FF Apni preet se mujhe rang de - Page 65

Originally posted by: arti07

Chapter 33

...in between the discussion poonam asked about kesar and gulaal's eyes sparkled...she talked about kesar as a new bride proudly talks about her husband

oye jab husband hi inna pyara ho to ankhein to chamkegi hi na...Aww koi use batao...there's nothing wrong in loving your husband😳

She said pata "hai maa kesar ekdum pagal hai hamesha mujhe challenges deta hai aur phir khud hi haar jaata hai aur yeh saare dresses aur jewellary dekh rahi ho sab kesar lekar aaya hai?.itni saari hai k lagta hai 2-3 almirah banwaani padegi" she said proudly

Oye she is flaunting the pati love showered on her na..Arti..lubb this subtle detail..in her characterization....👏

Poonam had tears in her eyes replied in the choke voice "gulaal tujhe jab akhiri baar dekha to yeh chehra ktina berang tha socha bhi naa tha ki kabhi tujhe haste hue dekh paaungi aur ab dekho kesar ne apni preet se kitne rang bhar diye hai?mein bahoot khush hun gulaal k tujhe kesar jaisa jeevansathi mila"

Ye pooba to hyperventilate nahi kar rahi...Ise bada intelligent banaye re tune😆

all the guest left simultaneously...and gulaal engaged herself to clean the room...kesar saw her and said "yeh kya kar rahi ho gulaal...tumhara bday aur tum yeh room saaf kar rahi ho"

Oye tujhe pata nahi..Gullu ko safai karne ka Obsessive compulsive neurosis hai...🤓

Talli said "humari shaadi ho jayegi uske baad bhi hum gulaal ka is tarah bday manayenge"

Kesar was shocked he said "what?.kya kaha tumne?humari?shaadi????"

Oye age age sunta ja.😲.Talii billi ne kya kya armaan banye hai🤢

Kesar couldn't believe himself he was numbed he said "yeh kya bakwaas laga rakhi hai"

Then he said angrily "talli mujhe aisa mazak bilkul pasand nahi hai"

Talli looked at him and said "par kesar tumne to haan kari thi"

Kesar said "meine?kya bakwaas kar rahi ho?"

Kesar said "bas talli.mein shaadishuda hum kam se kam is baat ka to lihaaz karma tha.mujhe to soch kar bhi sharam aa rahi hai..gulaal sudhabhabhi aur panba ko pata chalega to kya sochengi "kesar was furious

OMG Talli ki booo ho gayi.🤣..Lubb you for this arti..ja bhag ja..Talli.😡

Talli said "kisi ko koi problem nahi hai kesar...sabko pata hai aur gulaal ne khud kaha hai mujhse uuse koi problem nahi hai"

Nahi re bache ko shock lag gaya..dekho tumhari patni ne tumhari dusri shaadi ka plan banay hai....😲

Kesar was shocked for a moment..everyone knew about it...gulaal knew about it...everyone has conspired against him...his gulaal has conspired against him how could she...he couldn't belief himself and now he was furios and adamant..his eyes were red and fierce

OOO angry kesuda...I lubb it🥳

kesar walked with the quick step towards gulaal room..gulaal was sleeping and kesar thumped the door very hard...gulaal woke all of sudden she opened the door and saw kesar was standing he was furious adamant and restless...he stared wildly at her and in the darkness gulaal read his face something was serious.

Go kesuda..OMG arti I am loving this.👏.This uninhibited wild kesuda...is awesome...O don't like kesudi..😭

Gulaal looked at him and understood she paused and smiled coldy"oh to tumhe talli ne sab bata diya hai..kesar talli bahoot achi ladki hai aur tumse bahoot pyaar karti hai"

Gulaal looked at him with her widened eyes "par kesar isme tumhari bhalai hai"

O pls spare me the horror yaar abhi bhi thinking of only bhalai'🤢'Oh I hate this word..😡.CV's ne bhalayi k naam pe humein 4 months torture kiya,..😭.thank god arti..tu ispe jyada zor nahi de rahi..lubb you for this😳

Kesar shouted "bas karo gulaal tumhe itna bhi hosh nahi hai k tum kya bol rahi hai?..tum meri patni ho...hum husband wife hai for godsake..aur tum mujhse kah rahi ho k mein kisi aur se shaadi karlu??tumhare hote hue koi aur meri patni ban kar aa jaye...kaise soch sakti ho gulaal?humara ek rishta hai us rishte k kaise bhul gayi tum"

