O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing

Akshan ka intro to filmy tha😆

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Aww that was sweet...

How cute...

Total fimly intro hua apne hero-heroine ka..

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing

Akshan ka intro to filmy tha😆

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Thanks

Yup i got this idea while watching hero no.1 movie and wrote it with chotu sa chnge

try to update toningt if not then next morning

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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Aww that was sweet...

How cute...

Total fimly intro hua apne hero-heroine ka..

Continue soon dear

thanks for likingwill update soon

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Amazing update

Akshat saving Guddan from goons 👏

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Awesome update

What a filmy entry of akshat

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Koi film ka hero jaise entry kardiya Mr AJ ka🤣

Guddan aur Poonam ka nickname😆

Akshat Jindal abhi se lost in Guddan

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Amazing update

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OK first of all a big wala sorry to all for late update i'm really get very busy in my work so sorry once again hope you forgive me,

so without wasting time lets start with next part

Part 3

After college both went to their college guddan first drop poonam to her home andwent to her home their Kaushalya is already waiting for her

Guddan-app ni sudhrengi na maa ab hum bade hoge gaye hai kab tka ese hi gate pr khadiho kr humara wait krnegi

Kaushalya-acha bache chahe kitne bhi bade ho jayen maa baap ke liye hamesa bache hi rhatehai ye baat na tu abhi samjhe ji jabkhud maa ban jayegi na tab pata chalega tujhe.

Guddan-phir toh sabse jayad apko hi pareshani hogi pura din ase hi gate pr milengi appJ . aur vase bhi hum aap logo ko chod kr kahi nijayenge haanL

Kaushalya-bus bus ab apni nautanki band kr aur chal ja kr haath muh doh le tere papa bhiate honge

Guddan-maa ek cup coffee milengi plz

Kaushalya-thik hai ja kr change kr main jab tak coffee bana dati hoon

There inhostel Angad come and start talking to akshat but he is lost in his own worldangad notice this and call out his name very loudly

Akshat-are angad bhai tu kab aaya

Angad-hain… Matlab main phichle 5 min se yaha apne aap se baaten kr rha tha kya. Vasekis ke khayalon mein tah

Akshat-kisi ke bhi ni mein toh bus yun hi kuch rha tha apne future k bare mein

Angad-ooh acha kis ke saath??

Akshatgives a deadly look to him

Angad-ok ok sorry… vase aj un ladko ki pitaya kr k ada maza aya nahi, poonam or ukifriend bhi ne bhi bhaut ache se samna kiya unka

Angad-vase kya naam tha poonam ki frnd ka gu...gud…

Akshat-Guddan

Angad-haan guddan… vase ek min tujhe logo ke naam itni asani se kese yaad hone lagevo bhi pheli mulakat mein hi… kahi tujhe…

Akshat-apna dimag jayad mat use kr aur chal abhi dinner rne varna bhuke pet sonapadega.

Likethis their one month is passed and one day in college canteen Akshat and hisfriends were joking and suddenly one of them says

Rahul-bhai bade din ho gaye koi prank ni khela kya kehta hai.

Akshat-ha yaar baat toh sahi ki tune

Angad-tum log pagal hog aye ho kya phir se prank agar is baar principle ko pata chalana toh complain sidhe hum sab ke ghar phuch jayegi

Rahul-chill bro kuch ni hoga… toh kya kehte ho

Akshatand his friend come to Library and took the record register and randomly selecta no. and call on it.

Akshat-Ab ayega maza he dailed the no.

Receiver-hello

Akshat-(understood it’s a girls with the voice) hello madam apko principle ke cabinmein bulaya gaya hai apke against complaint mili hai ki ap hamesha college lateata hai aur lectures bhi miss krti hai

As itwas lecture time so he thinks this will be the best reason but unknown to thefact that their first lecture is off because their professor is busy in someurgent work

Receiver-what are u saying how is this possible? I think apko koi misunderstanding huwihai.

Akshat-ohh really than tell me one think instead of attending your class you weretalking on phone why aahhh according to rules students nd teachers are notallowed to use their phones during class. We want you in principle’s cabin innext 15 min otherwise the complaint goes to your house. And at this Rahul whowas standing behind him start giggling

Girlalready have doubt that it’s a fake call and now she clearing hear someone waslaughing behind now her doubt was leadr that it’s a prank call. So she movestowards the corridor and see some group of boys are laughing and one amongstthem is talking on phone, she walk near them without making a noise there shesee angad and tap on his shoulder angad was shocked to see the her face.

Angadwas about to say her name but she signal him not to

Girl-vase aap bata sakte hai ye complaint ki kisne hai

Akshat-aapko use koi Matlab ni hone chahiye jaisa bola hai vasa kijiye agle 15 minmein principle ke cabin mein ok

Girl-Matlab hai; kyun ki agar mere against complaint huwi hai toh pata toh chalekisne ki hai ye complain (saying this she cut the call)

Andakshat was shocked to hear guddan’s name all his friend was gone except Angad

Akshat-guddan and looks angad with a big question mark on his face

Angad-guddan

Guddan-ji guddan… vase aap log ye jo guddan ke saath kr rhe hai na vo guddan apneschool time mein kiya krti thi.

