toh new museum here I come, lets see tumharay baray men stories kon phela raha hai, my dear museum no fear when gulaal is here... " n then more loudly she said... "Aarahi hoon mainnn"

While far away in some huge mansion, a window opened with a jerk due to the wind n the wind blew inside, a person opened his eyes, both totally red, he went towards the window n being very surprised he thought,

"Jo itne saalon men nahi hua, who aaj phir se kyun? Hazaron saal aur kuch nahi lekin 22 saal pehle bhi aisay hi laga tha, aaj 22 saal baad phir wohi sab mehsoos ho raha hai, jese koi kuch keh raha hai, yeh hawaen shayad mujh tak koi baat puhanchana chahti hen... Lekin kya...??" N he quietly shut the window again.

Chapter Index:

Chapter 1 (Page 1): Look above 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res me first😳

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YEAY O meri pyari sunehri Kiran..🤗

Tu aaa gayi and that too WITH A HUGE BANG😆

OK Kiruuu ishtyle ka start.Lubbed bindaas and fearless Gullu..😆Awwiiieee She is one strong woman and Wo kaun hai jisne hawa k jhonke ke saath apni ankhein kholi bata bata..☺️

I want update bahut jaldi jaldi🤗Lubbb you and thank you so much for writing this..lubb ya😳

Edited by manzilmukul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeahhh Kiran's back... ...with a vampire SS
Is it about vampires or ghosts???

I lubb that Kescula's (*Chudail style*) entry

Please update ur next chappi ASAP 😳




Edited by Geeshani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haila hamra much awaited dracula / vampire ss aa gaya ee toh kescula ki jai ho kya aankh kholi hai wo bhi red 😆nice start kirru and gullu ka character sounds very interesting and kesu ka toh TRP bohot zyada hai , first chappi is nice , next chappin update kar jaldiii suspense nahi saha jata 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@kiran,


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kalika.







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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kiran🤗you are back and what a start.so completely different😃
Kesar...ek vampire hai😳well I do love vampiric prem kahaaniyaan.ajeeb sa lagaav hai😆
so count me in😃

A dhamaakedaar start.I loved it.Please continue.looking forward to the next update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res 😊

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Kiran 🤗...wow..what a dhamaake dhaar start hai...looking forward for the next chapter...do update soon...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Kiranwa🤗 with vampire story ohh la la😳

Kya start hai Gulaal jaise thi show main start main bindaas aur nidar aur tune Kesu ko vampire banaya😆 chalo I am looking forward to love story with a twist

Jaldi update karna please😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A GK Vampire love story 😲 To be honest, I'm not a fan of this genre - at all - but GK in such theme... this I have to see!
Update soon Keero - and yayy, you're back 🤗

xx
JZee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh teri yeh kab hua...oh well, ab hoh hi gaya, then i cant wait..😃
Uftt yeh thoda sa scary type lag raha hai but very different, im sitting awaiting a very interesting read :)..

And yeah a big hug Kiran🤗, is your grandmother feeling better :D.

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