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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

lovely lovely lovely alanta 👏 👏, it was excellent yaar i loved it so much, me so glad u r continuing it yipppyyy specially the last lines, i loved them yar 😃

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
lovely lovely lovely alanta 👏 👏, it was excellent yaar i loved it so much, me so glad u r continuing it yipppyyy specially the last lines, i loved them yar 😃

Kiran tu aagayi🤗Oh I just cant believe...Thanks yaara, yes I will try

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Alanta,

Sorry for my delay, but finally got around to reading all 4 pieces - and although it took me plenty of re-reading, cause my Hindi can really suck, all the more when I'm trying to 'read' it in words - but they are all well done.

The one I really liked was the 3rd - especially the section of it where Kesar sums up his journey with Gulaal... from being a child, to becoming an adult! He's a complicated character and his love life is beyond complicated - but you verbalize the tangles very well!

Keep writing 😊

JZee

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Reshma.AS
Hey Alanata,

I have read the first two posts long time back, i was busy so i could not read the rest, today i was just going through the scenes, oh my god, you are amazing... kaash CV's should take your tips and continue the serial...

i can not stay with out appriciating you yaar...👏

i was living in those scenes still...😍

superb dialogues👏

dont even ask "Shall I continue" just go ahead... I am expecting more and more and ------------ from you... All the best 👍🏼 👍🏼

Reshma🤗missed you a lot dear. your comments have always encouraged me and thanks 4 appreciating. I am overwhelmed 😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: JZephyr
Alanta,

Sorry for my delay, but finally got around to reading all 4 pieces - and although it took me plenty of re-reading, cause my Hindi can really suck, all the more when I'm trying to 'read' it in words - but they are all well done.

The one I really liked was the 3rd - especially the section of it where Kesar sums up his journey with Gulaal... from being a child, to becoming an adult! He's a complicated character and his love life is beyond complicated - but you verbalize the tangles very well!

Keep writing 😊

xx
JZee

Jzee pls dont say sorry, you read and commented and that itself means a lot, and yes the 3rd one is my personal favorite too. Its not ur problem dear, bec my knowledge in hindi is so poor that it cause difficulty to the readers any way you managed with it and glad that you liked😳

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: alanta

Kiran tu aagayi🤗Oh I just cant believe...Thanks yaara, yes I will try

yes dear main agayi 🤗 han yar tu continue kar warna hum tujhe nahi choren ge 😆 😃

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Reshma.AS

so when is your next post about our gulsar scenes... i am mostly awaiting😍 for that.. please dont stop.. CV's stopped the serial, suddenly.. I got hurt.. if you stop this also to the same extent i wl get hurt 😭

Actually I dont know what should I say..Though I was satisfied with what the CVs gave us in the climax, I so wanted it in a way similar to what I wrote, thats why its a DS. As of now I am totally blank, but will try my best to continue, anyway one phase is over and if there is I will surely inform you😊