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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Good one... at least they are back together in the same house... I know its terrible times for both of them... still better that they have each other infront of them... even if it kills Gullu to leave (hoping that she wont have to)... she is so dedicated to her promise to PB... i feel like shaking her at times.. and telling her that she is giving up all her happiness and Kesar's too... all for PB... its not worth it...👎🏼


Ye dono ladte ruthe rahe... but saath mein rahe... in one house... and Gullu maybe forgets PB momentarily... and gives Kesu a well deserved hug... poor boy... he is sooo heart broken...

The good part of the chapter was exit of Dushy... I am glad for him.. time to move on dude... bas, ye PB ka kuch karna hoga...

thanks dear gulaal has to come back and i dont want kesar to beg her and make her come...as the things were different here...PB is silly..gulaal made a promise whole heartedly but now her heart is changed probably feeling guilty...and then she is ideal dil she is doing for the sake of her family...lets see where it s heading..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

No Res, direct comment, ee le chaitu thenga 😆


Wow wow wow arti dear 👏 very nice, now kesu vl go after gullu n gullu vl all be "no no no kesar, ita not love 😆... han han gulaal yeh pyar nahi bukhar hai 😆 kesu ka bukhar us k dimagh pe char gaya jabhi he is saying all that n moreover us bukhar men accident hogaya n chot bhi ser bhi lagi, aur zyada asar hogaya becharay k dimagh pe 😆 plz doc gullu, he needs medicine not ur anger n no no attitude 😆

well me all studying styudying and u ppl are playing thenga thenga😭
yes kesu is all bratty now..gulaal doctor ban kar bhi nahi seekhi we are so damm unlucky naa...and bacha needs hug and kisses alongwith the medicine
hey kiran thanks for direct comment 😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

well me all studying styudying and u ppl are playing thenga thenga😭
yes kesu is all bratty now..gulaal doctor ban kar bhi nahi seekhi we are so damm unlucky naa...and bacha needs hug and kisses alongwith the medicine
hey kiran thanks for direct comment 😳😳😳


@ blue: 🤣 u r welcome arti 😃 😆

yes yes he needs it, n gulaal ji ne kya parha i cant understand, koi loveology parhao ise 😆 poor kesu is suffering because of that 😆 n arti dear study toh karna hi parta hai na, now see gullu ji ne kya study toh ab kesu ki dekh bhaal k liye kaam araha hai na 🤣 loveology bhi parh leti toh sab tensions khatam ho jaten 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gman

I don't think I will survive until next chapter is issued after another heartbreaking chappie.🥺🥺🥺


Plz... Aarti mujhe vi dawai chahiye, dil ki marij hun. Aarti Jaldsi romantic chappie issue karo nahi to mujhe heart attack aaja yega.😭

he he he...its just the par t of ff cant escape it...i thought humara show will now go in romantic mood but they want us to kill us
dont worry will bring some good moment😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

Chapter 36

Gulaal broke down and sat there crying all of sudden she saw kesar's tabeez was lying on the floor...gulaal was worried she took the tabeez in hand and ran downstairs after kesar but kesar had gone...

Oye...teri yadein aagayi

mere dil pe cha gai

tujhe dhundu main kahn

tu chupa hai..meri jaan kahe ye dil mera

jeena hai ..tere liye😭

With each passing day gulaal was feeling uneasy but today she looked tensed dreadful thoughts were rising in gulaal's mind. There was, however, no reason to anticipate misfortune, but still her spirit was shattered and her heart was sinking down in grief.. every now and then she was picking her cell phone...she didn't call kesar but she called rewa twice or thrice...and rewa replied kesar was at work...gulaal heard it but still was not convienced

Kuch nahi..paas mere sab kuch le gaya tu

Chod gaya bas yadein

kitne geet the in hothon pe

ab kitni fariyadein...

poonam was watching her daughter very carefully with her unreadable expressions

it was midnight and gulaal sat in her bedroom floor traumatized with face in her hands...he was the sweetest thing ever happened to her she thought now her soul was shrinking in fear

poonam came near her daughter and said "agar itni fikr ho rahi hai to kesar to phone kar lo"

gulaal looked at her and said "nahi maa aisi koi baat nahi hai"

poonam said "thek hai gulaal...par ek baat hai tu kesar ko behad pyaar karti hai..haina"

