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Chapter 19

Next morning gulaal was silent ….she was thinking about vasant she was not moarning but she was sad ……..Her heart was in one piece but the emptiness and the hollowness was still there she was sad in the way she hadn't feel before…she was feeling low, worn out and depressed…she didn't felt like working but she had important work at hospital so she quietly left for hospital……….

********************************************************************************************as she reached the hospital she saw a beautiful child was standing with a white lily in her hand……as the child saw gulaal…..she came near her she gave her the flower and kissed her gently and ran away…gulaal was amused just a second before she was feeling black and low……..her spirit was sanked to low ebb and within a sec this lovely child has lifted her mood with her sweet kiss and a beautiful flower…she looked at flower….white lilies were her favourite flowers they symbolizes purity innocence peace and holliness…..she gently smelled the flower……the smell of flower partially recovered her spirit…..she then saw a piece tagged with the flower gulaal took it out it was the jigsaw picture puzzle and something was written at the back ….she was surprised….she walked in the corridor as she walked she saw another child was waiting for her with the white lily tagged with a picture puzzle in her hand….she too came near her gave her the flower and before gulaal could ask anything she kissed her and ran away……..gulaal was surprised…she was pleasantly surprised……..and then she saw another girl with water lily with the picture puzzle..and as walked she recieved ten white lilies with the picture puzzle and 10 sweet kisses of lovely angels…her mood was light her spirit cheered up and she immediately felt warmth and coziness….she walked in her cabin she put the flowers in vase…she took out of all the jigsaw picture puzzle and begin to assemble it with excitement….as she assembled puzzle….she saw it was her photograph…her picture in which she was smiling ecstatically she looked at her picture with great fondness …..She turned its back and it was written

"That is the most beautiful smile I have ever seen"

a smile began in her mind and ran down her face…..she was gazing her pics and the words written in it she then rose her head and looked above kesar was standing outside her cabin he was smiling……..she looked at her in utter bewilderment…..the person who send her those flowers and that lovely message in form of a jigsaw puzzle was kesar…..he did it to cheer her up…as she looked at him….she smiled with her whole face she smiled wth her soft cheeks and lovely smile tinted her cheeks pink…….he looked at her …them he explained to her in sign language……. "That is the most beautiful smile I have ever seen", not that u saw in the picture that one which is on ur face right now…..keep smiling"….he explained her and with a sweet smile bid adieu…..

gulaal was speechless she was happy……and all the day she did what kesar has told her…smile……she smile wen she saw the patient taken care by their friends and relatives outside her cabin…she smiled as she walked inside the children's ward seeing the children refusing to take medicine and nurses struggling to make them take their medicine…she smiled looking at her junior staff having a gala time at canteen….in the afternoon she travelled back home… she looked out of the window of the taxi as it passed the bandra worli sea link …the scenic was splendid…the sky was clear…wind blew gently and the sunrays hit the still water of the ocean and twinkled like the thousand christimas light on the surface….gulaal was watching the sea…the sea in which the river merges ….her form her consiousness her individuality is lost in the sea…..there is no particular existence of her…sometimes wonder y the river wants to loose herself her identity in sea..But then is sea different from the river? From whence the river comes…. it surely comes from the sea…and as it merges with sea it doesnt merge with stranger but with itself its true existence is sea...it flows to sea to attain the oneness and immortality…gulaal was looking at the sea thoughtlfully

She came back home and opened the window….rewa sunny and kesar were standing in the garden area….a baby bird had fallen out of its nest….the baby bird was afraid and chirping loudly

Sunny called" kesar chachu birdie neeche gir gaya hai "

Kesar came there….he gently took the baby bird in his hand and climbed the tree and he put back the baby bird into her nest….

Gulaal saw and came in the garden area…..