Akshatwas speechless and without saying a word he runs from there because it wasfirst time when he got caught. Here guddan was laughing watching him runninglike this.

Poonam-kya huwa ese akele akele kyun hans rhi hai

And shenarrate her the whole drama

At nightangad call poonam actually it was akshat who force him to call her and askedabout guddan’s reaction after morning, poonam was confused that why he iscalling him at this time but she was happy also and pick the call

Angad- hello disturbe toh ni kiya na

Poonam-ni bilkul bhi ni pr apne is time call kiya…matlab koi kaam tha kya

Thereakshat asked him come to the point and inquired about guddan’s reaction

Poonam-hello hello angand ji ap ap sun rhe hain na

Angad-haan vo actually vo akshat……ni…ni akshat ni……guddan …..ni vo…main ye puch…….puchrha tha ki…

Poonam-hmm samjh gayi toh Dr. Akshat ye puch na chate hai ki guddan ne aaplogo ke janeke baad kaya kaha Am I right??? Angand ji

Angad-ji ek min main phone speaker pe krta hoon haan ab bolo

Poonam-kya bolun jab bolne ke liye kuch hai hi ni toh aur plz Dr. Akshat ap tension nalo vo guji oops sorry guddan kuch bhi ni soch rhi thi o toh bus hans rhi thi

Poonam-aur agar apko aur kuch puchna hai to hap use puch sakte hai main usi ke saath hoon is waqt vo yahi apkibaaten sun rhi hai ek min main deti hoon

Guddangives her a deadly look akshst was shocked as he don’t expect this to happen

Akshat-I’m I’m sorry vo shubh maine

Guddan- its ok aur hume toh zara bhi bura ni laga.

Justthen Bhushan calls guddan for some work

Bhushan-guddan beta meri vo brown wali file dekhi hai kya kahi mil ni rhi

Guddan-ji abhi aye. And give her phone back to poonam.

Poonam-v otoh chali gayi ab main bhi phone rakhti hoon mujhe bhi ghar jana hai late horha hai

Akshat-good night

Poonam-good night

Next incollege at college canteen there was a yellow rose and card kept on guddan’sseat she take it and read the name written on it from Akshat

Poonam-kya baat hai guji abhi college iss college mein aye tujhe ek month hi huwe haiyaha toh tumhe roses or card bhi milne lage…. Kya likha hai isme bata na kisnediya hai kau hai vo handsome bata bata

Guddan-givesher angry look on her nonsense nonstop talk and show her the card.

Poonam-(reads its) hain sorry from Akshat and… before she could speak guddan tell her

Guddan-dekha humne toh phele hi kaha tha mujhe yeh banda thik ni lagta pr ni tumhumari sunti kaha ho..phele vo prank phir raat ko sorry bolne ke liye phonekiya or ab yeh yeh rose or card…ab toh hume paka yakin ho gaya kuch toh gadbadhai

Poonam-koi gadbad ni hai bande ko guilt feel huwa toh usne sorry bol diya isme kya hai

Guddan- acha toh pure college shirf humara hi no. milatha…. Ek min ek min humara no. humara no. Dr. Akshat ke pass kaha se aya?? Kahitune toh…

Poonam- tu pagal ho gayi hai kya kisi ka no. Nikalne meinkaun si nayi baat hai college ki library ke record registrar se liya hoga

Guddan-toh humara hi no. Kyu? Matlsb kisi ka bhi no.le skte the na

Poonam- dekh guddan tu na kuch zayada hi soch rhi haiab bus kr vo dekh Dr. Akshat aur unkefriends aa rhe hai toh toda ache se baat kr lena plz

Guddan-toh yeh sab apne kiya hai

Akshat-haa vo actually I’m really very sorry vo kal maine jo kiya uske liye

Guddan- itsok you plz don’t say sorry again and again

Akshat-Matlab tumne mujhe maaf kr diya

Guddan-ji

Poonamstarts laughing on his talk where he was completely clueless

Poonam-sorry vo main khud ko aur control ni kr payi vase ek baat kahon in madam se koibhi baat kr lena pr late hone wali ni…yeh toh itni punctual hai ki neendh mein bhi kabhi late ni hoti

Guddan- tareef ke liye sukriya apka

Poonam-kya tareef tere chakar mein mujhe Dr. Saxsena ki class bhi attend krni padtihai

Guddan- ho gaya tera ab lunch kr le

Akshat-ummm if you don’t mind kya hum saath mein lunch kr sakte hai

Guddanlooks poonam (dekha kaha than a humne)

Poonam-yeahsure why not.., Chal guji

They alltake their seat and placed their order

Suddenlyguddan get a phone call

Guddan-excuse me guys just a minute. Hello…what hum…hum abhi ate hai

Poonam-hellomadam jaldi aa varna kuch bhi ni milega. Guddan takes her bag and runs towardsthe parking before she asked her about the phone call guddan was already gone/

End of Part

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was nice ...

Kon tha wo??

Kahi bhushan papa ko to kuch nhi hua??

Continue soon....

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