AkshAn OS: Trust

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I couldn't think of another title.. I didn't copy it.. Hope you guys like it.. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.

Jindal House

Antara was getting ready for her & Akshat's marriage. Finally her plan was successful. Just then Guddan entered in her room with a gloomy face as Antara called her. Antara went towards her.

A:Kya hua Guddan tumhari achayi toh haar gayi ab kya karogi

Guddan glared at her.

A: Tumhare liye bohat bura lag raha hai pata hai kyun bhaleyi tum 51% ki malkin ho par Akshat aur pura parivar mere saath hai aur jo 51% tumhara hai na woh bohat jald mera hone wala bash ekbar mein Akshat ki legal wife banjayun

G: Abhi tak shaadi huyi nehi hai.. hum ab bhi yeh shaadi rok shakte hai

A: Sahi kahan par yeh galati maat karna warna

G: Warna kya

A: Warna jo apne sage bhai ko maar sakti hai toh uske liye apni saas ko marna konsi badi baat hai

Guddan was shocked hearing this. Antara showed Guddan a video where a waiter was moving around Dadi pointing a gun towards her. Guddan got scared. Antara gave some papers in Guddan's hand.

A: Yeh papers Akshat ne banwaye hai chup chap inn papers pe sign karo aur yeh shaadi khatm hone tak yeh ghar aur seher chod ke chali jao aur apni saas ki jaan bacha lo warna anjam tum soch lo

Saying this Antara left. Guddan started at the papers & tears were coming down from her eyes.

G: Agar humne Antara ki baat nehi mani toh woh Maaji ko chot paucha sakti hai nehi hume baat manhi paregi

After Sometime

Antara & Akshat came downstairs, their faces were hidden under veil & sehra respectively. All family members were present except Guddan. The wedding ceremony started.

A(in mind): Acha hai Guddan chali gayi issh ghar sab sochenge ki apni haar ki wajah se chali gayi ab mujhe Jindal property ki malkin bane se koi nehi rok sakta aur tabh in bahuyon ko bhi nikal dungi

L: Durga di yeh shaadi toh horahi ab kya Karen

D: Mujhe bhi kuch samaj nehi araha aur yeh Guddan kahan hai

Saraswati came.

S: Guddan toh apne kamre mein nehi hai

D&L(shocked): Kya

S: Haan maine pura ghar check kiya kahin nehi hai

D: Kahin Antara ne kuch

L: Ab kya Karen

S: Ab kuch nehi hosakta

Three daughter-in-law's become sad as they thought they lost the battle. The wedding ceremony completed. The couple took blessings of Dadi. Antara indicated the waiter to leave.

D: Chalo abb grahapravesh kartein hai

The couple stood at the entrance of the house. Dadi bought arati thal.

Da:Abb issh ghar ki bahu, Lalla ki patni aur issh ghar ki sahi saas ka grahapravesh hoga

Voice: Sahin kahan maa apne

All looked behind Antara's back & were shocked. Akshat was standing with Guddan holding her hand in wedding attire. It looked like they just came after getting married. Three daughter-in-law's were happy to see Guddan & Akshat together but rest of them were shocked. Guddan & Akshat came & stood beside Antara with a determined face. Antara removed her veil.

A:Akshat tum yahan toh meri shaadi

Antara removed the sehra from groom's face & was shocked.

A: Rohit tum

AJ: Sahi kahan Rohit.. tumhara asli pati

Da: Lalla yeh sab kya hai

AJ: Sach maa jo kisiko nehi dikha siwaye mere aur Guddan ke

A: Iska matlab tumhe

AJ: Haan Antara mujhe tumhari puri sachai pata hai..

FLASHBACK

Akshat couldn't believe that Antara was pregnant he was doubting it & doubt was confirmed the night before Vikram's death he heard the conversation between Guddan, Durga & Antara. He was hell shocked but as he didn't have any evidence he couldn't do anything, & when Guddan came with Vikram's body & claimed it was Antara who killed him he knew Antara can go to any extent to win him that's why he acted he was against Guddan as he couldn't take the risk of losing anyone due to Antara's madness.

FLASHBACK ENDS

AJ: Maine kabhi nehi socha tha ki tum aisa karsakti ho Antara arey mujhe apne aap se ghin arehi ki maine tum jaise insan se pyar kiya

Da: Lalla kya kehraha hai

AJ: Sahi kehraha hun abhi pata chal jayega

Akshat took his phone out & showed the video how Antara threatened Guddan after buying the ring & their conversation this morning. All were shocked learning Antara's truth.

Da: Antara tu aisa kaise

AJ: Yeh admi Veer Bundela hai hum saath parha karte the issine Antara ki madat kiyi thi marne natak mein aaj tak Antara ki madat karte araha hai.. mujhe chodne ke baat inn dono ne shaadi karli.. kyun hai na Antara

A(irritated): Haan yeh sab maine kiya hai paiso ke liye aur apna haq magne problem kya hai.. aaj sab kuch mera hota par issh Guddan ki wajah se sab bigad gaya ise mein zinda nehi chodungi

Antana went near Guddan hold her neck & chocked her. Akshat & Angad went near them pulled apart them. Ahshat slapped Antara in such a force that she fell on floor. Guddan was coughing, Akshat went near her.

AJ: Guddan tum thik ho na

G: Haan Jindal Saab hum thik hai

AJ: Antara yeh tumne thik nehi kiya

Just then Police entered & arrested Antara & Veer. They also caught the waiter who was assigned by Antara.
After they left Dadi went near Guddan & folded her hands.

Da: Mujhe maaf karde Guddan tujhe kitna kuch sehna pada

G: Nehi maa jo hua usme apki koi galati nehi thi aur ab toh sab thik hogaya hai na bash

Guddan & Akshat looked at each other. Then Dadi did Guddan's grahapravesh & everyone went to their room.

Night

Guddan was sitting on bed looking at her empty ring finger. Just then Akshat slid a ring on her finger, Guddan looked at him.

G: Jindal Saab aap

AJ: Sshh.. Guddan janta hu maine tumhe bohat hurt kiya hai lekin trust me.. mera tumpe se ekbar ke liye bhi bhasoda nehi utha tha.. I trust you aur woh zindagi bhar rahega chahe koi bhi tumhe galat kahen

Guddan hugged him tightly & started crying. Akshat hugged her back.

G: Hume maaf kardijiye Jindal Saab humne app par bhasoda nehi kiya aapka dil dukhaya

AJ: Nehi Guddan tumne jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya aur mujhe toh tumpar garv hai ki tumne jo kiya apne soojh boojh se kiya toh uske liya maafi maat mango..

Guddan smiled & snuggled into him.

AJ: Waise ek baat batao woh Rs unchalish lakh pachas hazar wali ring kahan hai dikhne mein achi thi kahin kho toh nehi diya

G: Woh thodi itni mahengi ring thi

Akshat broke the hug & faced her.

AJ:Kya matlab

G: Woh toh sau rupaye ka ring tha jo humne market sey kharida tha cupboard mein rakha hai

AJ(shocked): Toh woh paise Kahan hai

G: Bank mein aur kahan.. apko kya laga hum utni mahengi ring kharidenge.. na baba woh Guddan se na ho payega

Akshat smiled & hugged her.

AJ: I love you Guddan

G: I love you too Jindal Saab

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