She asked "kya ho raha hai"

Rewa said "aksar chidiya k bache gir jaate hain kesar unhe waapas rakh deta hain…bechara bacha kitna darra hua tha"

Sunny said "haan chachi ro raha tha ab dekhiye kitna khush hai

Gulaal smiled and said "haan shayyad kesar dusaro ko khushi dene ki k aadat hai"

Kesr climbed down he looked at gulaal he was walking away

Gulaal said in the most beautiful voice "thanks"

Kesar turned back and asked "thanks kisliye"

Gulaal replied shyly "wo flowers k liye"

Kesar smiled and said "to uske liye thanks kahogi"

He then looked into her eyes and said "thanks plz sorry se rishte banaye jaate hain……par wo majboot tab hote hain jab hume inhe kahne k jarurat hi naa pade"

He turned and then said "aur ek aur baat….always keep smiling……kanhi pada hai smile karne k liye mehnat kam karni padti hein….right doctor"

Gulaal retorted "gulaal"

Kesar replied "doctor"

And he went away

Late afternoon sudha got ready for her party…she asked gulaal to take care of sunny as she may come late in night

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Sunny kesar rewa and gulaal were sitting leisurely in the garden area…..sunny was drawing….gulaal and rewa were talking to each other and kesar was quietly watching gulaal.

Sunny came to kesr and said "chachu kuch drawing banao naa"

Kesar replied thek hai batao kya banau

Sunny said fish

Kesr drew fish

Then sunny said ab ghar banao

Kesar drew and asked ab kya banau

Sunny looked around and said "ab ap gulaal chachi ka sketch banao"

Gulaal was talking to rewa she looked at them with amusement

Kesar looked at gulaal and naughtily said "haan kyu nahi abhi banna deta hun"

And he began to sketch her…..he looked at her and drew the sketch….gulaal was curiuos to see protrait…aftersometime.she quietly got up and went behind kesar and snatched his sketch

Kesar was surprised…he said "arey yeh kya mujhe mera sketch waapas do"

Gulaal laughed and said "kyu du mera sketch hai dekhu to kaisa bana hai"

And then she looked at her sketch and rolled her eyes in amusement and angrily said "yeh mera sketch hai aisi dekhte hun main"

Kesar and sunny started laughing

Rewa was confused she asked "gulaal bhabhi kya hua aap kyu gussa kar rahi hun"

Gulaal complained "dekho na rewa mera sketch kah kar billi ka sketch banaya hai"

Kesar was smiling he playfully said "arey maine to tumhara hi sketch banaya hai…ab mein kya karu agar tum billi jaisi dekhti ho"

Rewa and sunny bursted into laughter…gulaal was irritated she said "kesar mein billi jaise dkehti hun ruko abhi batati hun tumhe "

Kesar ran in the terrace area and she ran after him….they reached in the terrace area…..kesar reached the boundary wall of the terrace he was breathless and gulaal also came running behind her she also touched the wall she was breathless too

Kesar said "ok time up"

Gulaal looked at him and laughed with her broken breath…they both were trying to catch their breadth kesar was leaning on the wall he looked at her hair…they were opened and slid on her face and over her shoulder…..gulaal always fastened her hair with rubber band but today her beautiful hairs were free and careless they slid over her face and gust of wind as her hair opened flowed right through Kesar...wind blew sunrays fell on gulaal and she was smiling… trying to hold her breath and manage her hair and kesar couldn't takes his eyes for her he was smitten by her…he looket her with his increased breath…but then he quickly colleced himself and started walking….

Before leaving he said to gulaal "waise khule baalon mein tum billi nahi lagti"

Gulaal looked back and asked carelessly "kya"

Kesar blushed and said in low voice without seeing her "achi lagti ho"

and then he walked away

Gulaal puzzled for a sec and then she laughed at the way he complimented her…

It was night…she was in her room….she looked at the white lilies that kesar had gifted her and then she looked at sketch that kesar had made……she was looking at them..

Sunny came in her room

Gulaal said "aao sunny"

Sunny said "gulaal chachi mummy aayi nahi mujhe neend aa rahi hai…akele kaise suo"

Gulaal said "koi baat nahi mein sula deti hun"

Gulaal took him to his room and laid him in bed she laid beside sunny and was gently making him sleep

Sunny said chachi song sunana hoga tabhi sunuaga mein

Gulaal said thek hai

And then she remenbered….her mother use to sing a beautiful song "do naina ek kahani" a old hindi song to make her sleep at nights….

