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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Oh what a heartbreaking chapter! If I have to hate one between Sudha and PB - it will be PB... Sudha wants to favour her niece... but what is PB thinking?! Can she not see the change in her son's life with the coming of Gulaal grrr!

Arti - You're superwoman dude! How fast do you write and update?! Like whoaaa! ⭐️

JZee

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Incense

@Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: sauris
Really nice episode pur here also talli took up 3/4 episode😕

thanks dear ya one chappii is dedicated to her...though i hate to do this but it was essential part of the ff...dont worry see i didnt let dushy come near gullu i will not let talli come near kesar😛

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Incense

@Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: JZephyr
Oh what a heartbreaking chapter! If I have to hate one between Sudha and PB - it will be PB... Sudha wants to favour her niece... but what is PB thinking?! Can she not see the change in her son's life with the coming of Gulaal grrr!

Arti - You're superwoman dude! How fast do you write and update?! Like whoaaa! ⭐️

xx

JZee

panba is traditional orthodox lady who cant accept her DIL elder than her son...plus her son is underage and his marriage was against his wish it was a compromise marriage...i remember "dil chahta hai" sidhaarth mom she was modern mom but sill she cant accept the fact that her son is in love with 10 year elder woman...this kind of attitude is much common in indian woman...its even hard for them to accept a girl who is equal to their son's age

what should i say she is typical indian mom...and thanks jzee for liking just wanna complete the ff before the forum ends😳

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: arti07

panba is traditional orthodox lady who cant accept her DIL elder than her son...plus her son is underage and his marriage was against his wish it was a compromise marriage...i remember "dil chahta hai" sidhaarth mom she was modern mom but sill she cant accept the fact that her son is in love with 10 year elder woman...this kind of attitude is much common in indian woman...its even hard for them to accept a girl who is equal to their son's age

what should i say she is typical indian mom...and thanks jzee for liking just wanna complete the ff before the forum ends😳

Oh Reemz said the forum doesn't end like that, just with the show going off air... if there is activity enough, its stays on, and even when it gets archived, I think one can still make posts!

And I do know what you mean about the dogmatic mind set up of PB - but unlike Sid's mother in DCH, she has actually gotten a chance to know Gulaal - before she became Kesar's forced wife, as well as the difference she has brought in Kesar's life! An opportunity that Sid's mom did not have! I know mental blocks are hard to move... but if she would actually begin to notice her son, and her son's recent rise and conding with Gulaal - she is a mother and would know exactly what's happening and changing! The worst part is, Gulaal has the obligation of her promise which she will be forced to keep - PB forgets the marriage is not a one person bond, and she has neither ever asked Kesar to keep distance or promise, nor asked him now, if he wants to marry again at all! All she can see is, Gulaal moves out of the way, Kesar settles down!

But yes - that's how things are, most of the times, sadly!

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chweetu

@chweetu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Good chappie.Arthi..😛though it has terrorist...u have still kept alive her senses..n brain..😆thanks for that..😉but Gulaal..breaking down..b4 kesar tho bantha hai..na..😳I am expecting this scene between d 2..as soon as possible..😛I have faith in u..dat u will send talli to bermuda triangle..😆so..plz make d situation between d kes-gul as it was b4.😳

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sukriti19a

@sukriti19a

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

jus loved ur this chapter... gulaal in tears.. and kesar missing her... well love to see push and pull scene betn gulaal n kesar... kesar jealous... and dont make him soo goody .. he was a brat.. right .. so let him be a bit possessive ... try to break limit... which gulaal cant... but he cant control his feeling...hope u understand my feeling Arti ...

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

OMG Breaking news..bole to FF mein Talli ka brain chalta hai😲...nice chappi arti..⭐️.OMG Ye kesu sketch bhi kar leta hai...kesu hai ki Talent ka bhandaar...🤣.

