AkshAn SS: Agreement updated page 15 last part

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Hey everyone, i have started a new story on akshan

Please let me know what do you think of it, ill update only after satisfactory response.

Part 1

Akshat was looking out of office waiting for someone, he heard a knock on his office door " come in" , the person comes in and he turns to face the person " aaye waqil sahab main apka hi intezar kr raha tha " " mujhe apni will change krni hai , main apna sab kch aek trust k naam krna chahta hun" " aisa mumkin nhi hai jindal saab, apne apna sab kch apki wife k naam krdya tha aur unhone apni bahuon k naam" . Akshat banged the table in frustration " koi toh rasta hoga isey bahr nikalne ka " " haan hai, dekhiye ap gussa mat hona par agar ap dusri shaadi krle toh phr ap apni wife k consent se will change kr skte hain kyun k will k hisaab se apki wife changes krskti hain isme Mrs. Antara ka naam kahin bhi nhi hai". Saying so lawyer left the office leaving akshat drawn in deep thoughts

Flashback

Akshat was standing near the stairs and he could hear durga along with other DIL. " kahan phas gye hain saara din sabki sewa krte raho , yeh AJ bhi property aur business chor nhi deta, itni mushkil se main vardaan ko jhelti hun sirf jindal khaandan ki property k liye.

Flashback ends

On the other hand, guddan galtiyon ki dukan was lying holding akshat's admiring, whilst revti came in " di yeh kya ap papa k boss ki pic lekr baith gyi ho " " arey tujhe toh pta hi hai k mujhe akshat se kitna pyaar hai ,haaye kash woh shaadi shuda na hota ya phr meri mujhse thode se bade hote toh main unhe khud propose krdeti par hamari aisi kismat kahan" " agar ab tum apne khayalon ki duniya se bahara aagyi ho toh lounge main ajana papa tumhe bula rahe hain"

Gudiya ran to her father and hugged him tightly " papa ap hume bula rahe thay" " haan beta, jindal saab ne tumhe apni personal assisstant appoint krlya ha, dekho bhagwan ne tumhari sun li, yeh raha appointment letter " bhushan forwarded that to her , guddan in the moment of bliss signed the agreement without looking at it which had marriage certificate hidden. Later her father explained that she had to move to Akshat's penthouse and it was save also as her step mother despise her alot aur guddan rahi akshat ki deewani sab kch krne ko tayar.

Here akshat has never met her before except for those funky card that she keeps sending to him on different occassion.

INDEX

Part 1- page1

Part 2- page3

Part 3- page5

Part 4- page 8

Part 5- page 10

Part 6- page 11

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome story line. Do continue

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Ye to bahut jyada interesting hai

Update it asap

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Mrihika thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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New concept

Interesting

Eagerly waiting to read what will happen when guddan get to know about marriage certificate

Continue soon

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Beautiful concept. Continue soon dear

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Originally posted by: Mrihika

New concept

Interesting

Eagerly waiting to read what will happen when guddan get to know about marriage certificate

Continue soon

Let see how sooner she comes to know of MC.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome. Please continue soon.

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So exciting concept..update soon..

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Nice start

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting story ..

So Akshan are married now...

Hope akshat love guddan with pure dilse...

DIL are gone case....

Continue soon

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