Sufferings

Dear All

Well it might sound a little late..but actually when Gulaal had her first tears of love…when Kesar told her about his fasting and promise to keep her happy always..I had written these lines..to depict Kesar's state of mind..Hope you like it.

SUFFERINGS

Keep mum or be quiet

But you will always be in my sight

Keep distances as much as you can

But remember there is one man

With his eyes filled

With tears that are chilled

Voice that is choked

And heart gently stroked

Dreams in my eyes

Still the heart strives

To see you

To feel you

So I am setting out to sow

The seeds of love

That will surely grow

Because sufferings bravely borne

Melts even the heart of a stone

…Luv is a dream ,luv is hell,where pleasure pain and repentance dwell

It is a beautiful dream…. dream it

It is luv..just luv it…

Originally posted by: chweetu

Beautiful..poetry..piu..🤗loved each n every phrase..👏👏

👏

Thanks Siree😳

Originally posted by: Gulaalfreak

👏Loved it, though I didn't understand it!

Hain.. thanx😳.sachi*hi five*. bole to .mujhe bhi samajh nahi aya maine kya likha😉

Originally posted by: Geeshani

Loved it..😊..So emotional...😳

Me also felt so emotional.😭.geeshu..thanx😳

Originally posted by: MeySimi

Dear Piu,

Beautiful and lovely poem. It is so touching

You should write more, one for each episode.

How about writing one for yesterday's episode showing Kesar's pain and sufferings?

Thanx Ganga..🤗.this is very close to my heart..😭hey will try...thanx for your motivation😳