Good I am absolutely happy with the way you have evolved kesu's character...mature ..but still an angry young man👏

⭐️

Kesar grabbed her with her arms and pull her close to him and looking into her eyes he said "ghutan (suffocated)..tumhe sach mein lagta hai humara rishta ghutan bhara hai" And a tears rolled down from his eyes

He said with tears in his eyes "aaj tumne mujhe bahoot hurt kiya hai gulaal...bahoot"

Aww bacha is so hurt na.😲.ghutan..are kya kah diya yaar..tum hi to uski..saans ho..and ghutan...OMG kesu tadap gay hoga😭

meri sanson mein basa hai tera hi ek naam

teri yaad humsafar subah shaam😉

Kesar was in deep pain he couldn't take it anymore so he was decided to leave he was walking towards the door in the living area he saw talli...talli was crying...kesar saw her but ignored her he was walking...talli came running towards him

She hold his hand and said "kesar mein tumse bahoot pyaar karti hun..plz mujhe chod kar mat jao..kesar mujhe koi farq naho padta tumhare aur gulaal k rishte se...plz mat karo mere saath aisa"

Kesar looked at her and said "acha koi farq nahi padta?chalo thek hai tum kehti hun to maan leta hun...par kya tumhe zindagi bhar dusari aurat k tag manjoor hoga"

Talli stood silent

Kesar continued "kya tumhe manjoor hoga k mein tumse pehle kis aur ko importance du kya zindagi bhar tum is baat se khush reh sakti ho k kesar k har baat par pehla haq gulaal ka hoga kyuki gulaal meri patni hai meri har cheez par mujh par haq sirf gulaal ka hai...aur agar tumhe yeh manjoor bhi hai to munjhe nahi...mein tumhari dosti k liye itna neeche nahi gir sakta"

"Sorry talli par mein tumse shaadi nahi kar sakta" kesar said most sternly

Talli ja bhag ja...tujhe ab akal aa gayi hogi😡

kesar said firmly"yeh aap kaise kah sakti hai...shaadi bematlab tab hoti hai jab ek pati aur patni ise nahi sweekar kare par meine apne poore hosh mein is shaadi ko sweekar kiya hai aap hoti kaun hain is shaadi ko bematlab kehne waali"

👏👏👏Bhootni ka muh band kara diya...khali chabr chabr.😡.Meri Talli ki Jindagi🤢

kesar continued "aur agar bematlab thi tab kyu is shaadi ko hone diya aapne...us samay to aap sab mere aur gulaal k rishte k sachai ko tolne mein lage hue the..kitne haath jode the humne par aap sabko to apni izzat pyaari thi "

he said "aur itni mahine se jab mein aur gulaal pati patni ban kar rah rahe hai tab kyu kisne kuch nahi kiya aur aaj jab talli ko mujhse pyaar ho gaya to yeh shaadi bematlab ho gaayi?nahi mera rishta bematlab nahi hai sudhabhabhi aapki yeh soch bematlab hai"

Thats true..👏arti...Its hypocrisy..sari rasme the family members make them perform as hubby wify..and now they say shaadi ka koi matlab nahi..In the serial also ..gullu used to perform all the poojas..conveniently..and do hawan...also..with kesu as his patni..untill he confessed his love...OMG kartavya nibhwate raho..and jab adhikaar ki baat aye to..paap and thenga🤣

panba interrupted in between "par kya us samara tu is rishte ko samajhta tha...kyu tujhe itne samaj thi k samajhe pati aur patni ka kya rishta hota hai"

Han jaise tumhara kesu kindergarten ka bacha hai...OMG arti..me remember this kesu...saying to vassy that..is sab k liye shaadi ki kya zarurat..hai.🤣.e lo PB ..tumhara ladla..chotu nahi hai yaar😉

kesar said "nahi thi maan liya...par aaj hai...agar aapko aisa lagta hai panba to theek hai mein aaj gulaal se waapas deeyavatto karne ko tayyar hun..balki jab bhi apko lage k mein rishte ko samajhne laga hun...mein waapas gulaal ka haath tham lunga par kisi aur k saath mein shaadi nahi karunga"

OMG this is very good 👏ye to dobara...Shoe marriage karna chahta hai..😆.OMG ye to...gullu pe fultoo fida hai re..Awww

panba said "hargiz nahi kesar gulaal aur tumhara deeyarvatto tut kar rahega yeh rishta sirf majbori mein kiya gaya tha..is majboori bahre rishte se tum dono apni zindagi nahi guzar sakte

