FF: Do Lafzon mein ye bayaan na ho paaye Ch39Pg120 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Keithuu

Prachurya...loved it...😳awesome start...pls continue...n next chappi jaldi la...cant wait...😳

Thnx Kirti. Will try to bring in the chappies as soon as possible

Originally posted by: Geeshani

It's a nice chappi...Thanks Prachurya


pls continue ur ff 😊

Thnx Geesh. I will try my best.

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Ya hoo...dhan ta na...kya chappi hai...Continue kar warna main..ghatiya shayari se tera thread sad dungi...Yipeee

Ohh...I am a fan of ur ghatiya shayari...bring dem on anytime. Eagerly waiting ur next chappie

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Omg Prachurya...kya chappiii likha hai...beautiful...kya starting hai...mindblowing...please...continue...
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Thnx so much for ur encouragement

QUOTE=bioinfo]haila ek aur ff, lagta hai upar wala humpar meherban hai😃, darling pls continue, tera to 1st chappi hi dhansu hai, agey ka soch ke to mere kaan khade ho gaye hain😆pls pls continue kar and next chappi jaldi lana warna mere ander ka janwar shayar jag jaega and i'll join piyu and aartis pakau shayar club😆
I enjoy ur shayaaris. Waise itni mehnat krne ki zaroorat nahi, I m working on the next chappies. Thnx for ur encouragement.

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Yayyy and another one!

Please do continue by all means - the introduction sounds engaging and intriguing enough! 👍🏼
Oh Jzee...u reading this. I am fan of ur writing especially FD. It is nowhere near ur quality bt m happy dat u reading it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Im so glad you continued! This ff just keeps getting better and better. Cant wait for the next ch. Post soon! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehasri

it is very very good👏👏👏 plz continue

can any one tell what ff means
way the u wrote i imagining that how neil and manasi act on this ff

thnx. Neil and Mansi are also embedded in my mind when I am writing. FF means fan fiction- basically a fiction written by a fan of a show consisting of the same characters and some fictious of their own.

Originally posted by: VJ-LNMDJ

Nice one , good to see GK in action again !

Please make this a happy FF cant take too much pain anymore..

VJ

P.S. I love the title you gave !

Thnx for appreciating. But thoda rona dhona toh hoga hi after all GK ki kahaani hai. Glad dat u liked the title

Originally posted by: -Srushti-

Oho to Banda Phoren return hai iss baar.! Give him some nice shoes ha Prachu...gadha City se toh bade stupid shoes utha ke laya tha...I loved their convo!! goody good!!
and yes...congo shongo on your FF...wonderful ..we can now keep this forum alive...
You, That Bhajiyawali and my PIG..are doing a wonderful job👏

Sirf do saal k liye gaya tha Kesu, but still mitti se jooda hua hai. Thnx for ur appreciation.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: alanta

prachuriya sounds amazing yaar, and thank you so much for bringing an FF. please continue

yeah always wanted to write but I guess der aaye durust aaye

Originally posted by: nneeiill

wow parachurya..that was really awesome

waiting for the next chappii...


Thnx and new chappie updated!

Originally posted by: CertifiedBummer

Woah, loved it! Deffo continue this!

Thnx! Will deffo continue.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shk281

Im so glad you continued! This ff just keeps getting better and better. Cant wait for the next ch. Post soon! 😃

Thnx! I will try and post as soon as possible.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

@Prachurya
Nic chappiii...😃
Full of emotions...
Mai kya bolu kuch samajh nai aa raha...tu toh arti aur piu se bhi fast nikli...2nd chappiii me hi vasant ko upper bhej dia...
good going yaar...😃
Mast re...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really unexpected...Revji too died...

interesting build up

good job prachurya

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..good chappie..prachurya..😃loved d way..u connected both d families..n d marriage..thing...n dis is so convincing..angle...that vassy n revji died in an attack...n kesu injured..😭loved d chappie prachurya..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow and the tragedy strikes! I wonder if the accident was just fateful - or there is going to be history to it? Was Giga on the bus? Like he escaped unharmed? That's just my bubbling curiosity - post up soon prachurya! The plot is well paced in 2 chapters already!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg...parchuyra...vasant and revji died.. really feeling sad ...dunno y but i feel connected with vasant also...he was such a good man... .what a drastic tragedy but is there any mystery behind this acident or was just victim of destiny????...thankk god kesar is saved... every dark cloud has silver linning... waiting for the silver linning in the next chapii 😳

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