FF Apni preet se mujhe rang de - Page 30

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

hahaha i thought i was the only mad neil ki deewani, par yaha akeh pata chala ke baat hi kuch aur hai😆

he's so hot na😳.

going to miss him desprately after gulaal finishes.

but there's always, the ff's u write to look foward to😊

Originally posted by: chweetu

I felt..she felt..he felt..only breath...Arthi u didn't sponsor any hug.😕katti...🤔..tho woh kudh hi pehenaya😛loved loved loved it Arthi..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

didnt he touched her with his fingers...on her neck and collarbone and moved close his face i dont know kissy dena tha k nahi...agar sunny nahi aata to ahem ahem..aur kya likhu😲

Originally posted by: alanta

Originally posted by: nneeiill

wow nice chappi arti
loved it
loved how you portryed kesar;s inner turmoil after knowing the truth
kesar sleeping with gulaal's pic was so sweet..how deeply he thinks of her ...
waiting for his realisation part
and
loved how gulaal lost the game for kesar...
u r so good in story telling
waiting for next.

Originally posted by: arti07

didnt he touched her with his fingers...on her neck and collarbone and moved close his face i dont know kissy dena tha k nahi...agar sunny nahi aata to ahem ahem..aur kya likhu😲😕

Originally posted by: chweetu

hehe..u got me...😛ithna passionate feelings ke baadh...last mein woh sunny kyun aaya..necklace kya..bina touch kiye pehena detha..woh..😕u wrote it very well..Arthi...u see my mind is filled with CHII n paap ki bhavana..shayad SF ki effect hai..😳.par koi nahin..next chappie..me want CHII..

Originally posted by: Geeshani

Yeh Sunny kahase aai yaar...

I loved ur this chappi...☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Thanks Arti...😳

Waiting for ur next chappi...😍