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chweetu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

I felt..she felt..he felt..only breath...Arthi u didn't sponsor any hug.😕katti...🤔..tho woh kudh hi pehenaya😛loved loved loved it Arthi..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

hahaha i thought i was the only mad neil ki deewani, par yaha akeh pata chala ke baat hi kuch aur hai😆

he's so hot na😳.

going to miss him desprately after gulaal finishes.

but there's always, the ff's u write to look foward to😊

yaa but y kurta waala pics...u know if i say kesar wore shirt "shirtless gang" panuce on me...how dare u make him wear shirt let him be shirtless... there are lots of crazy bandis roaming here...just to see him shirtless😆

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Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: chweetu
I felt..she felt..he felt..only breath...Arthi u didn't sponsor any hug.😕katti...🤔..tho woh kudh hi pehenaya😛loved loved loved it Arthi..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

didnt he touched her with his fingers...on her neck and collarbone and moved close his face i dont know kissy dena tha k nahi...agar sunny nahi aata to ahem ahem..aur kya likhu😲

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: nneeiill
wow nice chappi arti
loved it
loved how you portryed kesar;s inner turmoil after knowing the truth
kesar sleeping with gulaal's pic was so sweet..how deeply he thinks of her ...
waiting for his realisation part
and
loved how gulaal lost the game for kesar...
u r so good in story telling
waiting for next.

thanks neili...😛 btw aj waali gf kaun hai

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chweetu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: arti07

didnt he touched her with his fingers...on her neck and collarbone and moved close his face i dont know kissy dena tha k nahi...agar sunny nahi aata to ahem ahem..aur kya likhu😲😕

hehe..u got me...😛ithna passionate feelings ke baadh...last mein woh sunny kyun aaya..necklace kya..bina touch kiye pehena detha..woh..😕u wrote it very well..Arthi...u see my mind is filled with CHII n paap ki bhavana..shayad SF ki effect hai..😳.par koi nahin..next chappie..me want CHII..

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Geeshu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Yeh Sunny kahase aai yaar...

I loved ur this chappi...☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Thanks Arti...😳

Waiting for ur next chappi...😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: chweetu

hehe..u got me...😛ithna passionate feelings ke baadh...last mein woh sunny kyun aaya..necklace kya..bina touch kiye pehena detha..woh..😕u wrote it very well..Arthi...u see my mind is filled with CHII n paap ki bhavana..shayad SF ki effect hai..😳.par koi nahin..next chappie..me want CHII..

no he didt make her wear any necklace sirf anklet or waistlet pehnaya...phir hairlock tha to usko hands se push kar diya and just touched her neck out of passion...and mujhe itni chii news mil rahi hai mein kya chiil likhu in one month is m compleltey detached with this show...this sp had made our show utter crap kabhi jhadu lagwaade hai kabhi zameen par letate hai kabhi tea banvaate hai kabhi bhooka rakhte hai...yeh purush atyachaar ab aur sahen nahi hota mujhse🤢

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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Sree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#299

Nice chapter 26. wow nice twist. nice buildup before to get these scenes today. nice touching sweet punishment by showing gratitude.nice idea 👏 and nice passionate scene almost anatomy 😊.i think IF also introduces censor board for ffs after reading this chapter.😆. generally in serials songs from old movie or released movies se lekar picturise kartey. but in ur ff u picturised a song that has to be released. movie producers take legal action if you didn't take permission from them 😊 oho arti for ff tujhe kya kya karna padraha hai my sympathy to those victims who facing issues for this.🤢 😊. simply take viewers 😍.keep going more trps for your ff.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: Geeshani
Yeh Sunny kahase aai yaar...

I loved ur this chappi...☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Thanks Arti...😳

Waiting for ur next chappi...😍

thanks geesh ! hope u liked it

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