O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 4

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Part 4

Guddan reaches her home and directly went towards Vardaan’s room

Guddan- maa kyahuwa apne hume phone kiya aur itni ghabrayi huwi lag rhi hai kya huwa hai auraap yahan veere ke room ke bhar kya kr rhi sab thik toh hai na.

Kaushalya-acha huwa beta tu aa gayi dekh na veeru darwaza ni khol raha hai jab se aya hairoom mai hi khud ko band kr rakha ha isne mujhe toh bhaut tension ho rahi. Tu hi bol ke dekh teri baat tohmanta hai na

Guddan- han maa ap tensión matlijiye main baat krti hoon usse…veere…veere darwaza khol ye kya bachpana hai,dekho agar koi roblem hai toh hume bata hum dono mil ke uska solution nikalengepr plz darwaza khol de. Dekh maa bhi kitna pareshan ho rhi hai kam sekam unse baat kr lo ki tum thik ho.

Vardaan- di plzmujhe akela chod do mujhe kisi se baat ni krni iss waqt

Guddan- hum sebhi ni… thik hai toh jab tak humare veer humse baat ni krta hum bhi yaha se nihilne wale and she sit there on the floor infront of his room

Vardaan- di aap ni jaoge na

Guddan- ni phele tum darwaza kholo aur hume andar anedo

Vardaan- thikhai lekin shrif aap

Guddan- haanthik hai…, maa aap tension mat lijiye hum use ja kr baat krte hai aur use nichele kr ate hai tab tak aap apne haath ki badiya si chai bana ke rakhna hume purayakeen hi iske baad use chai or khana dono chahiye hoga

Kaushalyanodded her head and went from there

Guddan- veere darwaza kholo maachali gayi hai

Vardaan- paka

Guddan- haan baba paka ab tum darwaza kholte ho ya humwindow se andar aye

Vardaan opensthe door and pull her inside the room and again shut it

Guddan- yeh kyahai veere aur tumne khud ko lock kr ke kyu rakha hai room mai… ab statue hibane rahoge ya khuch bolo

He shows hersome document and she shout in the exitment

Guudan- yeh tohbhaut hi achi baat hai tumhe apna sapna pyra krne ka mauka mil raha isme itnidukhi hone ki aur khud ko room mai lock krne ki kya zaroorat thi

Vardaan- diphele pura toh read karo

Guddan startsreading the document carefully and stopped at venue given

Guddan- TITGroup of institute lekin vahan..vahan toh vo

Vardaan- vo dean hai vahan ke aur iss music event kr head Inchargebhi vo toh mera registration ek second mai cancle kr denge aur kisi ko pata bhini chalega… di itne time baad itna acha mauka mila hai aur vo uss ekmisunderstanding ki vajah se… and he start crying

Guddan- esa kuch ni hoga

Vardaan- lekin di…

Guddan- humne kaha na kuch ni hoga… tum issevent ka hissa bhi banog aur jeet kr select bhi hoge

Vardaan- pr kese di

Guddan- hey lord Krishna apne kya is bandar ko banate waqt is maiakal dalna bhul gaye the

Vardaan- diiiiii….

Guddan- hume kah rhe the ki thik se padho aur khud ne hi aadhapadha hai

Vardaan- Matlab

Guddan- Matlab yeh ki iss event mai shirf group hi participate krsakti hai right

Vardaan- haan yeh toh mujhe pata hai lekin uska kya

Guddan- aur group ka naam toh hum kuch bhi rakh sakte hai na… toh

Vardaan- toh

Guddan- toh

Vardaan- love u di apne toh kamal hi krdiya, papa na bilkul sahi kahte hai aap na sach main bahut hi samajhdar ho

Guddan- han vo toh hum hai and both the brother and sister gives hifiveand laugh louder and Kaushalya who was listening all their talks behindthe door andnow she was also smiling and thinking that once again she proved why her fathercalled her the strength of the house she always find the ray of hope in thedarkness

Kaushalya knock door and asked them to come an have their tea

Guddan and Vardaan (in union)- ye mom and Vardaan opens the doorfirst he went guddan is about to leave but Kaushalya stop her

Kaushalya- tuthik toh hai na beta

Guddan- yeh kesa sawal hai maa aur apne galat insaan se galat sawalpuch liya yah to hap yeh sawal veere se puchiye yah hum se yeh puchiye ki vothik hai ki ni

