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Posted: 14 years ago
omg 2 chapii in one day thats a delight but bad luck mere mid term next week schedule ho rahe hain...to mujhe phir se boring se padhai karni padti hai...i hate it...y dont they include gulaal in the course...they can include romeo juliet sir dard romance but not gulsar highly unfair
ayways chapii 23 was so refreshing to see gullu subconcsiouly fullfilling the wifey duty super like
and chapii 24 was awesome haila ek hug k liye kesar usko gufa (cave mein le gaya ) kesar always choses dreadful and wierd place to for romance total pyscho...oh poor gulaal uski jaan par bani thi aur use hug k padi thi😆...i can relate to gulaal as i have some sort of cavephobia i never dare to enter chota mahadev and this robbers cave reminded me gupt godavari in chitrakoot i think u must have visited that place same caveren...oh boy it was hell scary wen the water level increased i entered the place and it was dark cold and water beaneath you...and as the current level increased i totally freaked out.plus the fear of sanke adds cherry on the cake...oh boy itni khatarnak jagah par romance specially clock dekh kar romance kar raha tha calculative bacha
i love the chapii bada waala comment wen my mid term will be over...plz bear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Yes yes, Piu... I am being a bherry bherry nice and sweet friend, and this is all for the benefit of your TRPs... otherwise, I don't really need any cheese 😳... but, doston ki bhalai bhi to sochni padti hai... I don't want people throwing you off the hill, just coz of lack of some cheese ...🤣

Thanx Minks.🤗.Thanx ..😳.

If I dont bring cheese the chii Gang will kill me..

Thanx for helping me yaar😆


Piu... I have been thinking and thinking of scenarios of what happens next, and mera dimaag kaam nahi kar raha hai... plz, plz.. update soon... labh you lots...☺️

Well Minks.😳.mere dimag ki bhi batti Gul ho gayi thi..Finally kuch likh liya hai..😆will update soon maybe tonite😳

Lubb you too😳

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Originally posted by: arti07

omg 2 chapii in one day thats a delight but bad luck mere mid term next week schedule ho rahe hain...to mujhe phir se boring se padhai karni padti hai...i hate it...y dont they include gulaal in the course...they can include romeo juliet sir dard romance but not gulsar highly unfair

Haila meri chotu govinda..tere exams hain..😭Haila.😲.I will miss your bada wala comment 😭but padhai comes first ..so all the best😳

Tujhe Gulaal chahiye sylllabus main🤣

ayways chapii 23 was so refreshing to see gullu subconcsiouly fullfilling the wifey duty super like
Yes Gullu may be an ostrich but she is sweet and performing all her wifey duties now..thanks😳
and chapii 24 was awesome haila ek hug k liye kesar usko gufa (cave mein le gaya ) kesar always choses dreadful and wierd place to for romance total pyscho...oh poor gulaal uski jaan par bani thi aur use hug k padi thi😆...i can relate to gulaal as i have some sort of cavephobiai never dare to enter chota mahadev and this robbers cave reminded me gupt godavari in chitrakoot i think u must have visited that place same caveren...oh boy it was hell scary wen the water level increased i entered the place and it was dark cold and water beaneath you...and as the current level increased i totally freaked out.plus the fear of sanke adds cherry on the cake...oh boy itni khatarnak jagah par romance specially clock dekh kar romance kar raha tha calculative bacha
Yaar I just lubb these caves and chota mahadev and tapkeshwar are like my fav places..See bacha is doing so much mehnat for a simple hug ..soch age kya hoga.Anyways arti will miss you a lot but studies should always be a priority..so take care and all the best..will miss you and your bada wala comment..lubb you🤗
i love the chapii bada waala comment wen my mid term will be over...plz bear

Thanx my chotu govinda..🤗koi gal nahi..padhai kar😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gman

Gina.🤗.see thanks for this compliment But me not very good at uber cheesy stuff so got this silly romantic coctail😆

