FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1081

piu unres kardiya😳...need next chappie jaldi😍

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prachurya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1082

Oye yaar...SF apne rang mein aagayi...she wants Kesar Jr. before she dies, kitna waqt baccha hai, Piyu???😕

But the KG scenes were asusual spell binding.

Gulaal is now disturbed and feels insecure, abt tym our Master Chef confessed but then he also can't gauge her reactions...so lets c aage kya hota hai.

Aarey Kesar ne direct bola tha ki "samajhti nahi ya samajhna nahi chahti"- aur kitne hints dega toh tuze pta chalega ki he is not doing this out of concern or sympathy.

RANDOM JOKE: Maybe he was just fulfilling his duty towards her

Aarey usse bodyguard samajh rakha hai kya????- "Bodyguard sirf duty karta hai arthaat kartavya jiska sirf palaan kiya jaata hai"

Haaahaaa...reminded me of Bodyguard dialogue- ur fav film Piyu😉

Superb story telling Piyu, waiting 4 da nxt chappie

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without-fathom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1083

*reserved Piu ** still haven't managed to sit and read the entire chapter, first 2 paras I've started on and read 6 times already

Be back soon!

*edit*

first questions first - are the scenes in Namaste London also shot in this Ganga arti location Piu? Looking at your stills reminded me of scenes from that song of NL - main jahan rahoon, when Kat is visiting these religious places and especially that one bit where she is overwhelmed by the way the religious sentiments glimmer and shine all around her and bring on that aura...

And now to the part - That final section was so so heartwarming and wrenching at once! When Gullu first yelled at him, threw that anger shift tantrum - it reminded of Kesar from just a few days ago, when he was in dilemma and trying to figure his heart! Gulaal is going through that phase now, and hence her turmoil and all those angry words - but in the end, there is so much love between them, it can heal anything...

Lines for the situation from one of my all time favorite songs, which applies to GK from your fic, arti's, prachu's and from the show too! Its like a song made for GK (I remember using it for one my threads when the show was on too!)

Oh, I've loved you from the start

In every single way

And more each passing day

You, are brighter than the stars

Believe me when I say

Its not about your scars

Its all about your heart...!

Here's the link to the song - you should give it a listen 😳 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NMadRqE9aGE

Edited by JZephyr - 13 years ago

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1084

the descriptions you give for the sites gives a realistic feel to your ff Wonderful👏, I just loved this chapter esp the last scene. If only she could know how much he loves her...😳

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1085

lovely chappi bonuu know writing the ff based on true locales is your usp, it makes things more understandable ⭐️chappia ccha tha to kachra karne ka mann nahi kiya but mujhe to haridwar se pyaar ho gaya hai😃and kesgul confrontation scene and then kesu manau gullu scene was too goodi enjoyed each and very line of this chappi⭐️

lubb u bonudi

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Incense

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1086

piyu maari o pyaari

kyu sukun dil paaye naa

taras gaye hai naina

chubb dikh laayo naa

piyu maari o pyari

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without-fathom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1087

Updated my comment on Pg 142 Piu 🤗

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chweetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1088

Unreswa kar diya..😃😃

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1089

Part 35

Love,deceit and revenge

The Haveli next morning

The first golden rays of the sun touched the two incomplete souls lost in each others arms as the birds chirped.Kesar woke up suddenly due to the ringing of the bells from the faraway temples.Kesar back hurtterribly as he noticed as he noticed he had been sleeping in the same posture sitting on the balcony chairs of The haveli and Gulaal was still clutching his kurta and with her head resting on his chest was fast asleep.Kesar was lost in her innocent face which rested in peace as if she was a secure child clinging on to her mother for support.Kesar smiled and caressed her soft cheeks and gently tried to wake her up.Gulaal twitched a bit but kept on clinging to hiswhite kurta with a tightened grip.Kesar smiled again and gently whispered in her ears, "Gulaal utho der ho rahi hai"

His very voice made her feel more comforted and induced smug and lethargy more than ever.She was totally smitten by sleep and within seconds was inhaling deep breaths and slept deeply again.Kesar gave a mischievious smile ,came close to her and and said in a loud voice, "Gulaal".Gulaal was startled and and cried out, 'Kaun hai ..kaun hai".Her eyes were wide open by now and she saw him laughing his guts out .Gulaal was annoyed and said,"Tu bhi na..Kisi din main tujhe sach mein jaan se maar dungi"

K: "Hmm ye to hoga hi ek din,He mumbled and continued, "Chalo ab chalna nahi hai kya…Main jakar SF aur PB ko jaga ka rata hun..,and started to walk away.Gulaal held his hand and said, "Kesar..Ek minute".She came closer and placed her fingers on his chin and started rubbing it.Kesar was surprised , "Ye kya kar rahi ho"

Gulaal felt shy and replied, "Wo sara sindur lag gaya hai.."Her cheeks were red due to embarrassment .