Kaushalya- main sahi insaan se sahi sawal pucha hai aur yeh baat tubhi ache se janti hai guddan aur yah bhi ki maine yeh sawal kyu pucha hai

Guddan- maa kya ap bhi lagta hai yeh sab apki age ka asar hai veeruthik hi kahta hai apna bhulaka ho gayi baatein bhulne lagi hai aap, and withthis she went from their before her mother asked her anything more

Kaushalya (mind talk)- main kuch ni bhuli hoon bata aur mujhe patahai kit u bhi kuch ni bhuli hai 8 saal phele huwe uss hadse ko tu aaj bhi nibhul payi hai isliye toh tu aaj bhi jab kabhi use jude kisi bhi insaan ya phiruse judi koi bhi baat hoti hai toh teri amkein bhar ati hai tu chahe puriduniya se yeh baat chupa le pr mujhse ni chupa payegi kabhi bhi nai akhir maahoon teri… Hey kanha meri bacchi ko himat dena aj phir vo baat uske samne aagayi hai aur ab toh hum bhi ussi sehar mai vapas aa gaye hai himaat dena usseapne dard se un pichli kadwi yaadon ko bholne ki….

End of Part

So how was this and what do you think what secret Kaushalya talking about?

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UP NEXT- so in next part we are going to meet Jindal family


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To guddan ka koi past v hai

Amazing

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So a sad past of guddan

Interesting

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I am curious to know what is guddan's past

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Awesome story read all the parts are just luv❤️......what was guddus pastcont soon dear

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Awesome update

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Ohh guddan ka past he...

Chalo let's see Kya hota he...

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Part 5

Next day, there was a birthday party of Kajal and Parv’s sonArthava all the members of both Singh and Jindal families are there tocelebrate his b’day as he is the first and only grandchild of both thefamilies.

Mrs. Singh- kajal beta zara parv ko phone kro aur pucho vo kab takayega sare guest bhi aa gaye hai. (Sorry I diddn’t get any suitable name forparv’s parents so I’m addressing them as Mr. and Mrs. Singh)

Kajal- ji mummy ji.

Savitri Jindal- kajal beta parv ji ni aye abhi tak

Kajal- han maa vo bs unhe hi call kr rhi hoon…just then he comes

Parv- I hope I didn’t get late

Mrs. Singh- ni abhi cake cutne ke baad hi aa jata

Parv- kya maa guest ke samne toh mat datoh ek police wale ki izzat ka sawal hai aur aagaya na main time pr…

Shanti Jindal- haan beta tum toh bilkul time pr ho…Parv (touchesher feet and greet all the Jindals and went to change)

Parv- arey bahi yeh b’day boy aur uske pyare mama kahan hai.

Dhruv, Kavya, Naman (in union) - b’day boy ka toh pata nahi lekin uskepyare mamu uska present lana bhul gaye, toh bus vow ahi lene gaye hai.

Parv looks at the door and spot athava stnding there so he comes tohim and asks the matter why he was standing at gate instead of enjoying theb’day party ith his friends but he dosen’t responsed to him. So he thinkhe wasangry on akshat and waiting for him here

Parv-beta aese ni krte mamu bus ate hi honge ab jab tak apnefriends ke saath enjoy kro

Atharva- ni papa main mamu ka ni apni friend ka wait kr raha (saying ths he went from there )

Parv- kajal yeh atharva ko kya hogaya hai iske sare friends toh aagaye phir kis ka wait kr raha hai yeh

Kajal- ap bhi bhool gaye... Then parv realised whom he is waitingfor

Parv to atharva- hmm toh yeh baat hai ap apni angle ka intzar krrahe ho, toh chalo ek kaam krte hai unko hi call krke puch lete hai ki vo kabtak ayengi, ek min haan main abhi puchta hoon ki vo kaha rah gayi

Atharva- no papa main baat krunga angle se aur puchunga ki vo kahahai abhi tak ayi kyun ni party mai

Parv- ok and gives him the phone to talk with his friend as he isabout to call her atharva screams

Atharva- angleeeeee….. aa gayi and runs to her and hug her she alsoreciprocate the hugs and kiss his cheeks andwishes happy b’day to him

Atharva (in complaining tone)- app mujhe apna friend ni manti naisliye itni late aye ho jao mujhe ni krni apse baat

