New OS:A Mother's Dilemma updt Pg-4

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: MR21
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Wow...Mini n Aditi 🤗...excellent yaar 👏...fab analysis from kesar n gulaal POV...gulaal convo with vasant is very emotional 😭...n kesar ka unanswered questions..me again emotional 😭😭
Now me demand more OS on kesar-gulaal scenes 😳...jaldi se next OS on some other scene update karo 😍

Ramya🤗thank you so much.very happy that you enjoyed it😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sauris
Mini really well written,di'nt want it to end

Sauris,thank you yaar but this was a joint effort.so credit goes to Aditi too.

She has written Kesarji's POV😃

I am so glad that you enjoyed it.Thanks for the support🤗

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: enchanted23
Thanks my pagal partner in crime😆 for the credit but honestly it was your idea so I just did what you requested me to I hope we can continue this pagalpan for sometime to come...😉

Aditi,come on yaar,you have expressed Kesar's feelings so beautifully👏I would have never been able to do that.well I would definitely like to continue.It was fun working with you😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: arti07
beautiful os minizz so she running away coz she cant take his emotional atyachar on her and his world is tops and turvy now bacha will never sudhrofy until and unless gulaal do something galoool kesar remain kesar bacha hatao apna kesar mode and now come to kesudi mod biwi 9-2-11 ho gayi

and now i loved his inner conflict seems like we all know kesar so well his fist his rage his dilemma was pefectly protrayed loved it minizz i hope u come up with more os

Arti🤗thank you so much yaar but the credit for the beautiful,intense portrayal of Kesar's anger and dilemma goes to Aditi😳I agree she did a fab job na😃

I am so glad that you liked the OS

and I will definitely let you know if we come with new ones😊

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

unresed on page 1😛

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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EXOL

@EXOL

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

that was very will written...in show i guess we got some of the feeling of kesar coming thru his letters but gulaal's feeling abt kesar's rude behaviour were not explicitly shown...so it was nice reading that part...

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

updated my comment on page 1 😊

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

So when I read the note in the beginning for some reason I thought I was going to get two separate parts, on the same scene, one as Kesar's POV, and the other as Gulaal's. But I see you both merged it as one? A good read anyway 👏

Mini - or was it you Aditi? - one of you said something about wondering, when the show was on air, what would have happened if Gulaal really had relented and decided to stay away from Kesar according to his wish. And I see you explored that possibility. It was touching to read their respective takes - and the scene you chose to continue from is such a potential GK moment to chose for continuation, with a little alteration. Gulaal hearing that "ehsaan" statement should have been such a blow to her... and to think Kesar - even at his worst - never really thought of anything in the "ehsaan" sense, but only said it to PB as a counter in the heat of being confronted.

Anyway, I clipped the one bit I especially like about that scene and uploaded here, just for the heck.

And yes, if you're going to count votes, I vote in on you both getting together to tweak around more scenes and write them down! 👍🏼

Here goes the scene:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CaCVl1RNObA[/YOUTUBE]

[3:18 - 3:23 gives me goosebumps everytime I see this scene! That look they share, and the way he brushes past her gruffly, right after that encounter on the chatt... sigh. GK are another deal altogether.]

Thanks for writing this one Mini and Aditi - brought back yet another powerful GK scene to life, with your own twist!

JZee

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Jzee,I had asked this question in one of your threads yaar.What would have Kesar done if Gulaal had stayed away from him?Somehow that "ehsaan"dialogue always brings a lump to my throat.I always wondered what if Gulaal heard that,what would be her reaction😭

Thank you so much for your lovely comment and I do love that scene.Neil's expressions-brilliant👏

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SRJKiShraddha

@SRJKiShraddha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Hi mini loved it totally. Purani yaadein taaza hogayi :-)
i have sum scenes of kes-gul in 3gp format in my cell, which i watch wen i m bored or wen i feel low. One of the clip is of this scene .
Last para was so emotional, it brought tears in my eyes:-(
keep up the gud work of writing such beautifull os.
Thank u aditi , for helping my frn :-)

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