Pooba..😳ye wali I lubb re arti.⭐️.she is such a sensible lady..not the hyperventilating one like..the original🤢

gulaal was not in the state to answer...she stood up and stand near the balcony

suddenly her cellphone rang...poonam picked the phone and she was shocked and frightened to recive the news

she screamed "gulaal kesar ka accident ho gaya hai...woo modi hospital mein hai"

gulaal become almost hysterical her worst feart was confirmed she grabed her purse and quickly ran out the door in panic and hired the taxi to Mumbai to be with him as soon as possible

all the way gulaal kept praying

rewa said "bhabhi aap aa gayi" and then she noticed that gulaal didn't wore her duppatta in haste...rewa looked at her and gave her scarf covered her up..and asked her to sit

gulaal looked at her and said "kesar"

rewa said restlessly "bhabhi kesar road cross kar raha tha aur suddenly ek car se uska accident ho gaya"

rewa continued "itne dino se kesar ekdum khoya khoya rehta tha usko apna koi hosh hi nahi rehta tha.. chupchap rehta tha aur ghar par bhi kisi se bhi baat nahi karta tha...shayad aapko miss karta tha...aise hi apne mein khoya road cross kar raha tha k car se accident ho gaya...sar par chot aayi hai"

Awww...lubbed this scene re..arti...

aisa scene serial mein kyun nahi dete...😡

she ran to him and asked holding her breath "dushyantji mere husband...mera kesar"

dushyant looked at her and read the depth of love in her eyes..he paused and then earnestly said "relax doctor gulaal apke pati bilkul thek hai..kuch minors si head injuries hai aur back pain hai...woo jaldi hi thek ho jayenge"

Ja bhag ja😆..dushy...kesu k patni rap k baad..ab gullu ka pati rap...👏

dr dushyant stood there for a moment he was silent he looked at the ground and then he took his cell phone out of the pocket and called his mother and said "maa apne meri liye jo ladki dekhi hain...unki photo bjijwa dijeye mein shaadi karne k liye tayyar hun".dr dushyant had realized the gulaal's love towards kesar and how futile his wait for her..now he wanted to move ahead in his life and walked away

saare sapne...kahin kho gaye..haye hum kya se kya ho gaye😆ye to original talli ko competition de raha hai...sudha ma...main shaadi karna chahti hun🤢

gulaal went inside and saw kesar was lying in the hospital bed he was sleeping he had bandage around his head he had occurred minor head injuries...she stood next to him and watched over him...his eyes were closed and she had teas in her eyes...she felt guilt for what had happened...y she was destined to fall in love with a person...who was sohelplessly in love with her..whose life was miserable without her...all these days he tried to live his life without gulaal- indeed he tried- he couldnt...his heart was no longer subject to sanity...his heart was shipwretched and drifted helplessly in the infinte ocean of sadness..he was aimless and his heart felt desparate longing for her...kesar found no peace...the forlorn and love sticken kesar had no way out he was walking in his own thoughts and he lost his balance and the misery took place...

Aww..kitna rulayegi...very beautifully written lines...hats off⭐️

aye ajnabi..tu bhi kahin awaz de kahin se..

main yahan tukdon mein jee raha hun

tu kahin tukdon mein jee rahi hai😭

Gulaal looked at him with lonely tears...she caressed his face gently and then she tied the tabeez around his neck...she tied the seven knot and as she tied the pooja ceremony flashed her mind where she and kesar did the pooja together and pundit had explained her seven vows that bride take in the married life
1.I will be by your side as your courage and strength.

2.I will love you solely for the rest of my life, as you are my husband. I vow to remain chaste.
3.I will shower you with joy, from head to toe. I will strive to please you in every way I can.
4.I promise to love and cherish you for as long as I live.

5.Your happiness is my happiness, and your sorrow is my sorrow.

6.I will trust and honor you, and will strive to fulfill all your wishes. .
7.As God is witness, I am now your wife. We will love, honor and cherish each other forever.

