ll What will you choose?ll - AkshAn OS (9 May) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Loved this a lot.

How I wish this is not an OS cause I wanna read more!

Jindal saab really needed a reality track!

The way u portrayed Guddan here is amazing.

I don't mind seeing this sort of scenes in the show, but I dont think we will get to see such scenes soon cause Guddan likes to be great as always

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
  1. It was amazing !
  2. As the majority wishes to, do give us a part 2 or maybe more !
  3. You are my fav writer here ! Just love that flair !
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Nice os nish

Akshat jindal ko reality check ki zaroorat hai

Aise hi apni biwi ko unn dayan aur chudailo ki tane sune chod diya

Do write more nish

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Your work is beautiful...and i really want this to happen in serial....but unfortunately we don't get that...

But can we get part 2 of it...??

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Brilliant Nishu I liked this Guddan seedha de dala bhai Jindal Sahab ko aar ya paar don't latkao me in beech makdhar actually I like all your characters whether it's SAL or BBF or your os's. Will there be another part to it though or not??will love to read it:)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Hi Nish,

Your story left me speechless.

It would be fantastic if Guddan could be like this, as she is so trusting and forgiving.

Please continue to show what AJ will do to recover from this catastrophe !!

Please please continue with this story👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Amazing as always will love reading second part of this os

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

I am overwhelmed by the response this Os received😃but about extending the OS, i just only thought of os and beyond that i've no clue what should i write a part 2 on. This Os was just meant to convey Guddan's feelings to akshat and nothing more🤓

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nish_vir

I am overwhelmed by the response this Os received😃but about extending the OS, i just only thought of os and beyond that i've no clue what should i write a part 2 on. This Os was just meant to convey Guddan's feelings to akshat and nothing more🤓

U can write about Aj's feeling or his pov in the next part of ur os plz do write we will love to read it plz

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was amazing👏

Loved the way you penned it.

Guddan made him taste his own medicine. The dialogues were apt. I would love to read more of it.

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