FF '(1) Unread Message' chapter 24 pg 58

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

@harrypotter OMG im blushing like hell. I feel so flattered, sure i will pm you😃

oh thanks 😃 so sweet of you 😊 cvs bought unique concept on tv so nicely. it's very difficult to write different FF for that yaar u r adventurous re keep going i like ur ideas n guts 😊
dear pls takecare of urself if u blush like hell wat happen to us so many series yet to come 😳😎

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#72

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

@harrypotter OMG im blushing like hell. I feel so flattered, sure i will pm you😃

HP SUCKS. :P

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Originally posted by: CertifiedBummer

HP SUCKS. :P

😲😲😲😲 You dont like Hp.

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snehasri

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Posted: 13 years ago

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meri ek hi khwaish thi ki ffs lamba kyo nahi itna jaldi kyo khatam ho rahi hi kaash... ye kabhi khatam na ho te tum likhtiii jao my padhti jauooo jaldi lana next chapi

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#75

mein ne unres kardiya hai in pg-8

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#76

Originally posted by: MR21
res 😃

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Tu next chappie lekhe aagayee🤗...
me liked kesar's concern for gulaal😳...gullu ko toh kesar ke bhare mein baat karne ka option hi nahi mila...kya musibath hai yaar..dad ki health aisi time pe kyun bhigad jaathi hai...kesar thinking that gulaal sirf uski hai😳..tum aisi hi lage raho...gulaal ko kabhi kisi aur ke nahi hone dena...ohhh i dont like this vassy🤢...vassy ko gulaal se shaadi karni nahi chaahiye...idiot shaadi mom ke liye karraha hai..kitna selfish hai...kesar kitna cute hai😳...OMG what was that message from gulaal😡...good that kesar determined that he will never ever let it happen like that😳...

LOved the suspense yaar...waiting for the next chappie...update soon😍

Thanks alot dear😃. Yeah yeh Vasant thora sa horrible hai😕 but kesar is sweet enough so😆.

Will update soon.

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#77

Originally posted by: snehasri
meri ek hi khwaish thi ki ffs lamba kyo nahi itna jaldi kyo khatam ho rahi hi kaash... ye kabhi khatam na ho te tum likhtiii jao my padhti jauooo jaldi lana next chapi

ahahahah sure if you all keep liking i will not stop, i love writing😃.

Thanks for liking😊.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Yaar jaldi se next lambi chappi post kar

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

chapter seven

Gulaal sat on her bed thinking, she had sent him an email saying those word's it troubled her in saying but it had to be done she thought, wiping the tear's that were flowing from her eyes. suddenly a noise came from the balcony, Gulaal ran to the balcony and opened the door's, yahan toh koi bhi nahi hai she thought, toh yeh awaaz kaisi, sudddenly something grabbed her from the waist, ahhh, "chup kar, main hoon" she stared horrified for standing there, was none other than kesar."tu yahan kya kar raha hai", and she tried to release herself from his grip. "koi aa jay ga, tu please jaa, tujhe yahan nahi hona chahiye.

"Tum aisa kaise kar sakti hoh and he pulled her closer still, "tum meri hoh, Paanch mahiney, hum baate karte rahe aur ab tum meri zindagi ka aisa hisa ban gayi hoh gulaal.

she stared into his eyes, wanting to break down in his arms, where there was the safety and contemplation she needed. But the image of her father came into her mind, he was so weak.

"Nahi kesar, yeh Paanch mahiney kuch bhi nahi teh, main toh tumhare saath aise hi ek dost ki taara bateein karti rahi, aur tum pata nahi kya samjhte gaye". she looked down not meeting his eyes.

"accha toh aisi baat hai, tum aisa kaise keh sakti hoh gulaal, main tumse pyaar karta hoon".

"tu pagal hogaya hai kesar, door hoja mujse, yeh pyaar nahi hai, paanch mahino mein pyaar nahi hoh jaata, aur phir main toh tujhe theek se jaanti bhi nahi".

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Kesar stared at her horrified, "accha theek hai, toh jab mein tujhe aise choota hoon, toh tujhe kuch nahi hota" and he pulled her close, so close they could feel each other's breath, he nuzzled his face into her hair.

"n...n...nahi mujhe kuch nahi hota" and she pushed him way," tujhe mujse bhi zyaada acchi ladki mil jay gi Kesar aur kal mujhe ladke vaale dekhne ke liye aa rahe hain aur mere hone waale pati bohot hi paise waala hai, main uske saath hi rahungi, ab tu jaa and with that she went inside and closed the balcony doors.

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Gulaal sat on her bed and broke down, how could she say those harsh words to him, she loved him like crazy and still she hurt him so badly.

Hota hai she thought, jab tu mujhe aisa pakarta hai, toh mujhe bohot kuch hot hai. and tears stared flowing from her eyes.

NEXT MORNING.

"vaah gulaal kitani sundar lag rahi hai, nazar na lag jaaye, meri beti koh" and poonam applied the black dot on her." ab main neeche ja rahi hoon, jab main kahongi, toh Janvi aur Avantika tum isse neeche le kar aana" and with that she left.

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Vasant looked up and saw her coming down in a traditional lehenga, she was nothing special, just a ordinary looking girl.

"Nirja beta, yeh hai Vasant aur Vasant yeh meri beti Nirja, hum pyaar se isse Gulaal pukarte hain".

Edited by rimjhim1 - 13 years ago

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

res😃

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rimjhim🤗...me liked the chappie very much...Kesar has come to see her at her house😳...gulaal telling its only dosti😲...ohh her lame excuses😆...he so knew abt them😉..he is damn sure that she loves him na...ohh me dont want them to be separated😭...n gulaal n vassy ka introduction...

me waiting to knew what will happen next...bas tu vassy aur gullu ka shaadi math hone dena😡...uss idiot toh sirf mom ke liye shaadi karraha hai🤢...gullu will not be happy with him n that too in front of kesar😭...

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