After couple of hours kesar regained consciousness and saw gulaal standing infront of him...seldom if ever do dreams become so real..his soul his spirit was standing infront of him...gulaal looked at him and she smiled ecstatly.he took a deep sigh...but didn't speak

speechless.😳.ecstatic.⭐️.overwhelmed.👏.brilliant arti⭐️

👏

Then she said "maa aap mera luggage bhijwa dijyega mein kuch din Mumbai hi rahungi"

yeah..ab push and pull😆

Kesar listened the conversation quietly

gulaal was taking care of kesar after he was discharged from hospital..but there was certain silence between them.. the only communication between them was there quiet eyes..who spoke their love passion pain grief and sadness to each other..but kesar silent eyes were searching some answer in her what made her to stay with him y is she so caring.. he didn't speak..but a silent frustation was brewing inside

Sikho na nainon ki bhasha piya

keh rahi...hai yahi..khamosahiyan

sikho..na..lab to na kholu..

main na bolu dil ki boli

haye re gullu😆

Gulaal smiled she said "mein yanha thi kyunki kesar ka accident hua tha?ab kesar thek ho jaayega to mein waapas?"

Rewa said "bhabhi mein janti hun k ap apne ghar waapas jaane chahiti par kya aap meri shaadi hone tak yanha nahi ruk sakti?mujhe aapki jarurat hai bhabhi"

I lubb rewa😳

Gulaal looked at her

Panba was not confortable with gulaal return but she too didn't wanted any kind of rumors to surface during rewa and yogesh marriage so she also said "gulaal tum rewa k shaadi tak yanhi rukna"

Gulaal gave her consent and then rewa left

Gulaal was in kitchen with panba..she looked at panba and said "panba aap chintaa mat kijeye panba jaise hi rewa k shaadi ho jayegi mein yanha se chali jaungi aur phir nahut jald kesar k jindagi mein koi aa jayega jo usese bahoot pyaar karegi aur uska bahoot khayal rakhegi...sab thek ho jayega panba"

PB grrr..tera dimag kharab ho gaya hai...you horrible woman😡


She said it to panba unknowlingly kesar was standing outside the kitchen he heard her and he was hurt and angry

He went in his room he was angry he lost his temper and in frustration throwed the furniture and books in his room

aww me so lubb this angry mad kesuda🥳

He throwed it with force...and then he felt pain in his shoulder so deep that he sighed deeply...meanwhile gulaal entered his room she looked at him and saw him in pain and quickly ran towards him and asked "kya hua kesar"

Kesar said angrily "kuch nahi tum jao yanha se" and he started looking for pain reliver ointment

Gulaal asked mein "abhi dawai laga deti hun"

Kesar replied in raised voice "koi jarurat nahi hai...mein apna khayal rakh lunga just leave me alone"

Gulaal said "par kesar"

Kesar said in frustration "gulaal tum yanha sirf ek aadarsh bahu ka farz nibha rahi ho yanha sirf apni jimmedari nibah rahi to nibaho...tumhe kya fark padta hai mein jee ya maru...mere hone naa hone sekya farq padta hai"

Gulaal said in fearfully "kesar plz dawai lagna do tumhe takleef ho rahi hai"

Kesar hold her tightly and said "haan gulaal bahoot takleef ho rahi hai bahoot dard ho raha hai mujhe..tum de rahi ho takleef...tum janti hun mein tumse pyaar karta hun bahoot pyaar karta hu gulaal...phir bhi tum baar baar kyu mujhe kisi aur k saath jeevan jeene k liye kyu kehti hun..kyu"

Gulaal freed herself took a steo back and replied "kyunki tum kisi aur k liye bane ho...tum jise pyaar kah rahe ho woo pyaar nahi hai...its not love"

Kesar was shocked to hear it

Kesar came near and asked "kya kaha pyaar nahi hai"

Gulaal said "haan nahi hai yeh pyaar"

Kesar didn't speak for a moment and then spoke again "to phir kya hai?"

Gulaal said "sirf attraction..infactuation hai..pyaar nahi"

Kesar was blank and then reply firmly "oh really to yeh attraction hai...haan mujhe kya pata pyaar kya hota hai shayad yeh attraction hey to phir pyaar kya hota hai...tum batao kya hota hai pyaar hai mein"

Gulaal replied "jab koi kissi k parvah khud se jyada kare to use pyaar kehte hai

Jab koi bina kahe ek dusare k man k baat jaan le to use pyaar kehte hai

Jab kisi k choti si baat uske liye bahoot maayne rakhiti ho to use pyaar kehte hai

Dooriyan aur nazdikiyaan se koi farq naa pade
Jab koi sirf use ko soche sirf uska khayal uske man (mind ) mein rahe to use pyaar kahte hain

Aur uske door jaane k khayal hi koi bardasht na kar sake to use pyaar kehta hai"

Kesar came near and grabbed her and asked "Kya tumne kabhi bhi humare beechis pyaar ko mehsos nahi kiya?"