Parv- atharva beta eh kya tarika huwa mehmaan se baat krne ka auryeh aose badi hai na chalo sorry bolo aunty ko

Girl- nhi plz usse mat gussa kijiye aaj uska b’day hai aaj ke dinsab maaf hai usse.. vase sorry toh hume bolna chaiye na hum late aye hai tohkaan pakad ke sorry humre best friend ko

Atharva (gives her a simle and take her inside the house) – chalona angle mai apko apne baki ke friends se milwata hoon

Girl- haan haan bilkul chalo

Atharva (introduce her to all his friends) – dekho yeh hi hai meriangle kitni beautifull hai na aur tumhe pata hai yeh bhaut achi hai sabki helpbhi krti hai jasa story main hota hai na bilkul vase hi

Here Jindal family also listning atharva talks all were verycurious to know who this girl whom he is calling angle is.

Pooja Jindal( akshat’s aunt) – ummm kajal beta yeh ladki kaun hai atharva ke saath jise yeh baar baar angle bula rha hai

Kajal- chachi yahi toh hai atharva ki special guest jiska yeh waitkr raha tha kab se

Shekhar Jindal- lekin yeh hai kaun iski teacher hai kya

Parv- ni chacha ji yeh atharva ki teacher ni hai yeh vahi hai jinkivakah se atharva aj jinda hai aur apna b’day celebrate kr raha hai

Parag- Matlab

Parv- Matlab yeh papa apko yaad hai us din atharva boat club mainkho gaya tha aur galti se kisi aur ke boat mai chala gaya tha

Parag- haan tum ne bataya tha aur phir kisne usse ghar tak pauchagaya tha

Kajal- haan papa aur vo yahi thi atharva ki angle

Mrs. Singh- shirf atharva ki hi ni yeh toh hum sab ke liye kisifariste se kaam ni hai uss din agar yah ni hoti toh pata ni humara bacha ajkaha hota.

Pooja- pr iska koi naam pata toh hoga kahi koi fraud toh ni jo maukadekh kr tum sbko bewakoof bana de aur tumhare bharose ka fayda utha kr kahibache ko koi nuksaan na pauch de, haan maine dekha hai tv mai vo daily soapmain dikhate hai yeh log ese hi hote hai phele achayi a natak krte hai phirdhokha de dete hai

Parv- relax chichi ji phele to hap thoda daily shoap dekhna bandkijiye aur yeh koi fraud ni hai Guddan… Guddan Gupta naam hai inka byprofession yeh bhi ap logo ki hi tarah doctor hai abhi pg kr rhi hi aur yahiBhopal main hi apne parents ke saath rehti hai

Naman-maa ho gaya yah ap ab inki puri kundali nikalogi…and all theothers were laughing silently

Just then atharva come there with his angle

Atharva- angle yeh meri family hai aur yeh hai meri angle aunty aurmeri best friend bhi

Guddan greets them all and take permission from kajal to leave

Kajal- but guddan abhi abhi toh ayi ho cake toh cut hone do phirchali jana

Parv- haan guddan ji thodi dher aur rukh jayen plz hume acha lagegaaur atharva ke mamu bhi bus aate hi honge bs kuch dher

Guddan- sorry sir I also want to stay but vo kya hai na kal mera CChai toh mujhe uski tayari bhi krni hai toh mujhe jana padega

Kajal- thik hum aap ko force ni krenge pr apko yeh rakhna padega

Guddan- yeh kya hai di

Mrs. Singh- hum sb ki taraf se ek chota sa thank you atharva kijaan bachane ke liye

Guddan opens the box and see a gold statue of Lord Krishna

Guddan- Lord Krishna inhe hum kese mana kr sakte hai thank you di,acha ab hum chalet hai bye

Parv- main apne staff se kahta hoon vo tumhe chod denge

Guddan- thamk you sir pr mera bhai aa rha hai main uske saath chalijaungi

And she takes leave from both the family and sit on bike withvardhan just then akshat and angad were also coming and akshat see guddan andcall her but she was left already

End of Part 5

EnJoY !!ttt

And now you can throw rotten egg and tamatar… Sorry for the typos and grammatical mistakes hope you guys like it.

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Are aaapne itni jaldi update krdiya 😳

Hame to laga tha aur kuch mahine wait krna parega😛

Anyways it was awsome

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