Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march - Page 13

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

Wow gayu nice chapter

Akshat make guddan understand

continue soon

Really?
Likes or comments dekh ke toh nahi lag raha.
But still particularly for this story I wanted to show Akshat extra matured.
so I did it.
glad that you liked it and keep liking it.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

Love it
Continue soon

thanks and keep loving it.
And keep showering your precious love.or I can say priceless love.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Amazing

Update Soon
Thanks For The PM

Thanks
and for how many times you will say thanks I had already clarified it'smy own greed behind this.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Awesome update

Loved it dear
Loved how made his Mrs agree to attend reunion along with him
Waiseh update was small toda bada Karo nah next update mein
Do continue soon

Aww thank you so much lina
keep loving and showering your love more nd more.
actually I wrote for around 3 pages of word don't know yeh chotta kaise ho gaya.
let it be,anyways next update main lyrics aayenge toh waise bhi long ho jayega
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey nice part
Is there some other reason for guddu to avoid reunion ?
Plz pm the next part soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: dershika

Hey nice part

Is there some other reason for guddu to avoid reunion ?
Plz pm the next part soon

Thanks😊
I think it's only you who could I successfully convey.Yes the reason will be revealed in last update.
1 is already declared and it's responsibility of Social annual function and second I will reveal in last update.
Sure if and only iff you promise me to tell each time how you felt about the story.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry,Sorry but as I told you now my updates will be late. I hope you all will cope withme as you always had.So,without wasting much time let's go to story fast .

Story so far-

Akshan has been deeply in love even the family has accepted Guddan,Guddan shares an loving relationship with her sons and the DILs. Akshat has slightly changed his way of living.Now he is more happy person and lives his life to fullest.One day Guddan receives her College reunion's invitation which she hides from Akshat.Akshat goes mad on her for hiding this as he thinks Guddan is not attending party due to Kabir, Kabir was Guddan's boyfriend in her college and they had a long relationship but later as Guddan refused to sleep with him he moved on with Divya,who was Guddan's best friend.Then all things got sorted between them and Akshat convinces Guddan to attend the reunion .

Chapter 6

As Akshat came from office his heart missed a bit watching Guddan who was wearing her earrings.She was indeed looking phenomenal in the orange gown which Akshat recently gifted her. Akshat went closer to her he put his right hand on her stomach and pulled her closer.Her back hitted his chest staring at her image in mirror he placed his chin on her shoulder.

Pulling her more closer he whispered in her ear.

Akshat- Not fair,how can one be so beautiful?

Guddan turning her face towards him wrapped her arms on his shoulder.

Guddan smilingly- Ho gaya?

Akshat-Umhmm nodding in no.

Guddan- What no?

Akshat pulled her more closer,now his hands on her waist and their faces hardly an inch apart.

Akshat- You know very well,but if you still want I can explain you,with certain naughty expressions.

To this,guddan removed her hands and said Bass now go and get fre

And smiled with an weird glitter in her eyes. Akshat noticed it but didn't said a single word as he knows when she will change her mood and refuse to go to party don't know.

As he moved near his closet Guddan said I had already kept your clothes in Washroom so you don't need to check your clothes.

Akshat- Kyaa baat hai Mrs Jindal, aaj achanak.

Guddan-Nothing special just aise he,Now go and get ready.


To her gesture Akshat was left in thinking.

Aakhir baat kya hai,in the morning she was refusing to go in party and now ready and even has already made arrangements for me.Daal main kuchh toh kaala hai.Aakhir chal kya raha hai iske dimaag main.


Guddan- Akshatji are you fine?

Akshat- Back to senses from his thoughts,offcourse I will just get ready.

As he went in washroom Guddan had weird smile on her face,rubbing her both palms.


Akshat came in seconds out of the washroom.

Akshat-What's this Guddan?

Guddan-Shirt.

Akshat- who mujhe bhi dikh raha hai but pink seriously

Guddan- Haa, bilkul zataak lagoge.

Akshat- Guddan you acche se know I neither like to wear such colour clothes nor do I wear them.Aur mujhe koi zataak lagne ka shauk nahi hai.

Guddan- Toh try it for today.


Akshat simply refused it as he took out his regular black shirt from his closet.

Guddan- aap ki baat maan kar hum party main jaane ke liye ready huye,aap ke liye hi humne itne pyaar se yeh shirt kharidee. It's fine if you didn't like it and wear it in party. I won't go to party.

Akshat understood her plan in seconds.


Akshat in his mind. So,this is your plan. Seriously Guddan I must appreciate you for this as you knew very well that I will never wear this pink shirt and you will smartly avoid this party. Very smart Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal. But main bhi kam ziddi nahi hun. If this is the price to take you in reunion, I will definitely pay it.

Akshat went in washroom and when he came out Guddan received one of the biggest shock of her life as he weared the pink shirt.Guddan's face fell down.

She mumbled "Yeh Akshatji bhi naa baaz nahi aayenge ,apni zidd manwaa kar hi rahenge, humare itne ache plan ki band baja di.


