Sufferings - Page 3

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Dear All

Well it might sound a little late..but actually when Gulaal had her first tears of love'when Kesar told her about his fasting and promise to keep her happy always..I had written these lines..to depict Kesar's state of mind..Hope you like it.

SUFFERINGS

Keep mum or be quiet

But you will always be in my sight

Keep distances as much as you can

But remember there is one man

With his eyes filled

With tears that are chilled

Voice that is choked

And heart gently stroked

Dreams in my eyes

Still the heart strives

To see you

To feel you

So I am setting out to sow

The seeds of love

That will surely grow

Because sufferings bravely borne

Melts even the heart of a stone

'Luv is a dream ,luv is hell,where pleasure pain and repentance dwell

It is a beautiful dream'. dream it

It is luv..just luv it'

Originally posted by: Gman

I always read your beautiful poem and ghatiya sayar ofc, My name is Gina.😉

PS. forgot to mention but this poem i will treasure it.

Thanx Gina..bole to you read my ghatiya shayari's..😲.thanx dear...hey this poem is very close to my heart too😳

Originally posted by: Shee_xaan

I love it too

Thanx dear😳

Originally posted by: truedecent

oh my piyu, i love u🤗what a fantastic poem u have written👏so i m setting out to sow, the seeds of love, that vl surely grow😍lovely piyu lovely, i cant say in words that how much i loved this poem, u should write more poetry piyu, i mean other than hamari ghatiya shairi😆ur achi wali shairi bhi superb hai👏

Oh kiran 🤗..thank you.😳.kabhi kabhi..kuch sensible likhne ka bhi man kar leta hai😆

Originally posted by: bioinfo

@piyu-ye boni shoni gaya dabbe mein , now mai dushy ban gayi hun and ghatiya shayari taj jitne ke liye mai kuch bhi karungi, chahe mujhe tujko bridge se dhakka hi kyun na dena pade😡ye taj mera hai, ha ha ha ha😡

Haila...😲.maine gaya phulon ka taron ka sab ka kehna hai.😳.ek hazaron mein meri behna hai.😳.par tu ne mujhe dhakka dene ki baat ki...😭chal*steps aside and makes way for boni*..tere liye taaj to kya...jaan bhi haazir hai😳

Haila...😲.maine gaya phulon ka taron ka sab ka kehna hai.😳.ek hazaron mein meri behna hai.😳.par tu ne mujhe dhakka dene ki baat ki...😭chal*steps aside and makes way for boni*..tere liye taaj to kya...jaan bhi haazir hai😳

Originally posted by: bioinfo

Haila...😲.maine gaya phulon ka taron ka sab ka kehna hai.😳.ek hazaron mein meri behna hai.😳.par tu ne mujhe dhakka dene ki baat ki...😭chal*steps aside and makes way for boni*..tere liye taaj to kya...jaan bhi haazir hai😳

hain.😭.bole to"*wipes tears from eyes*..aaj main khush hun😳..meri boni ne ghatiya shayari ki zimmedari le li..ab main chintamukt hun😆

sufferings post me kya suffering ho ra hai clueless 😭 😊