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PART 25

The course of true love never did run so smooth-Section B

He caught hold of her and held her by her waist and abruptly pulled her closer .The surrounding was seductive with no trace of life any where around them.The drizzle of the spring water was crossing in front of their eyes.Both stood still looking at each other.He was constantly looking at Gulaal who struggled hard to stand on her feet and was shaking like a drunken woman.Perplexed for a moment,seeing Gulaal struggling ,He held her more tightly to provide her stability.Gulaal was taken aback.His touch was different today..She looked into his eyes.His eyes had a desire,a deep passionate desire.Gulaal's heartbeat increased as she shivered due to the cumulative effect ofthe cold water and his passionate touch.Her trembling frequency almost doubled every second.Both their heartbeats were more than audible in the silence of the surroundings with only the rushing waters to accompany as a background music.Kesar was captivated by her charm.This was the most awaited moment in his life ,He thought and was about to wrap her up in his arms,when they heard some voices .Gulaal quickly snapped out of the moment and freed herself from his grip and placed her hand on the cave wall to gain support.Kesar still dazed looked at her.when a group of other tourists arrived at the same place.Gulaal was shocked as she thought about what happened a few moments ago.She quickly tried to climb back the cliff but failed miserably due to lack of support and her weak frame.Kesar softly said, "Let me help you."

Gulaal could hardly speak .she was breathing heavily and did not want to face him ,so replied , "nahi main thik hun..humein chalna chahiye .pata nahi wo log kahn reh gaye,"and she quickly started walking at a fast pace towards the entrance of the cave.

Kesar almost ran behind her to keep up the pace but she walked so fast as if she was running to save her life.Kesar was upsetas he thought, "Did I upset her again?"

They finally reached the main entrance point.Gulaal found it hard to hold her breath .The cold water ,the chase,the heat of the moment made her breathless.She looked at Kesar and said, "apna mobile phone de "

Kesar still couldn't figure out what was wrong,as he handed over the phone to her .

Gulaal frantically dialled a number and said," Hello Talli ,Talli kahan ho tum log."

Kesar looked at her frenzied gestures and was a bit amused.She was trembling .She disconnected the call after some response from Talli .

She turned around and said in a nervous tone, "I think its quite late.Talli ne kaha k hum main road pe aa jaye,kuch problem ho gayi thi .wahan jake pata chalega ."Gulaal didn't even wait to finish her statement and she started walking in fact running towards the car parking area.Kesar followed her quietly .Gulaal didn't speak a word but the close moment didn't leave her for a second .She was shocked and confused.Finally they both reached near a jeep where Kunal and Talli were waiting.Talli ran towards Gulaal and saw her drenched in water.

Gulaal asked , "kahn reh gaye the tum log kabse wait kar rahe the"

Talli flared her nostrils and gave an irritated look at Kunal , "Kya bataun Gulaal is pagal ki baton mein aa gayi..isne kaha ki cold drink lene jate hain.yahn dur dur tak koi dukaan to hai nahi to hum gaadi se jane lage aur raste mein is mahashay ki gaadi kharab ho gayi thi ,itni sunsaan jagah thi wo ki mechanic ko ate ate itna time lag gaya.sara mood kharab kar diya,aur phir itni ghatiya aur pakau shayari sunte sunte mera dimag ka kachra ho gaya.mechanic k ane par pata chala ki yeh thik nahi hogi to inhone phone karke jeep mangwayi aur phir kaanhi jakar aa paye"Talli sulked

Kunal looked at Kesar .he stood there silently and a bit upset .He said to everyone , "koi baat nahi abhi to puri shaam hai..abhi celebrate kar lete hain…chalo chalte hain.."

Gulaal said , "are nahi Kunal ab ghar jayenge waise bhi sare kapde bhig chuke hain."

Kesar looked at Gulaaland then at Kunal and said in a low tone, "haan Kunal waise bhi mujhe hotel jana hai Dinner service k liye"

Kunal gave a death glare at Kesar and said authoritatively , "Tub hi na ekdum idiot hai..are bhai aaj mera birthday hai aur tu bhul raha hai officially main tera boss hun..so aaj teri chutti..phir waise bhi subah hi maineshiraz ko ph kar diya tha..ki wo teri evening shift bhi kar le.samjha..aur rahi baat kapdon ki to wo pehle ghar pe chalke change kar lo.Phir bhabhiji aaj hum aapko dehradun ki sabse khaas chiz khilatein hain..Kunal completed his sentence and winked at Kesar.A smile again occurred on Kesar's face.

But then he looked at Gulaal and her confused face so he replied to Kunal, "nahi Kunal .Agar Gulaal ka man nahi hai to humein zabardasti nahi karani chahiye.";he sighed.

