DS-Gulsar:-Wahin Bathein2 part2onpg49NotePg50

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Wow Alanta.👏.that was beautiful😍..infact excellent..⭐️.I think now I can't wait..😭

Pls update soon yaar🤗

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Gman
Alanta, it is much awaited, beautiful and so heart touching scene.❤️ Loved it to core. The best part is that you have revealed the secret of green bangles and hidden imlis in search of the estimate bill.aakhir Kesar ke aankhon se kab tak bachte rehte He must be over the moon to see Imlis in her drawer. 😆The guy ate undiyu in dinner followed by sudha joke cracked on Kesar😆. Kesar saw Gulaal in Gulaal and Undiyu was Undiyu ofc this time.Comic relief Very well done.

The must must scene came, where guy embrace her beloved wife from behind while she is combing her hair and promises not leave here and life beyond. What a promise it is? 😭 Crying out of happiness.Thats why they are Gulsar na BEYOND LIFE Thank you alanta for weaving such beautiful scene and sharing with us. Please do keep writing. love you dear a lot. ❤️😃Ur comment means a lot

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Wow Alanta.👏.that was beautiful😍..infact excellent..⭐️.I think now I can't wait..😭
Pls update soon yaar🤗

piu dear🤗Thank you for liking. Part 4 was the climax😭

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Chaithu,Gina rona band karna plz ab mein tum logon ko aise rothe hue nahin dekh saktha, jaldhi ek naya dream leke aaungi 😳

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: alanta
Chaithu,Gina rona band karna plz ab mein tum logon ko aise rothe hue nahin dekh saktha, jaldhi ek naya dream leke aaungi 😳

he he see emotional blackmail always works😉jaldi lao jaldi lao😃

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Gman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: alanta

@ bold : Yes dear title goes down very well the DS. Absolutely brilliant.

And your DS is such pleasure to read. Thank you again dear.

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: alanta
Chaithu,Gina rona band karna plz ab mein tum logon ko aise rothe hue nahin dekh saktha, jaldhi ek naya dream leke aaungi 😳

ha ha update soon.....main ne unres kiya in pg 7😊

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Gman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: alanta
Chaithu,Gina rona band karna plz ab mein tum logon ko aise rothe hue nahin dekh saktha, jaldhi ek naya dream leke aaungi 😳

😃😃❤️❤️😉😉