Akshat pat her shoulders and saidChale.

Guddan unwantedly-Hmm.

And they both left for party.


As they reached the party venue.Akshat went to park the car andGuddan waited for him.When he was coming Guddan could not take her eyes off from him and continuously staring.

Guddan- Kuch jyaada hi handsome lag rahe hain ye hiss shirt main,Chalo iss sare maajre main bass yahi ek cheez achhi hui ki inhone yeh shirt pehen li and rangon se apna naata jod liyaa.


She thanked lord Krishna for making their pair and wished the love between them stays forever ,thankyou lord Krishna even for bringing colours again in Akshatji's life.

Akshat came and said-"Chale.

They took entry in party by holding each other's hands like a typical couple.

As they entered in party within just few minutes they both were surrounded by the girl gang of Guddan .

Guddan introduced each of them to Akshat and before she could introduce Akshat to them,akshat introduced him on his own.


Girl gang-AAj pata chala jiju,why Guddan doesn'thas time for us now. Abb itna achha pati ho toh kise apne doston ka khayaal aaye nahi.

Abb aapko ghurne se madam ko waqt milta ho toh madam ko humari yaad aaye.

Akshat- smiling, achha aisi baat hai toh why don't you all join us at our home, I mean aap sabki shikaayat bhi dur ho jayegi and even Guddan won't refuse it, Hai naa.

Guddan- Offcourse.

One of the girl in gang- Aww how sweet of you jiju.

Well jiju aap toh humesha hi hamare friend ke saath rehte hai ttoh would you mind if we take your wife for sometime along with us?

Akshat- Why would I ? Sure for today she is just your friend and not my wife.


To this Guddan passed an killing gaze towards him.


But just for this party as the party overs you all will have to return my wife to me.

Girl gang- Ok jiju, Thank ou so much.

And they took Guddan with them.


Though Guddan got busy in her friends her eyes were completely on him in the whole party.

Even some of her friends taunted her on it, But she didn't mind.

After some time Akshat was sitting on bar counter and enjoying his juice. A young couple came near counter and asked for a drink to the bar attender.Akshat was still enjoying his juice suddenly a group of the couple's friends joins them and says.


Hey,how are you guys?

Did you met Guddan?

To this Akshat's ears paid attention to them.

Couple- Not yet.

Well, we had listened that she has got married, Is it true?

Couple's friends- Yes, she has married Mr Akshat Jindal and has become India's youngest saas.

Couple- laughed, Seriously saas.

The boy in the couple- She deserved it waise bhi she was completely shaadi material and she deserved someone of her husband's age.

To this Akshat burning in anger.

And their friends laughed.


The boy- Aur nahi toh kyaa, In the whole long term ofour relationship she didn't even let me touch her. Thank God I left her.

Bacch gaya main.

To this Akshat boiled in so much anger that he headed towards them but before he could catch them they left from there.

Akshat was still burning in anger.Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder and turned back. He smiled watching Guddan.


Guddan- What happened?

Akshat- nothing.

Guddan- Don't lie, Tell me what happened I know you very well.


Akshat trying to avoid her eyes.

Akshat- Nothing,who actually you left with your friends and mujhe yaha akela chood gayi,I was getting bored, aise akele chood kar mat jaaya karo.

Guddan smiling- Bass itni si baat.


She holded his hand and by mistake the juice in his glass fell on her dress as Akshat was still fuming in anger.

Akshat- I am so sorry Guddan trying to clean it,Pata nahi kaise.

Guddan smiled and said it's OK.

I will just come and went to clean her dress.


When she was coming from washroom after cleaning her dress she noticed couple of her juniors [girls] gossiping about Akshat

Girls- Hey did you notice that man in pink. Isn't he hot? And than pink shirt is even making him more hot.

Guddan's eyes widened listening this and she assured herself that they are talking about some other and not Akshat.


As she moved further another group of girls commented similar type of comment but now pointing towards Akshat,now for sure it was for Akshat.



Guddan looked at both of her sides as there was no one she smiled and pat her own back.


Guddan- Not bad,Guddan.


I knew my choice was best but listening this it's confirmed that choosing Akshatji as life partner is the best decision I took in my entire life


To be continued...


I think yeh ab jyaada lambaa jaa raha hai but I think as I have updated it after long time So was worth but Fir bhi Sorry as mujhe pata hai aap log jhel longe.

And honestly batao zyaada lambi kheechi jaa rahi hai kya? Or boring ho rahi hai?

As likes and comments are reducing so couldn't figure it out so jaisi bhi lage bataiyo zaroor.



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Posted: 6 years ago
Mujhe to lengthy nhi laga ye chapter bahut interesting h aur lamba hota tb bhi koi prob nhi tha
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update gayu
Akshat see guddan's ex

Now eagerly waiting him to teach that boy a lesson

Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey I liked the part
I could imagine guddan's expression on her plan failure and also on the last part of girls drooling on akshat
Well waiting for some akshan dhamaka
Hamare Jindal sahab unke wife is mazak udane walo ko answer toh zarur jayenge
Update soon dear

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