AKSHAN SS -love chori chori part 13update ( 8 may 2019) - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Soh AJ and guddan were fighting like Tom and Jerry back there so how love blossom between them
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter - 5
Flash back-

3 month passed by akshat and guddan always bump to each even they try to not to come infront of each other and then the tom and Jerry fight will must happen if jeevan and revati didn't interfere then both definitely end up killing each other


It was a Sunday akshat gave his cook leave on Sundays as he himself cook so some time guddan's bua sent some dishes for him

So like always she also make some aalu puri and sent guddan to akshat house to give it as jeevan and suresh went to buy some grocerie and revati was talking with kaushalya

Guddan unwantedly went to akshat home she went inside and call him but get no response she start to search him

G- yeh uncle kahi apne kaam pe nahi chale gaye nahi nahi ghar ki khula chodke kahan jayenge

She thought to check on his bedroom she search almost all room but most of them are locked atlast she reach near a room and it was not Locked so she thought it must be his room she knock for some time but get no response so she went inside and saw akshat sleeping she thought akshat is always punctual how come he sleeping so late

G- hye bhagwan uncle kahi sote waqt upar to nahi kat liye

She went to check him when her hand toch his forehead she realize akshat having high fever akshat's sleep broke due to the contact

A- tum tum yaha kya kar rahi ho wo bhi mere bed room main

He try to get up but can't due to the high fever and headache

G- chup chap lete rhai ye baad main hume daat lijiyega hum apko aalu puri dene aye the bua ne bheja hai aab yeh bataiye apka first aid box kanha hai

A- first aid box kyun tum aaloo puri dene ayi thi na de diya aab jao

G-oofo ziddi insaan kanhike bukhar main tap rahe hai aur hum madad kar rahe hai wo bhi nahi lena chu chupa bataye

Akshat didn't argue much he told her guddan went and come with the box she take out thermometer and place it on his mouth after some time when she take it out it was reading 104

G- hey bhagwan itna bukhar aap yaha kisi doctor ko jante hai number dijiye

Akshat give her the number guddan call the doctor the doctor said he will be reach their in five minutes guddan hung up the call she went to the kitchen pour some water in a bowl then went to akshat's room with the water bowl and a clothe

She sat beside him start to put the wet cloth in his head akshat just admiring guddan the girl he always insult was taking care of him

Soon the doctor come and check akshat he give an injection to akshat he then prescribed some medicine akshat thanks him he went from their guddan take the chit went to her home tell her bua everything till then jeevan was come back he went and bring the medicine gauri made some soup guddan take the medicine and soup and went back to akshat

He was sleeping guddan wake him up give him his medicine and then feed him the soup akshat then sleep due to the medicine effect

At evening guddan come akshat was awake and doing something on his laptop guddan saw this

G- yeh aap kya kar rahe hai

A- kaam kar raha hoon

G- bukhar main bhi apko kaam karna hai apki medicine ka time ho gaya hai

She give him his medicine then she give him a bowl of khichdi akshat have it as he feeling hungry guddan then take the bowl and about to go when akshat said

A-guddan thanks

G- aap hume thanks keh rahe hai ye chamatkar kaise hua

A- guddan please aab argue karna thik hai kya

G-ok ok u welcome

A- guddan hum humesha ladhte rehete hai issme kisika bhi fayada nhai vaise main ne realize kiya hai ki tum itni bhi buri nahi ho

G- aap baat to sahi keh rahe hai aap bhi itne bure nahi hai to ek kaam karte hum friend ban jate hai

Akshat thought for some times then agree both shake hand guddan smile at him

G- acha uncle hum chalte hai

A- aab hum friend ban gaye hai na to mujhe tum Akshat bula sakti ho

G- ok unc oops ok akshat

Guddan went from their smile remembering their friendship

Two days passed by akshat become alright due to guddan's care they now didn't argue much

Akshat start to change after his friendship with guddan now some time he also hang out with jeevan revati guddan some time he do crazy things with them come out of his khadoos avtar

As the day start to pass guddan realize her love for akshat but she try to suppress as she know akshat love antra only she just a mere friend for him

On the other hand akshat too feeling something towards guddan but he denieing it as he thought he only love antra

That day one of akshat's friend kabir who is in manali come to meet akshat he can see the old akshat the Happy and full of life

Then guddan call akshat he smile looking at the phone he talk to her she ask him to come with them for visit some temple but akshat denied saying he was with his friend kabir saw all this

K-kya baat hai bhai kaun hai

A- meri friend hai guddan

K- sirf friend ya aur

A- kabir wo mujhse 14 ya 15 saal choti hai kuch bhi mat bol

K- choti hai fir bhi tumne usse se dosti aur mujhe keh raha hai kuch nahi

Akshat get up from his chair went and stand near Window

A- aise nahi ho sakta kabir main antra ki jagha kiss aur ko nahi de sakta uper se hum dono bahot alag hai wo purab hai to main paschim mujhe santi pasand hai aur wo chatter box hai