Gulaal was lost in her own thoughts but this statement of Kesar made her reply.. "nahi nahi…Thik hai waise bhi Kunal ka birthday hai aaj..chalte hain,"Gulaal smiled as she did not want to upset kesar and Kunal..Kesar was happy and was about to sit on the front seat when kunal stopped him abruptly, "na na na..samne nahi ekdum piche wali seat pe baitho bhabhi k saath.tum dono bhige hue ho aur samne seats par plastic covers nahi hai..sari seats gili ho jayengi .samjhe and he smiled naughtily at kesar and continued , "Talli ji aap age baithiye.

Talli complied hesitantly and Kesar and Gulaal sat on the rear seat facing each other on the opposite seats.

The sun had started to set and the sky glittered with an orange tinge .Gulaal was feeling tired and her legs were paining she stretched her legs on the seat beside Kesar and dozed off within a few minutes .There was a cool breeze as Kunal drove towards patel Villa .

Kesar looked at her .Tiny droplets of water were sliding down her soft curls as she slept.

Kesar's eyes wandered towards her feet.Gulaal in a hurry had forgotten to unfold her salwar which she had folded uptill her knees.Kesar gently unfolded it.and covered her legs careful enough not to wake her up when finally his hands touched the anklet likeblack thread .He looked at it fascinated and amused and slightly gave a jerk on the ghunghroos .The tinkling sound produced by them Filled his heart with immense pleasure.

Talli was observing Kesar's expressions as he fondly looked at Gulaal from the rear view mirror.Tears filled in her eyes as she understood the lovelorn look on Kesar's face.Kunal was observing Talli and said softly, "Taqdeer banane wale tune kami na ki..kisko kya mila ye kismet ki baat hai.

Talli was confused and she turned around and asked Kunal , "matlab.."

Kun: "Matlab kuch nahi..waise ye pati patni ka rishta bhi kitna pavitra hota haina..ekdum atoot..chahe koi lakh koshishe kar le ,do dilon ko milne se koi nahi rok sakta..hai na.."

T: "haan ..sach kaha apne.."Talli wiped the tears that had just rolled down her cheeks.

7:30 pm Nirula's Caf.Rajpur road dehradun

"bhabhiji dehradun akar agar aapne Nirula's ka cheese cake nahi khaya to kya khaya..",said Kunal as he was about to cut his Birthday cake.Kesar,Gulaal and Talli sang Happy birthday song as he blew candles and cut the cake.

They all started gossiping and chatting as they relished the cake.Gulaal really loved the taste and was busy eating it.Kesar was amused and kept on staring her..Gulaal suddenly noticed Kesar looking at him.She felt shy and lowered her eyes.It was the first time after the waterfall incident she looked at him directly..

Kunal observed this small eyelock ,was in a jovial mood and said ,

"Chehra mera tha sansein unki,

kahmoshi mein bhi wo batein unki.

Mere chehre par shokh gazal likh gayi.

.wo sher padhti ankhein unki"

Kesar looked at gulaal who was blushing .

"Gulaal Bisht",Their brief eyelock was cut short by a heavy deep masculine voice .Gulaal turned around and Yelled with excitement , "Dushyant chowdhary",and she ran towards him and hugged him.

Kesar was shocked and surpised .His smile turned into a frown as he saw HIS Gulaal being hugged by a Tall ,well built,.handsome man with moustache .Kesar was still shocked as he heard Gulaal's chirpy excited voice as she laughed with that man and was bubbling with Joy, "Tum ..tum yahn kaise?"

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Posted: 14 years ago
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chiii...I ve missed 7 chapters


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Posted: 14 years ago
Aarey re...Mucchi man ki entry ho gayi and Gulaal hugged him????? Ye kya baat hui? Pati toh tumhare taraf pyaar se dekh bhi le toh kaise react karti hai, aur abhi saare aam hug?????? Newez Kesar ne poora fayeda uthaya iss trip ka and pat on Kunal's back for helping his frnd out. Talli ko bhi side mein kar diya! Fantoo chappi re! But Kesuda kahin wahan jal ke bhasam naa ho jaaye, nxt chappie plz!
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Tears filled in her eyes as she understood the lovelorn look on Kesar's face.Kunal was observing Talli and said softly, "Taqdeer banane wale tune kami na ki..kisko kya mila ye kismet ki baat hai.
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Sweet chapter piu, but I am equally shocked as Kesar towards the end.😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
res, main agayi 😃


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Originally posted by: manzilmukul