She remembered the sond and started singing in the most beautiful voice

Do naina, ek kahaani
thodaa saa baadal
thodaa saa paani
aur ek kahaani

she sang the song kesar and rewa heard her and couldn't resist themselves they walked into sunny's room rewa came inside and sit beside gulaal and kesar stood ouside the door gulaal looked her she stopped rewa asked her to continue as it was lovely song…it was relaxing and…soothing rewa and kesar had heard this song from panba in their childhood they were nostalgic…this song gave them immense pleasure…..gulaal continued her song she looked kesar and with her eyes she asked him to come in…kesar came and sit beside sunny kesar and gulaal put their hands on sunny but hands brushed each other and they withdrew…gulaal continued her song…probably finding herself or her relationship with kesar

Thodi si hai jaanee huyi
thodi si nayi
jahaa ruke aansoo
wanhi pooree ho gayi
hai to nayi fir bhi hai puraani

Thodha sa badal thodha sa paani aur ek kahani

After some time sunny rewa and kesar fell asleep…gulaal looked around she put blanket on rewa and sunny….she was walking away she turned and saw kesar….she came near him…he was sleeping ….she put blanket on him…and stared at him….. His charm, his kindness reflected in his face….how innocent he looked while he slept…..she looked at him in silence… she remembered the last stnaza of the song

O Ek Khatam Ho – To Doosri
Raat Aa Jaati Hai
Honton Pe Fir – Bhooli Huyi
Baat Aa Jaati Hai
Do Naino'n Ki Hai Ye Kahaani
……...

Amazed at her own feeling she drew her hands near his cheek….her hand was too close to him but then she quikly withdrew her hands and in haste walked out of the room….unknowingly that kesar had felt the warmth of her hand on his face…he gently touched his cheek and felt her……

Yes it is the story of two eyes, little bit familiar little bit new little bit tears little bit emotions…it is the story of kesar and gulaal……….


Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Chapter 20

Next day gulaal was very much happy and very much lively…she did her household chores with much enthusiasm...….kesar was studying in his room.

Gulaal came in his room with the cup of tea and looked around the room was complete mess….she looked at room and said "yeh kya abhi to meine pura room saaf kiya tha itni jaldi kharab kar diya"

Kesar looked at her and looked at his room and carelessly said "nahi kaha dirty hai sab saaf to hai"

Gulaal said "acha, yanha wanha books padi hue hain notes bikhare hue aur tum ise saaf kehte ho"

Kesar replied" ab mein clean room mein statue k tarah nahi rah sakta…ab mein room mein rahunga to saman bhi idhar udhar hilega"

Gulaal said "to pure room ko hilane k kya jarurat thi"

Kesar said "aur ab tum pura ghar hila rahi ho….take it easy"

Gulaal said "nahi…ab tumhe yeh pura room clean kar na hoga"

Kesar "no ways"

Gulaal said "nahi karna hoga"

Kesar replied "tumhe aisa kyu lagta mein tumhari har baat manuga"

Gulaal replied carelessly "lagta nahi hai yakeen hai"

And she left

Kesar stood silent for a moment and then smiled and started cleaning his room

Gulaal went in her room she got ready for the hospital she just looked at the sketch that kesar had drawn and smiled and said to her "nahi mein billi nahi lagti bilkul nahi"

She left and reached hospital as she entered her room she found white lilies waiting for her on her desk….white lilies that kesar has send.. These lilies were not mere flowers but a promise…..to keep gloominess and sadness away from her…. "promise "not a fatal word not a burden oath; but his strong determination to fill her each day with happiness and care, …a promise of friendship companionship for rest of his life, a promise of undying love made by him unknowingly…she took the flowers in her hand gently touched it and felt the affection and tender care he had send through those lilies she closed her eyes and savour the moment