Kesar too felt a little shy and was about to walk away when he was stopped by the sweet and endearing voice of Gulaal, "Kesar pls pehle naha le phir jana .."She blushed and felt nervous.Kesar went inside and checked himself in the mirror..He laughed coz The dry sindoor which he had used quite generously during the temple ritual to fill Gulaal's hair partition was adorning his chin,neck and various parts of his Kurta in patches.

Meanwhile Gulaal also came inside and seeing Kesar grinning Gulaal cheeks flushed and had a rosy hue which made her look even more beautiful.Kesar saw her and came clkose to her and said affectionately, "Waise jab tum sharmaati ho ..to aur bhi sundar lagne lagti ho" and he walked away to take a shower.

Gulaal was left feeling shy as she blushed even more.

Next Day College Canteen 3:30pm

Kun:Kin khayalon mein khoya hua hai..Lagta hai trip bahut achi rahi",kunal said sheepishly

K: Bas bahut ho gayi ye luka chupi .Aaj main Gulaal ko bata hi dunga k main ussse pyaar karta hun..

Kun: "Ye hui na baat"

K: "Yaar par kya wo samjhegi.."

Kun: "Dekh uska to mujhe pata nahi par hungama to zarur hoga …akhir izhaare mohabbat hoti hi aisi cheez hai"

K: "Matlab"

Kun; "Matlab kuch nahi ..ye sun..

Bhramar koi kumudini par machal baitha to hungama

Humne pyaar ka izhaar kiya to hungama

Abhi tak dub kar sunti thi sabhi kisse mohabbat ke

Main kisse ko haqeeqat mein badal baitha to hungama"

K:Tu bhi na..jane kya kehta rehta hai..par ab to bas Gulaal k lautne ka intezaar hai mujhe.Wo Dushyant K ghar gayi hai.Keh rahi thi ki uski mummy ayi hai aur usse milna chahti hai...

Dushyant's home 4:00pm

G: Dushyant aunty kahn hai ?

D: Wo Gulaal..wo…maine tumse jhooth kaha tha,Dushyant mumbled

Gulaal was shocked and knotted her brows and asked,"Aisi kya baat hai jo tumhe mujhse jhooth bolna pada..Bolo"

D: wo Gulaal maine aj tumhe yahan isliye bulaya hai k main tumse ye kehna chahat hunke main tumse pyaar karta hun Gulaal.Haan aj se nahi us din se jab se tumhe pehli baar college mein dekha tha.Lekin tumhari Shaadi fixed thi..isliye kabhi keh nahi paya …Par phir itna kuch ho gaya..Tum phir mujhe mili aur tum is shaadi se khush bhi nahi ho Gulaal ."

Gulaal was dumfounded and horrified, "Ye tumse maine kab kaha ki main khush nahi hun.Haan ye shaadi ek samjhauta thi..par iska matlab ye hargiz nahi hai ki meri nazron mein is pavitra bandhan ki koi ehmiyat nahi hai.Tum hosh mein to ho..Dushyant..Ek shaadi shuda ladki se aisi batein karte tumhe sharam nahi atai.Maine tumhe apna dost samajhkar apna dukh share kiya..aur tumne to uska galat matlab nikal liya"

D:Gulaal main janta huntum ye sab samaj k dar se keh rahi ho..Main tumhe bahut khush rakhunga..,A sudden frenzy captured Dushyant and he tried to hold her

Gulaal was horrified and she rolled her eyes and pushed him and replied harshly , "Bas karo Dushyant.Pls ye sab band karo..Tum humari dosti ko galat samajh rahe ho.."She decided to walk away.Dushyant was hurt by rejection.He grabbed her arm and said madly

D: "Tum Mujhe chhodkar nahi ja sakti..Tumhe mere paas hi rehna hoga"

Gulaal fumed in anger and slapped him hard, "Mera haath chodo.How dare you talk to me like that.Main tumhe apna sacha dost samajhti thi aur tum..Dushyant main tumhari bahut izzat karti hun.Us izzat ko bane rehne do aur mujhe jane do"

,she begged

Dushyant was mad at her behaviour and had always been obsessed by her His frenzy reached its crescendo as he slapped her back and dragged her by pulling her hair, "Tum samjhti kya ho apne aap ko ?Aaj tume meri hi banna hoga"

Gulaal screamed in horror and pain as Dushyant threw away her dupatta tore her kurta sleeves and started molesting her.She shivered and feared for the worst.She started breathing heavily.Gulaal begged for mercy but madness had overpowered Dushyant.Gulaal screamed and struggled .Somehow her hand reached a flower vase and she hit him hard and saved herself bymanaging to run away leaving Dushyant howling with pain.