PART 25

The course of true love never did run so smooth-Section B

He caught hold of her and held her by her waist and abruptly pulled her closer .The surrounding was seductive with no trace of life any where around them.The drizzle of the spring water was crossing in front of their eyes.Both stood still looking at each other.He was constantly looking at Gulaal who struggled hard to stand on her feet and was shaking like a drunken woman.Perplexed for a moment,seeing Gulaal struggling ,He held her more tightly to provide her stability.Gulaal was taken aback.His touch was different today..She looked into his eyes.His eyes had a desire,a deep passionate desire.Gulaal's heartbeat increased as she shivered due to the cumulative effect ofthe cold water and his passionate touch.Her trembling frequency almost doubled every second.Both their heartbeats were more than audible in the silence of the surroundings with only the rushing waters to accompany as a background music.Kesar was captivated by her charm.This was the most awaited moment in his life ,He thought and was about to wrap her up in his arms,when they heard some voices .Gulaal quickly snapped out of the moment and freed herself from his grip and placed her hand on the cave wall to gain support.Kesar still dazed looked at her.when a group of other tourists arrived at the same place.Gulaal was shocked as she thought about what happened a few moments ago.She quickly tried to climb back the cliff but failed miserably due to lack of support and her weak frame.Kesar softly said, "Let me help you."

aray tourists kyun aye, maaro un ko 😡 n wow piyu u described the scene so well, loved it yar 😳

Gulaal could hardly speak .she was breathing heavily and did not want to face him ,so replied , "nahi main thik hun..humein chalna chahiye .pata nahi wo log kahn reh gaye,"and she quickly started walking at a fast pace towards the entrance of the cave. gulaal bhaag gayi 🤣

Kesar almost ran behind her to keep up the pace but she walked so fast as if she was running to save her life.Kesar was upsetas he thought, "Did I upset her again?"

They finally reached the main entrance point.Gulaal found it hard to hold her breath .The cold water ,the chase,the heat of the moment made her breathless.She looked at Kesar and said, "apna mobile phone de " look at her, aisi situation main bhi kesay mobile phone mang rahi hai 😆

Kesar still couldn't figure out what was wrong,as he handed over the phone to her .

Gulaal frantically dialled a number and said," Hello Talli ,Talli kahan ho tum log."

Kesar looked at her frenzied gestures and was a bit amused.She was trembling .She disconnected the call after some response from Talli .

She turned around and said in a nervous tone, "I think its quite late.Talli ne kaha k hum main road pe aa jaye,kuch problem ho gayi thi .wahan jake pata chalega ."Gulaal didn't even wait to finish her statement and she started walking in fact running towards the car parking area.Kesar followed her quietly .Gulaal didn't speak a word but the close moment didn't leave her for a second .She was shocked and confused.Finally they both reached near a jeep where Kunal and Talli were waiting.Talli ran towards Gulaal and saw her drenched in water.

Gulaal asked , "kahn reh gaye the tum log kabse wait kar rahe the"

Talli flared her nostrils and gave an irritated look at Kunal , "Kya bataun Gulaal is pagal ki baton mein aa gayi..isne kaha ki cold drink lene jate hain.yahn dur dur tak koi dukaan to hai nahi to hum gaadi se jane lage aur raste mein is mahashay ki gaadi kharab ho gayi thi ,itni sunsaan jagah thi wo ki mechanic ko ate ate itna time lag gaya.sara mood kharab kar diya,aur phir itni ghatiya aur pakau shayari sunte sunte mera dimag ka kachra ho gaya.mechanic k ane par pata chala ki yeh thik nahi hogi to inhone phone karke jeep mangwayi aur phir kaanhi jakar aa paye"Talli sulked

talli ka kachra ho gaya, i m so so so happy 🤣

Kunal looked at Kesar .he stood there silently and a bit upset .He said to everyone , "koi baat nahi abhi to puri shaam hai..abhi celebrate kar lete hain'chalo chalte hain.." chalo chalo chalo 😃

Gulaal said , "are nahi Kunal ab ghar jayenge waise bhi sare kapde bhig chuke hain."

