AKSHAN Ts dil ka rishta last part page 8 epilogue page 9 updated - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Bee222

Awww Mishti is such a pyali bacchi 🤗

Ab yahi apne mummy papa ko paas layegi 😳


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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Sanu baby I love you tere Dil Ka mere Dil se rishta Purana hai. 😳


Love you too kavu baby inna sala🤗 in mishti word
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Such a cutepie mishti
Now waiting to see the changes in akshat towards guddan
Superb part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Minisanjukta

Amazing waiting for next


Thanks mini

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: dershika

Such a cutepie mishti

Now waiting to see the changes in akshat towards guddan
Superb part

Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
It is amazing please update next soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part-4
Next morning akshat first woke up and saw guddan and mishti sleeping hugging each other guddan hide mishti to herself like protecting her akshat smile at them he bend down kiss mishti's forehead

He saw guddan's face cover with her hair she was feeling itchy so akshat gently remove her hair and tuck them behind her ear she just staring at her how innocent she look while

A pov- yeh baas sote hue innocent lagti hai par saitani mai to phd kar rakhi hai issne

He chuckled at his own thought then went to get ready after some time he come out and saw guddan woke up she kiss mishti's forehead cover her properly with the duvet

She saw Akshat standing their looking at them guddan smile at him then went to him

G- good morning Mr jindal

A- very good morning Mrs jindal jao jaldi ready ho jao mishti uthegi to usse bhi tayar karna hai aapko

Guddan smile and went to washroom after some times guddan come out all ready akshat was reading a file guddan went to the dressing table comb her hair and apply sindur in her partion

Just then mishti woke up akshat saw her and smile at her he went to her take her in his lap kiss her hair softly

A- good morning princess uth gaye aap

M- gool moling papa mumma kaha hai

Guddan come to her cress her hair

G- good morning bacha main to yahi hoon

M- gool moling mumma

G- acha chalo apko ready kar dete hai
Akshat ji aaj aap restaurant nahi jayenge

A- nahi aaj main pura din apne princess ke saath time spent karoonga

Mishti get excited and hug akshat guddan also smile at them she take mishti to get her ready after some time guddan come out of washroom holding mishti she was warp in a pink towel guddan make her seat on the bed then went to bring mishti's cloth akshat was doing his work on laptop mishti saw him

M-papa aap kya kal lahe ho

A- kuch nahi bacha kaam kar raha hoon

Mishti then looking around the room she notice antra picture she didn't notice it yesterday in excitement

M- papa wo kichi ki photo hai

Akshat saw mishti pointing at antra picture he was speechless how will he explaine about antra to her guddan come their with mishti's cloth she heared her question

M- papa bolo na kon hai

Akshat wasn't saying anything so guddan decide to explain about antra to mishti it's her right to know about her biological mother guddan come to her

G- main aapko bataungi wo kon hai pahele ye dress pehente hai

She made her wear the clothes it was a pink top with a hot pant she then make a fountain on mishti's hair then she made her seat on her lap akshat look towards her she assure him

G- wo photo main jo hai na wo bhi apki ma hai apki antra ma

M- par meli mumma to aap ho

G- apko pata hai krishna ji ki do do mummy thi na

M- ha

G- vaise hi apki bhi do do mumma hai

M- acha main chamjha gayi par antla ma hai kahan

G- god ke paas hai

M- kyun

G- god ko wo achi lagi isliye unhe apne paas rakha liya

A- mishti roye nahi isliye unhonne apki guddan mumma ko apke paas bhej diya

Guddan look at akshat he have little tear in his eyes guddan signal him not to cry she take mishti to antra's pic lit the diya give mishti white flower and told him to give it near the photo mishti do the same then guddan said her to join her hands to pray infront of the picture mishti do the same

G pov - antra didi hume apni blessings dijye jaise main mishti ki ma ban paun

Both finished their prayer akshat went to them and said they should go for breakfast downstairs he take mishti in her arm kiss her cheek

M- papa apne mujhe itni sali moling kiss di pal mumma ko nahi diya unhe bula lagege

Both are dumfounded at it just stare at each other then look.away feeling awkward

A- beta wo mumma ko nahi chaiye

G- ha beta chalo breakfast karte hai

But mishti didn't listen seeing no other option akshat kiss guddan's cheek then literally ran from their taking mishti guddan become read at this she went downstairs