K - tujhe pata hai opposite always attract aur rhai baat antra bhabi ki to usane unki jagah kabhi nahi li usne apna ek alga jagha bana liya hai usse bata de iss pehele ki der hojaye

Kabir went from their leaving akshat in thought
At night guddan in her room settings thinking about akshat just then revati and jeevan come

R- di kya socha rhai ho

G- kuch nahi chutki baaas aise hi

J- darling humse jhoot mat bolo

R- kis ke baare main soch rahi ho na

G- nahi hum akshat ke baare main nahi soch rahe

R-hum ne unka naam kab liya

J- darling tum hottie se pyar karti ho na

Guddan can't take it she brust into tears revati jeevan immediately hug her from both side

G- ha hum pyar karte hai unse paar wo kbhi nahi manege wo sirf apni pehele patni antra se pyar karte hai humara pehla pyar adhura reh gaya chutki

J- nahi darling himmat mat haro tumse jyada duniya dekhi hai main ne hottie bhi tumse pyar karta hai par usse realize nahi kar raha sabar karo sab thik ho jayega

They make guddan sleep then went from their other side sleep was far away from akshat all the moment with guddan just flying infront of him

So comment and like

Note- hello friends tomorrow I am going to attend some of my relatives wedding so will update my other stories after Wednesday till then bye take care love you❤️



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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Nice update
Loved it waiting for the nxt part
Edited by KajalTiwari - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Loved akshan friendship
Wanna see how both of them will confess their love
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
Fantastic update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: KajalTiwari

Nice update

Loved it waiting for the nxt part


Thank you kajal
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

Awesome update dear

Loved it
Loved akshan friendship
Wanna see how both of them will confess their love
Please do continue soon


Thank you kush

Will be able to update after Wednesday only
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08


Thank you kush

Will be able to update after Wednesday only

call me lina
Edited by kusharberry - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ok lina 😊😊😊
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Chapter - 6
Flash back

Next day guddan become normal she thanks revati jeevan for being with her they just say they love her can't saw her broken

They have their breakfast then all watch movie in tv it was afternoon guddan saw the it was 1 pm she thought to went to akshat as he will be at home for lunch ask him for outing as he don't go with her yesterday

On the other hand akshat was in a very bad mood as he didn't sleep well and not able to accept the fact he love guddan he was restless

Even at work he shout at his employee 3 or 4 time so he decided to not go to work after lunch

So he was working from home just then the door bell rang the cook went and open the door it was guddan fully ready she went inside saw Akshat working

G- hello Aj kya kar rahe hai

A- hii guddan bas kaam kar raha hoon

G- acha app abhi bapas apni kaam pe jayenge

A- nahi aaj socha ki yahi se kaam karoon

G- great to phir chaliye hum ghumne chalte hai kal nahi ja paye the na apke friend aye hue the

A- guddan aaj mood nahi hai phir kabhi chalte hai

G- are chaliye to sahi apka mood thik ho jayega chaliye

Akshat know guddan will not listen so he said yes then both went to explore manali more

They visit some temple then went for shopping in all this it became night so akshat told her that they should go back guddan reculantly said yes

They are coming back it was a lonely road guddan was feeling bored so she turn the radio a romantic song start to play akshat feel award hearing it so he turn of the system

G- are gana kyun band kia

A- main distract hota hu agar drive karte waqt gana baje to

G- par main bore ho rahi hoon

A- to tum apni phone se suno

G- humari phone ki battery khatam ho gayi hai

A- ghumne aane se pehel charge nahi kar sakti thi

Guddan don't say anything again played the music akshat again turn it off then guddan turn it on this thing was going on when a truck come almost hit them when akshat immediately control the car

He in anger hit his hand on the staring in anger he shout at guddan

A- dimag kharap hai tumhari aise koi karta hai kya yeh koi khel hai chalu band chalu band ki abhi accident ho jati

G- chilaye mat sirf meri galti nahi apki galti bhi hai

A- ha hai meri galati tumahre sath mein ghumne ke liye aagya

G- matlab kya hai apka

A- matlab yeh hai ki kuch der ke liye main bhul gaya tha tum galti ki dukan ho tumhare saath kuch bhi thik nahi ho skta

G- aap regret karte ho mujhse dosti karke

A- ha infact tumhara mere life main hona hi galat hai pata nahi kab wo din ayega jab tum mera picha chodogi

That is the last straw for guddan she get out of the car

G- thank you uncle meri jagha mujhe batane ke liye ja rahi hoon apse dur aab aap mujhe kbhi nahi dekhoge

She close the door and went from their akshat also in anger went from their but stop after some distance

He was angry at himself how can he do this to her he didn't regret being with her and he also said to get out of his life then her word sank in his mind he get scared

A- hey bhagwan please meri guddan ko safe rakhna wo bahot sensitive hai kuch galat na kar baithe jee nahi paunga uske bina

Ha pyar karta hu usse phirse meri galti ki wajahse mera pyar mujhse mat chin na

He then turn the car drive madly he reach the spot where he leave her he get scared not seeing her their he start to search her after some distance he saw her crying seating under a tree