Gulaal hung her head down she said hesitatelty "n..nahi"

Now kesar was determined he said ""tumhe nahi lagta yeh sab humare rishte mein hai???

Gulaal sais "no"

Kesar said "koi baat nahi gulaal " and now he was firm and determined andhe left

Oye arti..meri chotu govinda.🤗.just lubbed this confrontation..⭐️.brilliant...👏

Un nigahon mein mohabbat nahi to aur kya hai..

par wo kehta hai..wo kisi aur ka hai

zara sa jhooth bhi dhang se...kahan nahi jata

khubsoorat hai wo itna k saha nahi jata

chand mein daag hai ye jante hain hum lekin

raat bhar dekhe bina usko..raha nahi jata😳

ab kya hoga...we want nxt chappi jaldi jaldi😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

No..no ...no....where was I..

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lo ji unres kar diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

Kyuuunnn confession ke baad itne dukh k badal chha jaate hain- isse pehle toh midnight ice-cream dating, yacht dating, movie and candle-light maggie kha chuke hain- aur Madam kehti hain pyaar nahi hai- I can suggests lots of synonyms for pyaar jaise ki Paap ki bhavna, Lagav, Bhram(credit-CVs). Dumdaar chapter tha- Kesar asking seriuos questions- aage kya hone waala hai????Koi atyachaar na krna humpr Arti- We can't see ne1 wid Kesuda even as a jalane ka patra(character) except if u include Siree or Chaitali 😉

yucks no jalan ka patra..i hate that character..now gulaal ka faltu ka resistance hai hona bbhi chahiye...what so great about story is there is no resistance..thanks dear for liking😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Arti *hugs* what beautiful beautiful 2 chapters! it took me forever to read them on the phone - and i can't seem to work the like tab either - but i loved the progress (or technically regress in the path of progress) in the GK love track. Kesar in ur fic gives Kesar in the show tough tough competition for being such a sweetheart - can he get anymore awesome?! his love just melts and breaks my heart over and over!


Gullu being torn between better mind and cottonwool brain - what's new, sigh! ladki to haina, akal der mein hi aani isko! (sorry that wasn't supposed to sound sexist at all, lol!)

PB - *goes hits a wall* I can't appreciate her concern, because i'm too prejudiced as a team GK member.

Dushyant - someone has a better brain than the women in this fic. yay to that :D

thanks jzee...kesar is a sweetheart he has just evolved like kesar though i wont say his love has crossed that level...i dont want to touch him to that heights...let the original remain original...he just floats near the real character...gulaal is a sweetheart but stucked with the burden...
PB- someone has to be on loose end how better than wicked panba
dushyant is sensible man he waited for gulaal as he thought she would break her relation..but now he knows both are madly insanly in love with each other there is no point to become kabab mein haddi
thanks jzee for liking and waiting for FD
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ blue: 🤣 u r welcome arti 😃 😆

yes yes he needs it, n gulaal ji ne kya parha i cant understand, koi loveology parhao ise 😆 poor kesu is suffering because of that 😆 n arti dear study toh karna hi parta hai na, now see gullu ji ne kya study toh ab kesu ki dekh bhaal k liye kaam araha hai na 🤣 loveology bhi parh leti toh sab tensions khatam ho jaten 😆
stupid ladki sab padha par sabse important subject miss kar diya...gulaal ko doctor isliye banaya so that she takes good care of her
Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

ya rimjhim wen so less epi is left we are getting kulli who on the earth will appreciate it..dont even want to comment on it..it so yucks
precap now i m suspicious...kesar is there or not
thanks for liking

yeah right, the precap did look kinda suspicous, because talli was also there and kesar was no where to be seen but i hope we get a better episode tommorow otherwise i wanna go and die Ouch.
your welcome, oh and all of us dont just like it for nothing, you actually are quite talented😃

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