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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter-5(last part)
Day started to pass mishti now fully settled in the family mainly her bond with guddan become more strong

Mishti is applle of everyone eyes all pampered her a lot kishor vardaan always bring toys choclate for her

Guddan's bond with her daughter in laws was growing slowly they are famous sasa bhau jodi of whole indore

Akshat also falling for guddan but was not realizing it guddan realize her love hoping akshat will reciprocate her fellings

Akshan decide to send mishti to school they choose a best play school of indore akshat guddan went to the school and do mishti's admission

They keep mishti's School name as Ananya akshat jindal

It was first day of her school mishti was sad she will be away from her family guddan come to room with her tiffin and saw her seating sad

G- kya hua beta aap ase sad kyun ho

M- mumma mujhe ichkool nahi jana main apko miss karungi

G- beta kuch ghanto ki hi baat hai phir mera bacha apni mumma ke pass aa jayega

M- nahi mujhe nahi jana

G- are aap akele thodi jaoge mumma papa apke saath jayenge aur apke sath hi bapas ayenge aur ice cream bhi khayenge

M- plomish

G- promise

Then akshat and guddan take mishti to school mishti take promise from them that they will not go anywhere will be their then mishti went inside with her teacher

As they promise to her they stayed their until mishti's school end after 4 hour finally the school end all children come out mishti also come out of the school she get happy seeing her mumma papa she run towards them

Akshat take her in his arm kiss her she kiss her papa back then she went to her mumma they settled inside the car akshat take them to a ice cream parlour as they promise to mishti

After returning to home mishti share her experience with everyone

Two three days Akshat guddan wait outside till mishti's school end after these day mishti get settled in her school

Everything going well one day laxmi's parent come to visit her along with them sweta also come (here sweta didn't come to take revenge from guddan she come for first time after akshan marriage)

Sweta just wanted to kill guddan or throw her out of the house

Jindal family welcome them warmly guddan apologize to sweta for what she did with her

Sweta just fake a smile then they introduce mishti to them all went inside guddan and bahus went to make arrangements for tea or snacks all are chating

The ladies come with tea and snack and serv to everyone laxmi's mother make guddan seat with her she like guddan as her samdhan as after akshan marriage she come their 2 or 3 times laxmi also praise guddan infront of them

Sweta just burning in anger seeing guddan receiving such love and respect then her eyes fall on mishti an wicked idea come to her mind she smile evilly

Everyone chatting just then guddan saw mishti missing she excuse herself then went in search of her she get worried seeing her no where she check everywhere but didn't find her she come to hall crying

Akshat went to her ask what happened guddan said mishti is missing all get tense hearing it then all start to search her

Sweta smiling and thought now they will not be found mishti ever

Kishor guddan who are searching on the store room hear muffle cry from a box they immediately went to it guddan open the box and saw mishti inside sweating and crying guddan immediately took her out of it hug her tightly

They take mishti out side the little girl was very scared she was just clinging to guddan all are relave to see mishti alive

Both guddan and mishti are not in a position of talk guddan was just kissing her she almost loss her baby kishor tell everyone where they found mishti

Akshat was furious who dare to do that with his daughter he then clam guddan and ask her to clam mishti

Guddan calm down then she started to relax mishti durga give water mishti drink the water

Then guddan ask mishti softly sweta was hell worried her face went pale

G- mishti babu kuch nahi hua hai dekho mumma hai na aap Mumma papa ki strong baby ho na rote nahi

A- bacha aap uss box main kaise pahunche

Mishti then point towards sweta

M- main apni doll lene gayi thi wo aunty ne mujhe dalaya aul mujhe uss box main band kaldiya

All look at sweta with anger guddan then place mishti on sofa went towards sweta then guddan slap her

G- tumhari himmat kaise hui meri bachi ke sath aisa karne ki

Then laxmi also come their and slap sweta

L- tujhe apni behen kehne main bhi saram ati hai ek chote bache ke sath chi

Sw- ha kiya main ne Aj aur guddan se badla lene ke liye inn logo ke bajhe se hi meri aur mere ma baba ki badnami hui ek ladka bhi nahi mil raha meri shadi ke liye meri khusiya chin kar khus nahi rakh sakte ye logo

A- to humse bdla lene ke liye tum meri bachi ko humse chin leti tumhe nahi chodunga abhi police ko bulata hu

But laxmi's father mother stop him and say they are her relatives because of her their prestige will be at stake

Akshat give warning to her then leave her they went from their Laxmi apologize for bring sweta in their live but guddan say it's not her fult

After the incident guddan became very overprotective towards mishti even stop her going outside after school

Akshat then make her understand her worries literally snatching mishti's freedom after that guddan stop worrying she know akshat wil not let anything happen to mishti

Akshat was falling for guddan but cannot ready to give name to the relationship one day he was working mishti come their after her school

A- hii betu aagye school se

M-ha papa aapko pata hai aaj mujhe choclate milaa aul main ne cake bhi khayi

A- acha par aaaj kya khas tha

M- meli ek techal ki aaj shadi hu thi to unhone aur unke pati ne aaj hume choclate di aaur cake cut ki

