FF:Seducing MR.KESAR-Chapter16 updatd pg 29

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Ayushi

@Ayushii_Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

😊sorry if i have forgot to pm any one...waiting impationtely for ur comments...😊

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Raunika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

really romantic updates.just caught up with them

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SHARMISHTA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

hi yaar, luvd their chii scenes.. good going... updte soon,

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Angel 🤗..sorry dear,..mein kuch dino ke liye yahaan nahin aa payi and now only I have started to unres ...read both the chapters and good going dear👍🏼...still the mystery is there about Kesar and also the real intention of Gulaal too...and its quite interesting to read their interactions in the midst of all these mysteries...muje lagtha hein ki Gulaal is falling for him from Mount Everest 😆..and the war between her logics and heart😳..Kesar really dont want to lose her and she is feeling guilt on seeing his trust on her .I guess she is having a hard time...

Tip Tip barsa paani ws really very romantic😳...Waiting for the update dear.

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minizz

@minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Ayushi,I am still blushing yaar😳quite romantic.Do update soon😊

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Aditi Mehta

@enchanted23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Ayushi, I am so sorry yaar , I completely forgot I reserved this, cause I didn't get to reading your 9th chappie either, I know I am really bad I will unres for both chappies tonight, Ek baar maafi daydo yaar🤗

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MR21

@MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Ayushi...me all blushing now...do update soon dear...

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canuck-umz

@canuck-umz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Nice to read something so romantic since these days the romance is missing from the shows I watch. Thank-you for the wonderful update.

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Ayushi

@Ayushii_Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: rsk16
really romantic updates thanx dear.just caught up with themso nice of u dear

hope u'll like the nxt chappii also...keep reading😃

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Aditi Mehta

@enchanted23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Ok Ayushi,I have finally got around reading last two chappies and both were really lovely, one had a depth and intensity other was amazingly romantic.

Gulaal is slowly but surely falling in love and have started realising the difference between what she feels for Vasant to what she feels for Kesar,she is trying to get away from this reality by trying to convince herself that it's all illusion created by Kesar but in her heart she knows the truth and is trying to run away from the same, You portrayed this brilliantly...

Vasant's mysterious I am going to reserve my judgement on him,he looks at acts very sly but this again can be due to my biased feelings for Kesar

Coming to 10th chapter I was pleasantly surprised to find Gulaal at her seducing best and that almost kiss, sigh! I wish you wouldn't have stopped there,ek kiss ho jane dena chahiye tha...yeah we all paapi here,so that's bwhat everyone will want...dekhna everyone will second me...

Ab jaldi se update kar,can't wait...

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