He went to her seeing him guddan get up but before she can go akshat hold her

A- kaha ja rahi ho chalo mere saath gadi main

G- nahi jana hume apke sath aap chate hai na ki hum apki zindagi se door ho jaye to chale jata hai apse door infact iss duniya se hi chale jate hai koi hume pyar nahi karta ye galti ki dukan har baar sunne se acha hai ki hum mar jaye

A-guddan khabardar jo marne ki baat ki

G- kyun na karo apko kya farak padta hai hum jiye ya mare

A- farak padta hai damm it farak padta hai pyar karta hoon tumse tumhare bagair jee nahi paoonga apna pehele pyar kho diya hai main ne aab tumhe nahi kho sakta

Guddan just staring at him then akshat cup her face

A- sorry guddan main ne tumse kaha ki meri zindagi se chali jao sach to yeh hai ki tumse thodi bhi duri bardasht nahi hoti main apne apko rok raha tha tumse pyar karne se soch ta tha ki antra ki jagha tumhe kaise du par tumne to pehle hi apni ek jagha bana di

So ms guddan gupta I love you kya tum apne iss uncle ko pyar karogi

Guddan hug him tightly and cried akshat just creasing her head after some time akshat slightly part her then weep her tear

A- tum ro kyu rahi ho guddan kya tum mujhe se pyar nahi karti

G- stupid apko dikhta nahi I love you too bahot pyar karti hoon apse jo pyar aapne abhi realize ki wo main ne kab se kar li thi par socha nahi tha ki mujhe apka pyar milega

A- to aab se rona dhona band mujhe tumhare ankho main aansoo pasand nahi

G- ok Aj

A- aj nahi Akshat aaj se tum mujhe Akshat bulaogi

G- ok akshat

Just then rain start to fall both look at each other then akshat hold guddan's hand

A- ms gupta kya aap mere sath dance karna chahegi

G- ji jindal sahab my pleasure

They hear a song coming from a near by stall both start to dance


Kabhi Jo Badal Barse
Main Dekhoon Tujhe Aankhein Bharke..
Tu Lage Mujhe Pahli Baarish Ki Duaa..
Tere Pahloo Mein Rah Loon..
Main Khud Ko Paagal Kah Loon..
Tu Gam De Ya Khushiyaan
Sah Loon Saathiyaa..
Koi Nahi, Tere Siva Mera Yahaan..
Manzilein, Hain Meri To Sabh Yahaan..
Mita De Sabhi Aaja Faansle..
Main Chahoon Mujhe Mujhse Baant Le..
Zara Sa Mujhmein Tu Jhaank Le..
Main Hoon Kya..

Akshat twrill her around both face each other akshat put his hand around her waist guddan place her hand on her shoulder then akshat kiss her forehead guddan smile shaly

Ooo..
Aaeee..Aeee..Aaa..
Pahle Kabhi, Na Tune Mujhe Gham Diya..
Phir Mujhe, Kyoon Tanha Kar Diya..
Guzaare The Jo Lamhe Pyaar Ke
Hamesha Tujhe Apna Maan Ke..
To Phir Tune Badli Kyoon Adaa..
Yeh Kyoon Kiya..
Ooo..Ooo
Kabhi Jo Badal Barse
Main Dekhoon Tujhe Aankhein Bharke..
Tu Lage Mujhe Pahli Baarish Ki Duaa..
Tere Pahloo Mein Rah Loon..
Main Khud Ko Pagal Kah Loon..
Tu Gam De Ya Khushiyaan, Sahloon Saathiyaa.

Both finished their dance then went to the car they settled inside guddan was feeling cold so akshat warp her with the coat then went towards their colony they reached their before going guddan hug akshat then both went to their respective home

Guddan change into fresh clothes she was drying her hair and smiling recalling their moment just then revati jeevan come inside

J- dekh rahi ho revati meri darling kaise muskura rahi hai

Guddan brought out of her thought by this she just smile at them

R- di aap to aj ke sath gayi thi na to bheegi kaise ha

G- revati aab unhe jiju bulao aj nahi

Both revati and jeevan are shocked

J- matlab darling hottie bhi tumse

G- ha wo bhi mujhse pyar karte hai aur unhone aaj mujhe propose bhi kiya

Both get excited they went to guddan and hug her tightly they are happy for her

Next day they went to a restaurant to celebrate it revati call akshat as jiju both revati jeevan start to pull their leg akshan are blushing

They decide that guddan will try to impress the bahu's so that they will accept her their sasa whole hartedly not in pressure of akshat till then their relationship will be secret

The last two weeks both spend time with each other their night fill with their lovey dovy talks

After two weeks both return to indore

Flash back end

Akshat then one his gallery and saw guddan's pic

A- meri pagal jaan sochti hai usse kuch nahi ho sakta par wo jo kar sakti hai wo koi nahi kar sakta mujh jaise robotic insaan ki jindegi main phir se rang bhar di

On the other hand guddan standing infront of lord krishna's photo

G- partner bohat din baad meri jindegi main khushi ayi hai usse mat chin na

Both then went to sleep thinking about their future

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