A- acha to unki marriage anniversary thi

M- ha aul wo uncle ne kha ki wo humaali techal se I love you karte hai

A- wo logo pati patni hai to ek dusare se pyar karte hai

M- papa to aaap bhi mumma se I love you kalte ho na

With her innocent question realization down upon him he love guddan he once loved antra but now it's guddan she is his wife mother to his children

Akshat just node to mishti then say her something mishti went to guddan akshat went behind her he hide to listen mishti guddan talk

Mishti went to guddan she hug mishti then mishti narrate her everything then ask the same question to guddan

M- mumma aap papa se I love you kalte ho

G- ha beta hum apke papa se bahot pyar karte hai wo soch nahi sakte itna karte hai

Akshat was stunned guddan was not faking she staying her feelings genuinely akshat then went to his room

He realize now it's time to accept guddan as his wife

Then after 2 days akshat take guddan on a date he propose her guddan's happiness have no bound she hug him and say I love you too

Akshat then take her to the hotel room which is decorated beautifully both become one that night breaking every barrier between them.




KYA LAGA KHATAM PICTURE ABHI BAKI HAI MERE DOST
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
Amazing
Loved it❤️
Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
EPILOGUE
After 3 year

Guddan was making now 6- years - old mishti ready she was wearing a white colour lehenga and mishti was wearing the miniature version of her lehenga

G- lo ho gayi humari gudiya tayar bhota hi beautiful lag rahi hai meri bachi

M- mumma aap bhot pretty lag rahi ho

Just then they hear akshat voice from back

A- are wah meri dono princess to bahot hi sundar lag rahi hai vaise mera prince bhi tum logo se kam nahi hai

They turn around find akshat standing their with a cream colour sherwani with a 1 year old boy wearing the miniature version of akshat sherwani both are looking handsome

The boy is non other than AKSHAN baby boy Gourav akshat jindal fondly call golu by everyone as he is bit chubby

M- papa aap bhi bahot handsome lag rahe ho

A- thank you my princess aab chalo apki masi ki shadi main late nahi poochhana

Yes it was revati's marriage finally she get a boy who truely want her

Before fixing marriage akshat inquired everything about the boy as he don't want to take risk this time with revati's life

The little family went to the venu they reach their they went to meet revati revati hug guddan she also hug akshat

A- revati tumhari nayi jindegi suru hone jaa rahi hai uskeliye congratulations aur ek baat kabhi bhi life main koi bhi problem aaye darna mat tumhre jiju tumhare sath hai

R- thanks jiju papa ke baad agaar koi hai jiske saath maain safe feel karti hoon to wo aap hai

Then guddan went to see the arrangements as his papa is alone kaushalya was in jail so it's her responsibility to take care of her papa and chutki

Akshat was just admiring guddan he then remember about their life in this 3 year

After their confession and consummation everything changed akshat become the old akshat the fun loving one he like to pull guddan's leg

They many time caught while doing romance all are loving the new akshat

Durga kishor adopt a boy name kabir as they come to know that Durga can't be a mother kabir was elder than mishti but as they will be aunty and nephew mishti call him by name and kabir call mishti as chutku bua

Saru shift with rahul to abroad laxmi is now 6 month pregnant

Akshat then remember how guddan is scared to have a baby as she thought what if she become like kaushalya but akshat assured her she herself cry when mishti get hurt how can she do it to her

Then after two years when mishti also demand a baby brother guddan agree then she get pregnant and give birth to their son Golu

He look around to his family kishor vardaan are looking after the food while durga helping guddan laxmi was seating in a chair playing with kabir mishti

And he holding gourav seating with dadi and bhusan ji

Soon the marriage start on revati's request guddan akshat does her kanyadan

After the marriage and revati's bidai all return home

After changing guddan put mishti to sleep then went to their room Akshat was rocking golu's cradle thinking something guddan went to him sat beside him

G- akshat kya soch rhe hai

A- ek din humari mishti bhi shaadi kar ke hume chod ke chali jayegi

G- ha har ladki ko apne myeka chodna padta hai par abhi usse main time hai abhi wo mat sochiye

A- thank you guddan meri bachi ko apna ne ke liye

G- kyunki main uski ma hu bhale hi hum mein khoon ka rishta na ho par dil ka rishta to hai na

A- thank you meri life main aane keliye

Both then went to bed sleep peacefully hugging each

THE END
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Loved the way AJ realised his love and ending was awesome
Nice work
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65
Awww Sanvi loved both parts 😳👏
Amazing happy ending

Loved Mishty Golu⭐️😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
Beautiful ending dear
Loved it
I loved AJ love realization
Mishti is such an awesome Cupid
Oh mishti ko chotta Bhai BHI Mila 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
Awesome updates
Love it
Beautiful ending
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Loved both the parts ❤️
Such a cute and nice story
Aww mishti and golu such cute kids of Akshan
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Beautiful ending and awesome eilogue Saanu.
Well I loved the name you choose for Akshan's son as it's my brother's name and who bhi maine khud rakha tha.
So for me it was like donon haat ghee main and sir kadhaai main.
Double bonus
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Loved the way AJ realised his love and ending was awesome

Nice work


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