Kesar looked at Gulaaland then at Kunal and said in a low tone, "haan Kunal waise bhi mujhe hotel jana hai Dinner service k liye"

Kunal gave a death glare at Kesar and said authoritatively , "Tub hi na ekdum idiot hai..are bhai aaj mera birthday hai aur tu bhul raha hai officially main tera boss hun..so aaj teri chutti..phir waise bhi subah hi maineshiraz ko ph kar diya tha..ki wo teri evening shift bhi kar le.samjha..aur rahi baat kapdon ki to wo pehle ghar pe chalke change kar lo.Phir bhabhiji aaj hum aapko dehradun ki sabse khaas chiz khilatein hain..Kunal completed his sentence and winked at Kesar.A smile again occurred on Kesar's face.

But then he looked at Gulaal and her confused face so he replied to Kunal, "nahi Kunal .Agar Gulaal ka man nahi hai to humein zabardasti nahi karani chahiye.";he sighed.

Gulaal was lost in her own thoughts but this statement of Kesar made her reply.. "nahi nahi'Thik hai waise bhi Kunal ka birthday hai aaj..chalte hain,"Gulaal smiled as she did not want to upset kesar and Kunal..Kesar was happy and was about to sit on the front seat when kunal stopped him abruptly, "na na na..samne nahi ekdum piche wali seat pe baitho bhabhi k saath.tum dono bhige hue ho aur samne seats par plastic covers nahi hai..sari seats gili ho jayengi .samjhe and he smiled naughtily at kesar and continued , "Talli ji aap age baithiye.

Talli complied hesitantly and Kesar and Gulaal sat on the rear seat facing each other on the opposite seats.

The sun had started to set and the sky glittered with an orange tinge .Gulaal was feeling tired and her legs were paining she stretched her legs on the seat beside Kesar and dozed off within a few minutes .There was a cool breeze as Kunal drove towards patel Villa .

Kesar looked at her .Tiny droplets of water were sliding down her soft curls as she slept.

Kesar's eyes wandered towards her feet.Gulaal in a hurry had forgotten to unfold her salwar which she had folded uptill her knees.Kesar gently unfolded it.and covered her legs careful enough not to wake her up when finally his hands touched the anklet likeblack thread .He looked at it fascinated and amused and slightly gave a jerk on the ghunghroos .The tinkling sound produced by them Filled his heart with immense pleasure.

Talli was observing Kesar's expressions as he fondly looked at Gulaal from the rear view mirror.Tears filled in her eyes as she understood the lovelorn look on Kesar's face.Kunal was observing Talli and said softly, "Taqdeer banane wale tune kami na ki..kisko kya mila ye kismet ki baat hai. lovely lovely lovely piyu 👏 i super like the shair here 😃

Talli was confused and she turned around and asked Kunal , "matlab.."

Kun: "Matlab kuch nahi..waise ye pati patni ka rishta bhi kitna pavitra hota haina..ekdum atoot..chahe koi lakh koshishe kar le ,do dilon ko milne se koi nahi rok sakta..hai na.."

T: "haan ..sach kaha apne.."Talli wiped the tears that had just rolled down her cheeks.

7:30 pm Nirula's Caf.Rajpur road dehradun

"bhabhiji dehradun akar agar aapne Nirula's ka cheese cake nahi khaya to kya khaya..",said Kunal as he was about to cut his Birthday cake.Kesar,Gulaal and Talli sang Happy birthday song as he blew candles and cut the cake.

They all started gossiping and chatting as they relished the cake.Gulaal really loved the taste and was busy eating it.Kesar was amused and kept on staring her..Gulaal suddenly noticed Kesar looking at him.She felt shy and lowered her eyes.It was the first time after the waterfall incident she looked at him directly..

Kunal observed this small eyelock ,was in a jovial mood and said ,

"Chehra mera tha sansein unki,

kahmoshi mein bhi wo batein unki.

Mere chehre par shokh gazal likh gayi.

.wo sher padhti ankhein unki"

lovely piyu yar loved it 👏

Kesar looked at gulaal who was blushing .

"Gulaal Bisht",Their brief eyelock was cut short by a heavy deep masculine voice .Gulaal turned around and Yelled with excitement , "Dushyant chowdhary",and she ran towards him and hugged him.

Kesar was shocked and surpised .His smile turned into a frown as he saw HIS Gulaal being hugged by a Tall ,well built,.handsome man with moustache .Kesar was still shocked as he heard Gulaal's chirpy excited voice as she laughed with that man and was bubbling with Joy, "Tum ..tum yahn kaise?" dushy agaya 😲 kyun aya hai yeh kabab men haddi


lovely chapi piyu, i love u so much 🤗
Edited by kiran_trudecent - 14 years ago

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