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Posted: 6 years ago
#41
Finally the truth is out
Akshat was so happy after knowing pihu is his daughter

The raindance and their kiss really well written

Is it the end

If it is then write an epilogue

Will be waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
Finally they are back together!
Wow nice one

Do write an epilogue.. Pihu needs a sibling too😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Superb update
Love it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Fabulous update
Akshan rain was so awesome
Finally all misunderstanding are cleared and father daughter met each other
Please write further scenes showing their married life before ending it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
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Strawberry and Red rose Part 7

Rano left the room allowing Akshat,Guddan and Pihu to have private moments.
Pihu told Akshat:Papa...please buy strawberry icecream for me.
Akshat was surprised:Strawberry iceceam?You want strawberry icecream itself?
P:That's my favourite.


Guddan:Akshat...your daughter is also like you.She is crazy about strawberry.
Akshat and Guddan smiled.
AKSHAT:I will get you strawberry icecream now.
GUDDAN:No need Akshat.It's raining outside.


AKSHAT:So what?We are already drenched.Right?
She smiled.
He went out and came back after some time with family pack strawberry icecream.
Pihu jumped with joy.Akshat fed her icecream with spoon.

The next night...
Guddan was blushing thinking of the rain moments.
Suddenly Akshat appeared before her.She was shocked.
GUDDAN:No no...it's only my dream.Why i am always imagining that Akshat is with me?
Akshat laughed:Guddan...it's me.It's not your dream.
Guddan touched him.
GUDDAN:My God!You are here?
He blinked his eyes beautifully.
AKSHAT:I wanted to see you immediately.So i came here.
GUDDAN:If anybody sees..
AKSHAT:No one will see as Pihu and Rano aunty are in deep sleep.
Guddan was relieved and she smiled.
Akshat caressed her face emotionaly.Guddan's smile was very sweet.Her dimples were making her look cute.
AKSHAT:Guddan...i was waiting for this moment for a long time.This moment should have arrived 5 years back,then we would not have suffered even a bit.
Guddan did'nt understand what Akshat meant.
AKSHAT:Guddan...you know that strawberry is my favourite.I want to eat strawberry now.
She giggled:You are always hungry to eat strawberry.You eat strawberry.I have no problem.
He took strawberry from his bag and bit it.
AKSHAT:It's so tasty.Guddan...i want you to share my strawberry till the end of my life.
Guddan was surprised as she knew that giving strawberry and red rose is the dream proposal of Akshat.
Akshat kept the strawberry close to her lips.She bit the strawberry which Akshat bit.Akshat bit it again.
AKSHAT:Since you bit it this tastes better now.
Guddan became shy.
Akshat took a red rose:Guddan...will you marry me?


She blushed.

She held the red rose he was holding.


GUDDAN:Yes,i am waiting to be your wife Akshat.I was always waiting to be your life partner.You know that.Right?
He smiled.
GUDDAN:Akshat...after the rainy night when you returned to my life showering love upon me itself i considered myself as your wife and put vermilion on my forehead in your name.
That time only Akshat noticed vermilion on her forehead with a surprise.
AKSHAT:I love you Guddan.


Guddan felt that she was the most happiest lady in this world as she heard the most romantic three magical words from Akshat.
GUDDAN:I love you too.

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They shared a sweet eye lock expressing their love for each other..




Akshat brought his Dadimaa Savitri devi to Guddan's house.Guddan touched her feet.Savitri blessed her.
She cupped Guddan's face in her arms:Because of my grand son you had to undergo so much of pain.
GUDDAN:Nothing like that Dadimaa.


S:You are so beautiful.You are perfect for Akshat.


She smiled.Akshat smiled at her.She was smiling at him also.
S:I can't wait to see my grand child.
Pihu came.
GUDDAN:Pihu...this is your grandmother.
P:Wow!


Savitri hugged and kissed her with tears in her eyes.

Wedding...
Guddan appeared to be a red beauty in her red lehenga.Akshat could'nt control himself.
AKSHAT:Guddan...you look so pretty like a red rose.


She blushed.

He keep admiring her beauty without being able to take his eyes off her..


She could not believe that her dream to be Akshat's bride was coming true.
She looked at Akshat emotionally.

Akshat's eyes touched her softly.


They exchanged garlands happily.


AKSHAT:Guddan...I take you into my heart as my wife.
Guddan: Akshat,I take you into my heart as my husband.
They shared a beautifil eye lock.
When Akshat tied Mangalsuthra around her neck she found it the most blissful moment of her life.

When he adorned the parting of her hair with vermilion she could'nt express her emotion of being her dearest one's wife.


Akshat and Guddan took seven vows by taking seven steps around the sacred fire.They were promising to be with each other through out.Guddan was becoming more and more emotional.She felt that she was a complete married lady.



In their room...
The room was decorated with flowers.Akshat smelled Guddan.She could feel his breath.She was freezing because of the sensation.


AKSHAT:Though these flowers have fragrance i can feel only your fragrance now.Because you are a fragrant red rose.Who can say that your lips are not made of red rose petals?
She blushed.
He lifted her chin with his fingers.


She was shy.


AKSHAT:Guddan...we took seven vows.But now you have to take one more vow.
Guddan did'nt understand it.
AKSHAT:You have to promise me that you will let me have strawberry at any time.
She burst into laughter.She nodded her head:Yes.
He always giggled along with her.
AKSHAT:Then...i want strawberry now.I am dying to taste strawberry.
GUDDAN:But where is this strawberry kept?
Suddenly Guddan realized that what Akshat meant is he wants his strawberry which is Guddan.
She blushed.
Guddan was shy:Akshat...you can always have your strawberry.
He smiled as he felt that her words were sweet as honey.


They both shared a sensuous eye lock with a smile which was sweet like strawberry.He started showering love upon his strawberry madly.


When they were in each other's arms...
AKSHAT:Guddan...i think you are tired.You need to take bath to be fresh.
GUDDAN:Yes.
AKSHAT:Can i bath you with strawberry milk filled with red rose petals?
She blushed giving him the consent to do that.He took her arms and led her to the pool filled with strawberry milk and red rose petals making her cool and romantic through out.He gave her a passionate bath.


They felt that the night was more beautiful as it was beautified by their love.They felt that the stars were shining more witnessing their passionate love.

Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
awsome one
loved it finally they married

1154991 thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#47
Nice one
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Nice chapter
They get married

Love pihu and akshat bond

Hope Akshan get a baby girl like her
In the show

Continue soon
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
plmzaq thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Awesome update
Love it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50
Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Please do continue soon

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