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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo

kiran kiran aacha hua tu aa gayi,

ye talli naam ki beeemari ff par cha gayi'
dekh na ye aarti kar rahi hai late,
next ff ke liye mai nahi kar sakti wait.


👏 kya baat hai chaitu, yar u piyu geesh sab superb shair saying 😆

n me cant like ur posts now for 24 hours
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Posted: 14 years ago

Waqt guzarta raha par arti nahi aayi

phoot padi meri ankhon se rulayi

Chal kiran ek VM request maine phir se banayi

chappi nahi aya ..charo taraf hai tanhayi😭

Kiran..ek Vm request hai..gullu slowly falling in love

ek dhansoo vm bana on the song aisi chali jab hawa ishq hua hi hua...from movie ..aja nach le..u will deffo love this song

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Posted: 14 years ago
ok me on shairi hartaal 🤓

jab tak nahi ayega arti ka chappi,
tab tak nahi ayegi meri shairi 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
arey yaar abhi to mujhe sirf sher hi sher nazar aa rahe hain...mujhe shayyari hangover ho gaya hai will update soon...aur sab log come to CC mein yanha se wanha jump kar rahi hun
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: truedecent

ok me on shairi hartaal 🤓


jab tak nahi ayega arti ka chappi,
tab tak nahi ayegi meri shairi 😭

Arre yaar yeh tum kya karne jayengi
tears tears behne lagi from my aankonki
care bears cartoon mujhe achchi lagi
isse zada aarti ki FF mujhe achchi lagne lagi
Edited by Geeshani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I must share dis wid u, Arti. I was reading the chappie and my elder sis just peeped in and she became so engaged dat she told me not to scroll the page before she completed reading. And both of us burst out laughing where Kesar took Gulaal wid him and gatecrashed the party and even clicked photos wid dem(Chhichhora kahinka!!!! Both of dem reminded me of Bunty Aur Babli!)
Romantic scene toh MashaAllah tha...kya kahooon!
Gulaal was chopping vegetable..she heard her name and she stopped..the sound of her name on his lips was so sweet intense and passionate..that her heart skip the beat for a sec...kesar had never call gulaal by her name he has always addressed her as aap tum inhe wo but never her name...never infront of anyone...and now that he called her by name it sounded as if a soft breeze has tinkled a wind chime?as if a stone has propogated a wave in the still water
after sometime she stopped crying and she she was in his arms with closed eyes he held her without speaking she felt that his caress kept lonilessness and fear away..the affection the tenderness she longed for lied within his arms she felt the warmth of his breadth in her face and she savoured the closeness of his body.. her thoughts her mind were blank her world seemed to stopped at that momment the wind was blowing with a sound the crackers were bursted backside at the wedding reception the clouds was thundering but all she can feel was the warmth of his body.. she opened her eyes looked into his eyes that were filled with an unknown emotions for her there was the helpless rush of emotions..but then she realized that she was holding kesar and kesar realized he was holding her suddenly she jerked away...kesar withdrew himself and took a deep breath

You totally got me watching a movie of this FF, and after reading those lines my sis cudn't believe dat u sleep during Romantic movies. Gr8 going Artio, waiting eagerly for chapter 19. Dono ke mann mein thodi thodi paap ki bhavna jaag uthi hai 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

I must share dis wid u, Arti. I was reading the chappie and my elder sis just peeped in and she became so engaged dat she told me not to scroll the page before she completed reading. And both of us burst out laughing where Kesar took Gulaal wid him and gatecrashed the party and even clicked photos wid dem(Chhichhora kahinka!!!! Both of dem reminded me of Bunty Aur Babli!)

Romantic scene toh MashaAllah tha...kya kahooon!
Gulaal was chopping vegetable..she heard her name and she stopped..the sound of her name on his lips was so sweet intense and passionate..that her heart skip the beat for a sec...kesar had never call gulaal by her name he has always addressed her as aap tum inhe wo but never her name...never infront of anyone...and now that he called her by name it sounded as if a soft breeze has tinkled a wind chime?as if a stone has propogated a wave in the still water
after sometime she stopped crying and she she was in his arms with closed eyes he held her without speaking she felt that his caress kept lonilessness and fear away..the affection the tenderness she longed for lied within his arms she felt the warmth of his breadth in her face and she savoured the closeness of his body.. her thoughts her mind were blank her world seemed to stopped at that momment the wind was blowing with a sound the crackers were bursted backside at the wedding reception the clouds was thundering but all she can feel was the warmth of his body.. she opened her eyes looked into his eyes that were filled with an unknown emotions for her there was the helpless rush of emotions..but then she realized that she was holding kesar and kesar realized he was holding her suddenly she jerked away...kesar withdrew himself and took a deep breath

You totally got me watching a movie of this FF, and after reading those lines my sis cudn't believe dat u sleep during Romantic movies. Gr8 going Artio, waiting eagerly for chapter 19. Dono ke mann mein thodi thodi paap ki bhavna jaag uthi hai 😉

thanks purchuyra ..and thanks to ur sis for reading... so sweet...and i can sleep anywhere even in the world cup finals among dhol and nagadas...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wake up Arti
Sare pal kahe
Wake up Arti
Hum sabhi kahe
Aa rahi hai sadda
Sun sako tho suno suno(chappiii chapppiii chapiii)
Wake up...!!!!!!😈


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Posted: 14 years ago
eventough it is predictable, nice kichdi , old wine in new bottle it is fun n entertaining FF to read nice attempt 👏😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
@arti..
kaha hai yaar tu
jaldi likh na chappi 19
i want to see kesar thinking about gulaal 24x7...ab zara kesar ko pata tho chale 24 o gante kisi ke yaad mai kaisa raha jaata hai

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