Why always me....part 2 updated on page 1

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys.....new hand on writing. ...hope u all like it......aur agar psnd na aaye....then do tell me.....so that it won't be repeated in future......so here it goes......



Dipped legs in the pools......in deep thoughts.....was in another world world of dream.......then suddenly a voice from behind made her shocked........

Guddan: arre alisha tum yha....koi baat .....

Alisha: kyu......kyu aayi tum meri aur meri mummy ki zindagi.....me. ......kyu barbaad kiya hume.......

Guddan: alisha dekho aisa kuch nahi hai......tumhe sirf adhura sach pta hai......

Alisha: kis sach ke baare me bol rhi ho......tum kal keh rhi thi na....bahut so called pyarr kartI ho mujhse....toh prove karo....chali jao meri life se.....agar nahi ja sakti toh mere nafrat ko jhelo. ...kyunki meri chahat tumahri barbadi hai....

(Alisha goes from there and guddan running behind her)

Guddan: alisha suno.....

Alisha : Kuch nhi sunna. .....chali jao yha se....

Guddan (in from of lord krishna): lord krishna. ...aap toh humare best frnd hai na......toh aisa kyu.....humesa kyu.....ha sjaye the sapne maa bnne ke. .....pr ye guddan se na ho paya. .....itni nafrat kyu bhari antra uss ladki me....jo aaj apne khud ke parivaar ko barbaad karna chahti hai.........bahut koshish ki usse samjhane ki pr har baar fail......koi toh raasta dikhao apne iss dost ko......

Then she gets an idea......

(Next in part 2. ....first of all tell ur views.)

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Bhumi1992 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#2

Nice start 😊

Keep writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

Nice start 😊

Keep writing

Thank u bhumi

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great start👍🏼

Keep going..cont soon😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

She gets an idea.....

She calls someone. .......

To the caller: humne jaisa kaha hai waise he karna. ....aur koi bhi glti na ho.....

~next day......

Someone is ringing bell continuously. .....

Durga: aa rahe hai.......itni subah subah pta nahi kon aa gya...

Aj: durga bahu apne guddan ko dekha subah suabh pta nhi kaha gayab ho gayi......aur ye kon hai gate pr jara dekiye toh.....

Durga nods and opens the door......

There is none other than guddan with some men......looking more like a bodyguards......

Aj: guddan ye sab kon hai....

Guddan: are jindal sahab do min rukiye. ...sab ka introduction dete hai. ............alisha..........alisha ........jaldi aao dekho kon aya hai......

Alisha: kya tamasha lga rkha hai subah suabh.....

Guddan : are tum toh gussa ho gyi....dekho kon aya hai....ye sab tumhe waha lekar jayenge....jaha tumahri sahi jaga hai.......tumne jo kuch dino pehle chori ki thi ussi ke gunah me tumhe ye sab arrest karne aya hai.....

Alisha: ye sab jhut hai. ..aadarniya rasoiya. ...apki priye patni jo mujhse pyar karne ka dawa karti hai mujhe narak me bhejna chahti hai....

Aj: kya behuda majak lga rkha hai guddan......why the hell u r doing this?

Guddan: hahahhahaa majak.....zindagi toh humari majak banners gyi hai.....ek taraf apki beti.....Jiske liye aap duniya se ladne ke liye tayaar hai......usko sachai se durr kar rhe hai (in my story guddan wants to tell the truth to alisha but aj opposes).....aur ek ye jo apke pyar aur dard ko mehsoos toh durr ki baat hai........apke pyar aur care ko natak bta rhi hai. ..

Aj: guudan please hum iss pr baad me baat karenge....abhi nhi. ...

Alisha: sach kaisa sach......

Durga: jisne tum bekhabar ho......

Alisha: I want to know the truth.....itna toh guddan ko samajh gye hai ki wo bina kuch sochey kuch nahi bolti....

Dadi tells all the truth even after aj stopping her from saying that.....

And then alisha starts crying and ran towards her room.....and closed herself.......



Next in part 3......

Boring jarur hai but u will literally like it in part3. ...

I hope so....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Your story is quite interesting. I liked it so far 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Had read both the parts its awsome bt i feel it was so short and plz write ff or ss in ur title 😛

And continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice part , intersting

I think alisha accpect thruth

Keep writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: randomfancrics

Your story is quite interesting. I liked it so far 😃

Ah.......thank u ....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome story

Love it

Cont soon

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