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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Mast tha

Aj knows guddu loves him lekin guddu thought she is dreaming

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wonderful update

Jindal Sahab ne chup chup ke diary padhi😂 aur jab izaar Kiya toh Guddan behosh😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Mast tha

Aj knows guddu loves him lekin guddu thought she is dreaming

Update soon

Thanks

Will try to update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Wonderful update

Jindal Sahab ne chup chup ke diary padhi😂 aur jab izaar Kiya toh Guddan behosh😆

Guddan is too funny

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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Loved both last 2 parts Aruba😳

Thanks for updating it so early🤗

I am loving this naiveness of Guddan. Here he is married to her & she is thinking he has another wife😆

Waah, madam ji faints listening the love confession from him... truly ekloti piece she's.

Dear we have asked you give updast fast, not to run the story in fast pace -

marriage done, 3months done, Goa done, guddu's secret love revelation done, karwachauth done, confession done...

so much in just five updates...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya1994

Loved both last 2 parts Aruba😳

Thanks for updating it so early🤗

I am loving this naiveness of Guddan. Here he is married to her & she is thinking he has another wife😆

Waah, madam ji faints listening the love confession from him... truly ekloti piece she's.

Dear we have asked you give updast fast, not to run the story in fast pace -

marriage done, 3months done, Goa done, guddu's secret love revelation done, karwachauth done, confession done...

so much in just five updates...

Actually i hv to wrap up this before i start back with work , office university and writing doesnt jell up together well so a bit faster with updates and pace also ....2 3 parts and i am done with it plus its not easy to type on phone but nevertheless thankyou for you such for your review and appreciation.👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Your writing is best everything is perfect loved it 👍update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 6

Akshat was roaming here and there worried how to explain to her " muhabbat ka izhaar krke bhi dekh liya woh bhi isko dream hi laga kaise samjhoun" he looked at marriage certificate shook his head and he kept it back in cupboard hastily because she was awake and has started off with her 24/7 banter.

Akshat was out for some work when doorbell ring there was a post for mr jindal, guddan took that and opened it, she was shocked to see divorce paper " divorce ppr, yeh kis k hain galti se toh nhi aagye, par jindal saab k naam pe aaya hai toh kaam ka hi hoga, kahin woh apni wife ko divorce toh nahi de rahe, haww kitni galat baat hai waise toh humare dil main laddo phutne chahye par hum aise nhi hain" she reached his room and opened cupboard with all the might , some files flew off , she picked up everything when she found their marriage certificate, she looked at it like multiple times turning it upside down, she could not believe it so to check it is true or is she dreaming she went ahead and pour some water of her head and tada she believed it. Excited she jumped on the bed like crazy but her happiness was short lived because there were divorce papers ready " jindal saab bhi humse jaan churana chahte hain" she cleaned up all the mess created by her and left she was feeling gloomy all day but alas she got ready to attend the event.

Akshat took her to jindal bhawan where the event was organized , he wanted her to meet his mother. Akshat introduced her to his mother " maa, yeh hai Guddan" " arey wahh, badi pyaari hai, yeh yahan tere saath" " maa ye bhushan ji ki beti hai" guddan takes blessing from lalla ki amma.

Akshat could feel that guddan was not her bubbly cripy self she was upset about something but he could not ask over here as it would capture others attention. Later he got busy with this business associates and she was sitting alone " inhone hume apni maa se bhi sahi se introduce nhi kiya, ab toh pakka divorce dene wale hain tabhi sab se chupa k rakha hai aur toh aur humse bhi chupa k rakha tha" she took one shot of some drink that was offered to her which was enough to get her tipsy.

Everybody came to dance floor for a slow romantic dance , akshat took guddan to dance floor, it was dimmly lit so nobody could see anything , guddan rested her hand on his shoulder while swinging to and fro " aj se bas hum apse nafrat karte hain, pyaar wyaar sab khtm " " kya hua guddan" he could smell alcohol from her " ap ne hume sahi se introduce bhi nhi krwaya maa se k hum kaun hain" he took her to near by sofa and asked her mother to look after as he will be back in a sec.

Whilst he was leaving he could hear hush hush voices he followes the voice it was durga " kya karun main, woh buddha marta hi nahi hai , woh antara bhi itni badi bewaqoof nikli, itni mehnat k baad us Akshat Jindal ko phasaya tha aur property naam krwayi toh, us raat us jindal ko marna chahye tha khud jakr mar gyi" he was shocked which soon turned into anger he took guddan and left for home immediately. He laid tipsy guddan in her room and went to nurse himself a drink. He was seated at the sofa place near the glass wall looking at the sky " antara se maine pyar toh kabhi nhi kiya, bs hamare rishte ki hamesha respect ki samaan kiya, jab maine uski naam sab property ki woh islye k mujhe laga meri jaan ko khatra hai par mujhe kya pta tha k woh khud aek khatra thi, par jo hona hota hai" he was deep into his concise when guddan came in and gulp down his half filled glass of whiskey he was tipsy but not drunk " jindal saab hume apse aek baat kehni hai " " mujhe tum se aek baat kehni hai" donu aek saath bolte hain. Guddan begin taking backward steps with his moving towards her , she fall flat on the bed with him over her " ap hum se pyaar krte hain na" " yeh toh sawal puch liya tume baat toh nhi kahi" " haan koi baat nhi, bs ap jawab de" " haan, to ap phr na phr pyaar kariye , kyun nhi krte hume roz lagta hai aj karein ge kal karein" she said folding her arms around his neck " tum kya keh rahi ho kch samjh nhi araha" " nanha bacha bane ki zarurat nhi hai ap sab samjhte hain , chale hum khud hi bta dete hain" and for the first time she initiated the kiss, a sweet touched turned into wild passion with both fighting for dominance moving upwards on the bed.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#80

Yeh to chotusa tha...

Okk so antra b shamil thi Durga k plan me...

Accha he hua...Jo dusro k liye kabr khodte he khud he usme gir jate he...

Hope Aj punishesh dayan and team...

Guddan aur Aj Milan ab bAhot najdik he....

Continue soon 🍒

Edited by Shona1991 - 6 years ago

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