She then resumed her work

It was evening gulaal finished her duty and she was leaving……..dr dushyant came after her he asked "kya mein tumhe ghar chod dun"

Gulaal replied back "nahi dushyantji kesar ka dance school paas mein hi hai mein wanha chali jaungi wanhi se hum ghar chale jaayenge"

She then took the leave and she reached dance school

Gulaal inquired about kesar at dance school and then headed towards the room where kesar was teaching dance

She stood outside the room she saw kesar teaching salsa to kids

Kesar danced with perfection and precision almost unbelievable. He danced with finesse, grace, power and conviction…..gulaal was standing silently watching him….suddenly the kids looked at her and they stopped dancing

Kesar inquired "kya baat hai dance kyu band kar diya"

Children pointed towards gulaal kesar turned around and looked at gulaal

Gulaal became conscious she said "mein to bas yunhi khadi thi wo tumahara dance class over ho jayega to saath mein ghar chale-nge"

Before kesar could say anything some of the kids talked to themselves and then one of them came near to gulaal she hold her hand and took her inside the class and said "ab apko bhi dance dikhana hoga"

Gulaal was surprised she asked "dance par mein...Kyu?"

The child said "kesar's- rule hai, yanha sirf dekhna nahi hota yanha dance karna hota hai"

Kesr intervene "arey yeh kya…kyu tang kar rahe ho"

The other child said "no rule is rule u said na yanha par koi bhi chupchap dance nahi dekhega sab yanha dance karenge"

Gulaal looked at kesar…..

Kesar said to kid "jaane do gulaal ko use dance karna nahi aata"

Gulaal looked at him and then looked around there were pairs of ghunghroo lying on the bench she walked towards the bench...She wore the ghunghuroo and then she danced…….she performed bharatnatyam on salsa tune….gulaal was a great classical dancer……she danced exceptionally well….kesar was surprised and stunned….he never saw such a elegant and beautiful dance…he was lost in her captivating moves…his heartbeat rhythm with her footstep.the music ended and gulaal stopped dancing….all the children t present there clapped and surrounded her

They said jointly "hey hume bhi sikhao"

Gulaal smiled and looked at kesar…he took a deep breath and then said to children "haan sab ko seekha dengi chalo ab class over ho gayi hai chalo sab ghar jao"

Afterthat everyone pack their bags and bid adieu….kesar and gulaal were all alone….both were quiet….gulaal sat on the bench to take out her ghunghroo and kesar walked towards the music player he carelessly changed the tune

While changing the tune he said to gulaal in playful manner "waise tum dance itna bura nahi karti"

Gulaal looked at him and said "oh really thanks"

Kesar turned back and asked smilingly "haan waise kab seekha"

Gulaal said" bachpan mein Bengali hun bharatnatyam to ana hi chahiye"

And then she struggled to open the knot of her ghunghroo…it was stucked…she then looked at kesar…he looked at her and smiled as now it almost became routine for him…she now and then stucked herself and looked for help…and kesar always there to help her….

He came near and sat on his knees…..he gently touched her feet and open the knot….gulaal looked at him smiled back

Kesar was still sitting on his knees

Soft romantic music "I knew I loved you (savage garden)" began to play on the music player….

Kesar looked lovingly into her beautiful eyes and asked softly "shall we dance"?

Gulaal looked at him and said "par mujhe tumhara waala western dance nahi aata"

Kesar said "koi baat nahi mein seekha dunga"

And he took her hand gently in his and took her to middle of the room….kesar put his hand around her waist and gently took her hand and put on his shoulder…he then taught her simple steps of ball dance…gulaal was a quick learner she quickly learned the step and danced elegantly with him…..they danced with open arms.The music was soft gentle and slow and they express themselves thorugh dance they danced as perfect adagio

After a while Gulaal started talking while she danced "waise tum bhi dance itna bura nahi karte"

Kesar replied "oh really thanks"

Gulaal said "to tumhe dance hamsesha se acha lagta hai"