Booo teri opinion kisi ko nahi chahiya🤢

kesar replied "mein guzar sakta hun...aur mein kisi bhi kimmat par gulaal ka saath nahi chodunga...aap sab sun lijeye..meine vasantbha aur diaba ko vaada kiya tha gulaal k saath nibhane ka aur yeh vada meri liye har rishte se badkar hai...aap logo k baat mein kabhi nahi manuga"

Good go mad passionate,ziddi kesuda...O arti tune kesudi ka bratty touch abhi bhi rakha hai...⭐️

👏

after he left there was muffled silence...panba took a few step and sank upon her chair...her strength departed she was miserable

gulaal looked at her and quickly came to support her

panaba looked at her in fear and said to gulaal "kesar"

gulaal looked at panba and said "aap chinta mat kijeye panba kesar ko achanak se sab pata chala to shayaad wo samajh nahi paa raha?meine usese baat karungi panba"

panba looked at her and hold her hand and said "ab sab teri upar hain gulaal tujhe kesar ko samajhana hoga k woo apna paagalpan band kare...aage chal kart um logo k is rishte se problem hogi"

Boo..PB🤢

talli said "nahi gulaal...koi fayada nahi hai jabardasti koi kissi se pyaar nahi kar sakta...aur jabardasti koi kissi k jagah bhi nahi le sakta"

gulaal looked at her and she left for airport

so here is the end of talli torture..ja tu kabhi yahan laut k mat ana..awww the bold nad butiful..Talli..nahi...😆

aftersometime kesar came out of his room he was leaving for work

gulaal saw him and said kesar

kesar stopped and looked at her

gulaal continued kesar tum bevajah zid kar rahe ho...tumne talli ka kitna dil dukhaya hai...mein tumhe hargiz aisa nahi karne dungi?.mein tumhari zindagi barbaad nahi hone doongi kesar

kesar looked back in anger he said "gulaal tum"

and then he saw panba and he stared back at gulaal and left

👏😡Itna suspense acha nahi..meri chotu govinda..naya chappi jaldi la na..pls...Lubbed it just lubbed it...⭐️

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Originally posted by: LoLali

thanks a bunch arti...

after a hard day in college, tons of files , assignments.. ...it is just episodes like friday's and your chaps that make my day yaar.. 😊

i can't believe we have only 1 week left of gulaal and i m damned busy 😕

i don't get proper time to even read all the threads

though i manage to peek in the forum ...
BTW ...come to your FF ,i loved the holi sequence yaara 😊 ...and i have to say your tallie is so besharam.. 😆...direct boli i lub you kesar marry me. 😆 and our kesu is just so kesu..bang bang bang 😆...you made him more kesarish i'd say...

last chap was sweet.. 😳
latest one is fire.. 😊
as a writer i must say..
you r kindling our desire.. 😊

yup i have been by piu's poetry kida... 😆

ps..i need to ask 'do you get the same feeling that kesgul's piu mahri is different from old one...i get this feeling that in kesgul's piu mahri we have piano in background to give it a moder feel on behalf of kesar...while the old one with vasant was more folk like...well i may be wrong.. just wondering...if you had noticed in the first bageecha scene where terrorist was runing around with gullu while kesar watching they had played piu mahri in background*not song just music*...that made me think of the difference...

thanks again for chap 😊

Have so much to gush
But need to rush.. 😆
Tata...

Originally posted by: Keithuu

Hahahaha aarti dear...😊
Yaar...ur chappi padhke aur kuch soch nahi sakti tho jaldi so jaati hun😛
Dreams bhi tho dekhne hai...😳
😛

kiske ramu k or chandamama or cowsheds??????

Originally posted by: prachurya

I wish this was said in the serial:

Kesar continued "kya tumhe manjoor hoga k mein tumse pehle kis aur ko importance du kya zindagi bhar tum is baat se khush reh sakti ho k kesar k har baat par pehla haq gulaal ka hoga kyuki gulaal meri patni hai meri har cheez par mujh par haq sirf gulaal ka hai...aur agar tumhe yeh manjoor bhi hai to munjhe nahi...mein tumhari dosti k liye itna neeche nahi gir sakta"

I loved the drama and the much needed confrontations. I liked how Sudha was shut up. I guess this will pave the way for Kesar's realisation of feelings towards Gullu. I am luking forward to next chappies. Well done Arti