FF '(1) Unread Message' chapter 24 pg 58

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: PKYEK12
ok i really don't like Vasant right now! all this happened because of him!! Greedy so an so! poor gulaal and poonam..ab kya hoga

great updates, feel like dancing, read 2 whole chapi's! but i want to cry too!

ahaaha Vasant is proper evil.

thank you😃.

arrey why do you wanna cry?😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: MR21
me so late..res😭

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nice chappie rimjhim...so both kesar n gulaal came to knew abt the truth...now gulaal is in kesar's house..seems like gulaal is in ostrich mode now...just hope everything goes well with kesar n gulaal..

Waiting for next badawaala chappie!!!

Thanks for liking Ramya 😃.

will update soon😊.

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

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chapter 11

Gulaal took the glass out his hand and turned to face him.

"thank you".

he just looked at her with pained eyes, kesar could not believe whose life his brother had spoilt, the girl he loved the most in the world.

"im sorry gulaal, im really sorry".

she turned away and poured herself the glass of water.

"main kya karoon, agar mujhe pata hota ke voh tum thi toh main vasant baa ko aisa kabhi nahi karne deta, mujhe sach mein kuch nahi pata tha...aur tumhare papa, gulaal im really sorry".

tears slid down her eyes as she thought of her father, he made her put the glass down and pulled her close, "shhh sab theek hojay ga".

gulaal had no energy left to react, she just put her head against him and cried, all the sorrow that been she had been hiding in her, she let it out. he consoled her as she wept.

when she had regained control she gently moved away from him, he stared at her, tears stained all over her face, she looked so hurt, he wanted to find vasant baa and punch his face out.

why did this have to happen to her and without thinking he pulled her close and planted a soft kiss on her forehead.

gulaal stared at him unable to believe what he had just done, "teri himmat bhi kaise hui."

"im sorry gulaal main.:

"bas mujhe kuch nahi suna" all she really wanted to do was let him hold her and never let her go but she thought of her mother and how she needed her support much more and how she would never accept her being with kesar. "mere paas aane ki koshish bhi mat karna, jiska bhai aise hoga, voh khud kaisa hoga" and with that she ran out of the kitchen.

kesar looked after her hurt,unable to believe what she had just said.

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kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

aray REStatement for two chapis 😃

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Keithuu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Mera bhi restaurant khula hai...😛

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MR21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

res😊

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rimjhim🤗...good to see that he can understand her situation n plight...n the way he consoled her...she really need that support from him as she cant get that from her mother...as her mother herself is very much in pain...loved how he thought of his brother...i just hope one fine day that happens😉...oye kissy kardiya😳...abey aisa koi kartha hai kya..ab dekh tujpe bharaskar chaaliee gayee na..me felt bad for kesar..vassy jo galti kiya hai...why gulaal compared that vassy to kesar...me feeling bad for both now😭...

me need next chappie jaldi😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

lovely chapii rimjhim loved the push pull 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

lovely chapi yaar i loved how she felt so comfert with kesar

door mat kar na kesar ko apne aap se😒

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: MR21
res😊

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rimjhim🤗...good to see that he can understand her situation n plight...n the way he consoled her...she really need that support from him as she cant get that from her mother...as her mother herself is very much in pain...loved how he thought of his brother...i just hope one fine day that happens😉...oye kissy kardiya😳...abey aisa koi kartha hai kya..ab dekh tujpe bharaskar chaaliee gayee na..me felt bad for kesar..vassy jo galti kiya hai...why gulaal compared that vassy to kesar...me feeling bad for both now😭...

me need next chappie jaldi😍

Thank you so so much for liking :D

will update soon😃