Kesar said "haan bachpan se"

Gulaal asked" aur kya kya acha lagta hai"

Kesar said "squash motocross bungee jumping river rafting"

Gulaal asked "aur"

Kesar said "aur barsat mein bike se long drive par jaana"

Gulaal "aur"

Kesar thought and said dhabba mein khana khana

Gulaal asked "aur"

Kesar looked deep into her eyes and said softly "aur tumse baatein karna"

Gulaal was thrilled to look at the longing in his eyes to some extent she had the same feeling she came closer and asked "aur"

Kesar's hand came to her waist and he pulled her close while dancing and in the most sweet voice he said "aur tumhare saath time spend karna"

Gulaal moved towards him putting her hand around his neck and asked "aur"

Kesar replied "aur tumahare saath bitaye hue har pal ko baar baar yaad karna"

Gulaal asked aur

Kesar said "aur……"

And then he couldn't speak any further…..gulaal and kesar stood there holding onto one another holding too close…..they looked into each other…the beautiful eyes met the passionate eyes…..and with the depth of emotion both were taken by…..then there was no need of words the soft and romactic music was floating in the room and they were speechless only their eyes talked to one another….at this moment they were completely mesmerized…..

After a while gulaal speaked soflty "should we stop dancing"

Kesar replied "hum dance nahi kar rahe…."

Gulaal looked around…they were not daincing they were just holding each other….gulaal regained herself…….she parted with him quickly with a rush of breath while he held his eyes in the bond that cant be broken..They both felt the rush of emotions so intense that it left them speechless…there was an akward silence in the room…

Finally gulaal broke the silence said "kesar der ho rahi hai ghar chalna chahiye" and she quickly came out of the room

Then kesar and gulaal sent on the car…..they drove home in between they both ddint speak as both were in deep thought….just recalling what happened there.

They reached home and saw panba was sitting with someone

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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guyz chapter 20 updated ...this is a new thread as we crossed 150 pgs...i updated all chappie here...
still down with fever ... bear if found boring😳
and plz tell should i still continue or stop ...malaria mein waise bhi jyada mind nahi chalta😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Arti for the the new chapter..
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oh wow arti
such an awesome chapter..
expressing love thoruhg dance is one of the most beautiful thing in the world
there is some purity in the way u tell K and G's tale
u r simply superb
am gonna read this chappi again and again
u know dance is my passion too..so i just loved it
big hug to you for making my morning so refreshing wth your tale
pls continue...this is not just another regular FF
we feel connected to Kesar and Gulaal you created..it is no less than the show we watch!
and yea take care of ur health...
Edited by nneeiill - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinolya

Thanks Arti for the the new chapter..

thanks vino😳
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forgot to write " I knew I loved" by savage garden is one of ma fav
gonna listen it know and imagine K n G dancing on it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07

guyz chapter 20 updated ...this is a new thread as we crossed 150 pgs...i updated all chappie here...

still down with fever ... bear if found boring😳
and plz tell should i still continue or stop ...malaria mein waise bhi jyada mind nahi chalta😛

Aarti do take rest and take your own time to write new chapters but then dont quit writing yaar... pls.. we all love your FF... really !!!
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Originally posted by: nneeiill

oh wow arti

such an awesome chapter..
expressing love thoruhg dance is one of the most beautiful thing in the world
there is some purity in the way u tell K and G's tale
u r simply superb
am gonna read this chappi again and again
u know dance is my passion too..so i just loved it
big hug to you for making my morning so refreshing wth your tale
pls continue...this is not just another regular FF
we feel connected to Kesar and Gulaal you created..it is no less than the show we watch!
and yea take care of ur health...

haila itne jaldi padh liya thanks...i hope neil is good dancer as after watching that turba i thought to skip this dance waala chapiie😉
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Originally posted by: nneeiill

forgot to write " I knew I loved" by savage garden is one of ma fav

gonna listen it know and imagine K n G dancing on it

mine too though " truly madly and deeply" lyrics actually goes well with the real kes-gul

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