FF '(1) Unread Message' chapter 24 pg 58 - Page 35

just finished reading it.nice chapter.Saru Fui appears to be a kind,positive character.hope she remains that way.and her scene with Talli was so funny.I hope Gulaal tells Kesar what his mother and others are planning.the party scene was really nice.great update.looking forward to the next one.

note: ok guys maine decide kar liya hai.

Originally posted by: minizz

just finished reading it.nice chapter.Saru Fui appears to be a kind,positive character.hope she remains that way.and her scene with Talli was so funny.I hope Gulaal tells Kesar what his mother and others are planning.the party scene was really nice.great update.looking forward to the next one.

I forgot to add - that small mithai scene between Kesar and Gulaal was very cute.

Thanks for liking. :)

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

note: ok guys maine decide kar liya hai.

will hopefully end this FF tommorow or the day after.

Im in college and i really enjoy creative writing, lekin blind person ko bhi nazar aa raha hai, ke this stupid story isn't going far.

so just thought i will tell u guys :).

Pagal ho gayi hai kya,itne jaldi khatam karnr ka sochne bhi mat.Really your ff is very interesting so plz continue.Dimag me ayse fithur mat la ki tu acha nahi likh rahi ha

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

Thanks for liking. :)

will update soon, ready to end it now. :)

Originally posted by: sauris

Pagal ho gayi hai kya,itne jaldi khatam karnr ka sochne bhi mat.Really your ff is very interesting so plz continue.Dimag me ayse fithur mat la ki tu acha nahi likh rahi ha

No yaar,no one said nothing, its just this concept is becoming a little boring, i want to try something new😃

Originally posted by: minizz

but why?please continue for a few more chapters.there's so much left to happen.don't end it so soon.😭😭

Dont worry, i will try and do full justice to the end, maybe expand it into a few chapters😃.

where is chii...kanha hai kanha hai kanha hai😭😭😭😭

Originally posted by: arti07

where is chii...kanha hai kanha hai kanha hai😭😭😭😭

Arti im sorry yaar.

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

note: ok guys maine decide kar liya hai.

will hopefully end this FF tommorow or the day after.

Im in college and i really enjoy creative writing, lekin blind person ko bhi nazar aa raha hai, ke this stupid story isn't going far.

so just thought i will tell u guys :).