FF:Seducing MR.KESAR-Chapter16 updatd pg 29 - Page 12

Ayushi Dear...what to say??? it's just suuuperb yaar... 👏 when i have started reading the 1st chappi i really did not liked it so much 😔 because that was sooo filmy but after reading all chappis i really became fan of your this ff 👍🏼 ..so romantic and so passionate ff ☺️ ...but vassy sounds cruel kind of 😲 ...but loved the characters of kesar Rai and Gulal Sharma.. 😉...in total it's just awesomne 😆...waiting for the next chappi...update it soon dearie...😍

Originally posted by: canuck-umz

Nice to read something so romantic since these days the romance is missing from the shows I watch. Thank-you for the wonderful update thanx dear nd ur always welcome😊.

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Ok Ayushi,I have finally got around reading last two chappies and both were really lovely, one had a depth and intensity other was amazingly romantic.thanxxx alooot dear aditi

Gulaal is slowly but surely falling in love and have started realising the difference between what she feels for Vasant to what she feels for Kesar,she is trying to get away from this reality by trying to convince herself that it's all illusion created by Kesar but in her heart she knows the truth and is trying to run away from the same, You portrayed this brilliantly...nd u describe it more beautiful than me...

Vasant's mysterious I am going to reserve my judgement on him,he looks at acts very sly but this again can be due to my biased feelings for Kesar 🤔emm

Coming to 10th chapter I was pleasantly surprised to find Gulaal at her seducing best and that almost kiss, sigh! I wish you wouldn't have stopped there,ek kiss ho jane dena chahiye tha..realy???i thought bache se paaap karwane k jurm mein kahi tum log jail na krado😆yeah we all paapi here,so that's bwhat everyone will want...dekhna everyone will second me...chalo then ok...aagey dhayan rakhungii

Ab jaldi se update kar,can't wait...aww love u dear

Originally posted by: Piyalibose4u

Ayushi Dear...what to say??? it's just suuuperb yaar... 👏 when i have started reading the 1st chappi i really did not liked it so much 😔 hmm yar actually it is realy my first attempt new new reader thi to bt dekh ab improvment aai hai na😉 because that was sooo filmy but after reading all chappis i really became fan of your this ff 👍🏼 😳 aww thanx..so romantic and so passionate ff ☺️ ahan😃 ...but vassy sounds cruel kind of 😲 .yahi to sara suspence hai..but loved the characters of kesar Rai and Gulal Sharma.. 😉...in total it's just awesomne 😆so plz keep reading...waiting for the next chappi...update it soon dearie...😍 ok dear love u

FOR YOU DEAR...🤗❤️ heart nd huge accepted😳

Originally posted by: alanta

res😳

Originally posted by: minizz

Ayushi,I am still blushing yaar😳 ohoo!quite romantic.Do update soon😊

Originally posted by: Angle_

waitng for ur edit...😃

Originally posted by: alanta

Angel 🤗..sorry dear,..mein kuch dino ke liye yahaan nahin aa payi and now only I have started to unres han yar meine tere comment ko boht miss kia😛...read both the chapters and good going dear👍🏼..aww thanx yar.still the mystery is there about Kesar and also the real intention of Gulaal too...and its quite interesting to read their interactions in the midst of all these mysteries...muje lagtha hein ki Gulaal is falling for him from Mount Everest 😆 sahi kaha yar😆..and the war between her logics and heart😳 bechali pagal hi hojayegi..Kesar really dont want to lose her and she is feeling guilt on seeing his trust on her .I guess she is having a hard time...hmm let see kya karega kesu iska jab pata chalega

Tip Tip barsa paani ws really very romantic😳...Waiting for the update dear.keep reading dear 😃

Originally posted by: Angle_

keep reading 😊dear...apna naam to bata naa!!