Story:Gulsar_If silence could ever speak linkspg1 - Page 11

Originally posted by: minizz

Alanta😃

loved the update so much.so now finally everyone has come to know who Gulaal is. Hope Dushyant will not create any trouble.I don't trust him too much.As of now he is ok.loved the scene between Gulaal, Rewa and Kesar in the background.and Gulaal tho flirting mein expert hain.the situation remided me of the song "kahin pe nigaahen kahin pe ishaara".this is my fav in this chapter.I always love sulky Gulaal and here too she was so adorable.Rewa is cute too.loved the early morning scene a lot.I will also ask the same question "Kesar kyun tang kar rahe ho"😆😳now the next one should be a big one ok.I enjoyed this one a lot.looking forward to the next😊

Originally posted by: MR21

Alanta...great that every one come to know about her...ek tension toh ab nahi hai...

also liked how MB, pB n reva are with her n just hope they will be with gulaal like this only.,..

Loved the scene where gulaal is talking to reva but asking kesar who is in background...n also his cute sa sorry...

Morning scene was lovely...ab kesar ka asar hi kuch aisa hai ki day dreaming kar rahi hai...

koun aaya hai...please say kesar...me waiting for some good kesar n gulaal scenes...

do we any problem with dushy kya... n whr is vasant...

update soon dear n also badaa waala...

Originally posted by: enchanted23

So Nirja becomes Gulaal for everyone , except for the one who knew this all along from the first time their eyes met, only taking time to accept and admit the same.

I like the fact that Gulaal was not the one to reveal her identity and it came from MB's friend just shows how sensitive and caring she is about this family and the relationship between both these families. I hope Dushyant has just friendship in his mind as Gulaal to is so much in love with this bachpan ka friend'

The convo with Reva addressing Kesar was brilliantly written, Sulking and accusing Gulaal is quite adorable along with silent and guilt ridden sorry of Kesar,Ahh these two doesn't need words for conversation na, so in sync with each other'

This was another lovely update Alanta🤗,Can I request another one soon please?

Originally posted by: Keithuu

alanta..lubbd all the chappies yaar...😃

sorry..itne din i cudnt comment😭

ab jaldi next part la...😳

ye tere liye...

Originally posted by: Angle_

Awesome FF Alanta!!👏I realy love the way u r writng.keep going dear😊😊!!

Originally posted by: sauris

alanta,beautiful chotu chappi ,par ab bada chappi leke aa jisme bahut saraaa kesgul scenes ho,waiting for your update

Originally posted by: minizz

Alanta🤗awww thanks yaar.loved the update.but MB😡what are you doing?aisa koi karta hai but bechara MB can't blame him too as he doesn't know the choti-badi lovestory of Kesar-Gulaal.now Gulaal is feeling the pressure😭but yeh kya Dushyant tho hero nikla.I was doubting him unnecessarily-sorry Dushyant,you are a great friend but what to do your friend is in Galool mode so uske bheje mein tho kuch ghusega nahi.loved Dushyant's dialogue "hamara dil humein aksar chot pahuncha sakta hai lekin kabhi dhokha nahi deta".aaahhh Galool listen to your wise friend cause there are three lives at stake here.

enjoyed this chapter a lot so is this the reason behind Kesar's naaraazgi😭please update soon otherwise the suspense will prove detrimental to my health😆

Originally posted by: MR21

Alanta...this is not fare yaar...gulaal in galool mode...n shock yeh hai ki dushy is very sensible here...he is apt to the point that how can she spoil vasants life...if she dont want to marry kesar then let it be..but can she spoil some ones life only to give happiness which will never last forever...

why cant she tell she will be this family DIL but wife of kesar , her childhood love...

Ohh...with is becoming very interesting now...looking forward to kesars reaction n i knew the next chapters will be a bit emotional na...update soon...