Beneath The buransh tree in the jungle near Patel Villa 7:00pm

"Gulaal mujhe yahan kyun bulaya"Asked worried Kesar as he came near Gulaal who had buried her head in her knees while sitting beaneath theBuransh tree.Kesar came near to her and saw Gulaal in torn clothes shivering and trembling and sobbing.

Kesar was horrified and shocked .He came very close and touched her shoulders and saked in a worried tone, 'Kya hua Gulaal ..ye sab kya hai..Ye sab kaise hua.."

Gulaal was still in shock and delirium.Shereacted , "Please mujhe mat choona…please mujhe jane do..mujhe jane do"

She started screaming and Begging.Kesar was horrified .He quickly held her arms shook her up and said, 'Gulaal relax..main Kesar ..hu Kesar.."He removed her messed up hair from her face and was shocked to see a hand marks imprinted on her cheek ,a cut near her forehead and scratches all over her arms .Kesar was worried and he quickly covered her with his Denim Jacket and cupping her face asked , "Gulaal..main hun Kesar..Kya hua ye..Kisne kiya ye sab..batao."He shook her .Gulaal looked into his eyes and came back to her senses and and cried painfully, "Kesar ..kahan thatu."

She cried bitterly as kear took her in his arms and consoled her and saked with concern, "Kisne kiya yeh Gulaal..batao..ye sab kaise hua.Gulaal cried bitterly.He ld her tight and gently stroked her back, "Daro mat Gulaal ..darne ki koi baat nahi hai..main a a gaya hun na…shhh…main hun na"

She narrated the whole incident to kesar as her body vigorously trembled.Kesar eyes were red with anger.He clenched his fist,his jaws tightened and he got up and said, "Chalo"

Gulaal looked up ..curiously still crying.

Kesar looked at her once and extended his hands andsaid, "Mujh par bharosa hai na…"

Gulaal silently followed his instructions.

Dushyant's home 7:30pm

Kesar banged the door impatiently as he was burning with fury and rage.Gulaal was nervous and asked him to leave..But Kesar was in no mood to leave.He was angry..very angry…Dushyant opened the door and even before he could look at them.Kesar clenched his fist and hit him hard on his face.Dushyant Fell down near his sofa .Blood splurted out from his mouth .Dushyant saw Gulaal standing with Kesar.He came running and wanted to hit Kesar .But Kesar's fury knew no bounds.He mercilessly beat him and shouted, "Teri itni himmat tune meri Gulaal ko haath lagaya…Tune kya socha..ki meri patni par buri nazar dal kart u zinda bach jayega …haan.Tune haath kaise lagaya..Meri Gulaal ko ..Tujhe koi haq nahi hai..zinda rehne ka"

Kesar kept on hitting ,punching and kicking him.Dushyant was easily overpowered by Kesar who was burning with Rage.Gulaal screamed , "Kesar aur mar ise…"She cried bitterly as she trusted Dushyant so much ,He was her best friend,and how he hurt her not only physically but also betrayed her trust.Kesar kept on beating him.Dushyant was half unconscious and screamed, "Mujhe maaf kar do" as he bled profusely..

Kesar kept on kicking him.Gulaal was terrified now as she saw that Kesar would not stop and eventually kill Dushyant.She was scared and cried, "Kesar ruk ja..wo mar jayega."

Kesar did nt pay heed to Gulaal's voice and continued to beat Dushyant.

Gulaal knew that if this continued Kesar would have to face dire consequences .She came in Front of Kesar and begged, "Tujhe meri kasam Kesar ise jane de..main tujhe nahi kho sakti..Kesar ruk ja"Kesar was about to hit her face when he stopped

He was still angry but her begging made him stop as he kicked him once more and held her hand and walked away.He stopped at the gate…and came back.made Dushyant sit outside his house ,took out his lighter and burned the curtains bedsheets and set the house on fire.Gulaal was horrified and shivered.Kesar held her hands and came out as the house burned and Dushyant was lying outside watching the sight helplessly.

Kesar came near Dushyant and said, "Tune inhi hathon se chua thana..meri Gulaal ko ..Ye le'

He broke his hand by kicking it hard.Gulaal was shocked and horrified.

P.S-The course of true love never did run so smooth.True love cannot be expressed in words,it can be expressed only through possessiveness and anger when you get close to others...!