Breakfast was a pleasant afair mishti amazed everyone with her babyish talk AKSHAN are not looking each other due to the kiss fiasco both are blushing

After sometime vardaan kishor went to restaurant reculantly as they also want to spend time with mishti but it's important to go restaurant so akshat said them that they can come home at afternoon

Dadi then said she was going to keep a party for mishti's return and to announce mishti being the daughter of the house

Akshan spent their day playing with mishti at afternoon kishor vardaan also return from restaurant they bought many toys for mishti

At evening all get ready for the party akshat was wearing a black tuxedo guddan wearing a read colour gown and mishti wearing read and black frock mixing of her mumma papa

All the guest come akshat announced about mishti all are happy they bless akshan bhushan and revati also happy for them guddan introduce them to mishti as nanu and masi revati take her mishti was happy with her masi

Some neighborhood noisy aunty start their as usual rant

L1- are yeh guddan kya apnayegi akshat ki beti ko

L2-akhir hai to sauteli ma hi

L3-abhi sab dikhawa kar rahi hai dekhna kya karegi yeh bachi ke saath

L1- vaise bhi itni kam umar main saas ban gayi aab ma bana na isse na ho payega

Guddan have tears in her eyes all family members are furious at their talk akshat was about to said something when dadi stop him he look at her

S- ruk lala aaj guddan ka pati nahi uski bahu jawab degi

Akshat saw durga went towards them in anger he smile now gu have not only him her bahu's also who will take stand for her

Durga went to them

D- aunty ji aap logo ko to sab maloom hai kab kya hoga acha yeh bataiye krishna ji ki ma kon hai

L1- yeh kaisa sawal hai krishna ji ki ma jasoda thi

D- par main ne suna hai ki unki ma devki thi

L2-par pala jasoda ne tha to wo unka naam lete hai krishna ki ma ke tor par

D- to phir sasu ma kyun nhai bana sakti mishti ki ma bhale hi antra ma ji ne mishti ko janam diya ho magar sasu ma hi uski ma hogi aur unse jyada koi nahi samaj sakta ma ka pyaar kya hota hai ek bache ke liye

The ladies are ashamed at it they shut their mouth

Durga went to guddan weep her tears guddan hug durga kishor feel proud of durga she stand for their guddan ma

Bhusan was happy her daughter get everything she deserve

To light the mood Vardaan announced for dance

First kishore Vardaan durga laxmi revati dance on gallan goodiyaan song

Then mishti dance on cutie pie song

Vardaan then announced that it time for mishti's mumma papa to dance but akshat said no

M- papa please mumma chat dance kalao
Mujhe dekhna hai

Akshan can't say no to their princess so both went to the dance floor akshat take guddan's hand in his and place his hand on her waist guddan keep her one hand on akshat's shoulder then music start

Woh rang bhi kya rang hai
Milta na jo tere hoth ke rang se hubahu
Woh khushboo kya khushboo
Thehre na jo teri saanwari zulf ke rubaru

Tere aage ye duniya hai pheeki si
Mere bin tu na hogi kisi ki bhi
Ab ye zaahir sar-e-aam hai, elaan hai

Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu
Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu (x2)

Akshat twrill guddan around then pull her closer guddan's back was towards akshat's chest akshat's hot breath hitting at her neck guddan feeling goosebumps at the contact
Uljhan bhi hoon teri
Uljhan ka hal bhi hoon main
Thoda sa ziddi hoon
Thoda pagal bhi hoon main

Barkha bijli baadal jhoothe
Jhoothi phoolon ki saugatein
Sacchi tu hai saccha main hoon
Sacchi apne dil ki baatein

Dastkhat haathon se haathon pe kar de tu
Naa kar aankhon pe palkon ke parde tu
Kya ye itna bada kaam hai, elaan hai

Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu
Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu (x2)

At the end of the dance akshat lift guddan upward both have a eye lock their trance broke by everyone's clap akshat then pleace guddan on floor both both smile at each other then they come out of dance floor

Guddan saw hear and their when no one seeing them she kiss akshat on his cheek said it's her return kiss from morning and went to mishti akshat stand their holding bis cheek where guddan kiss

That's it friend

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Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Nice update
Loved the way durga take a stand for guddan...
Do write more
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Good update
I m proud of Durga for standing up for Guddan
And loved mishti for being cupid of Akshan
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50
Hey! I read ur update a while ago but couldn't comment.
Mishti is such a cute cupid for Akshan.
Loved it a lot. ❤️

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