Oh seriously..I love your FF😳..Bole to ekdum..soulful...👏aur tune Gullu ko already in love dikha diya.😲...now we want kesu love.😳..eeerrr bole to mad and ppassionate love.😍.samjhi na😉

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--Minks--

@--Minks--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Hey Arti... loved the last 2 chapters.. good going... despite the entry of Talli, I am loving the flow of your story... I just wish to see more of Kesar-Gulaal on-screen as well as in your FF.. can we plz have more of the these two together, anyhow... romantic na sahi, nut saath rahe.. that's all I care about.

Hope Kesar realises his feelings for Gulaal soon... your FF is opposite of the TV story, where Gulaal has realised her feelings for Kesar before he has. Now, he just needs to know about his mom and bhabhi's plans to get him married to Talli... I can't wait to see how Kesar reacts.. will that be the catalyst to make him realise his feelings for Gulaal... can't wait to see that...

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vinolya

@vinolya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Ohhh Goddd introduction of Talli 😡 here too.. hum sab ghumthe rahjayenge..😛

Aarti, ch 22 and 23 were really good... Gulaal has so much feelings for Kesar, just that she is not able to express it and I doubt if she would ever do it to Kesar. On the other hand when will Kesar realise that he loves Gulaal.. but I guess he has already started loving her and this is so clear when he drew her sketch without even seeing her... omg this is so very difficult to draw a person's image without even seeing him / her... loved the ending part of chapter 23... it was awesome !!!! see Aarti this was a beautiful idea that you put in.. I liked it.

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

@Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

ale ale wah wah kya chappi hai aarti👏

kesu ko khone ke dar ne gullu ko hilla diya

kesu -talli ki fraanship ne uska dil jala diya

kesu ne bhi dil hi dil mein gullu ka sketch dana diya

hai re ye pb and sudha ne kaisa raita phela diya😆

Kesar looked above and saw talli?talli is 20 year old niece of sudha she is childhood friend of kesar and was studying in US she had just arrived in India-talli studied in US🤣chalo ji now we'll get pharner wale ghatiya expressions🤣or she may call kesar as KHEISARRR🤣

Kesar said playfully "finally tujhe american govt ne ban kar diya naa?chalo waha k logo ko to shaanti mil gayi"aur hamari shanti chin gayi🤣

Kesr returned in the evening...talli and kesar soon engaged themselves in conversation-i am not feelin good abt it😭

He said "wow talli that's such a cool phone tujhe yaad tha mujhe yahi chahiye tha"wah wah technology ka kamal now gende ke phool ki mala is replaced by smart phone🤣

Kesar said "talli u r sweetheart"wattt😡

Gulaal stood there muted and speechless just like a parched land silently watching her rain laden cloud just passing by without shedding one drop of its priceless content...she looked at kesar and talli blankly.aww its too painful, poor gulaal😭

Then talli started preparing for lunch gulaal asked kya bana rahi ho...talli said "oodiyon k sabzi"here arrives the pet ke raaste ke gate pe lage lock ki key🤣

Rewa came close to kesar and pulled his leg and said in his ears" kyu re kesar ab tu gulaal k haath ka bana hua khana sirf khusboo pehchaan jaata hai..kya baat hai tu apni wife k haath ka khana dekh kar pehchaane laga hai"oh reva is so cute,hope she doesn't turn into a chota vamp at the end😆

talli was waiting for him...talli saw him and said "chalo kesar discotheque chalte hain"e lo aa gaya another blow , talli in turbatheck 🤣 i cant imagine her doing anything other than that bhayanak turba🤣

gulaal went in her room and stood near the window she qiuelty watched the car leaving the premises and soon it disappeared...as the car disappeared a tear like a dewdrop fell from her cheek-aarey yaar ab aur nahi saha jata😭

talli came and interrupted "kitna pyaara gulaal ka sketch banaya hai"

kesar came out of his thought and looked at the paper he has made gulaal's sketch while he was in deep thought...he was surprised to see it..how and why did he made her sketch...he kept wondering-wowie this is too good😍👏

pls pls aarti dear thoda pain kesu ko bhi de de, apni gullu akele akele kab tak sahegi😭i wanna see passionate kesu, jaldi jaldi lao👏