Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march - Page 12

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Posted: 6 years ago

Well first of all Sorry as in between the time I too have quite lost the link with the story.As I am updating it after long.But what to do even now my updates will be late as my semester now will be regular and in full swing and even my exams will be there. So will try to finish it before my exams are announced.

Well I thought that this story will end in 3 parts but it didn't Will try to wind this up in next part but let's see as before writing this I didn't thought that it will take these many parts but it took.

So if I won't be able to complete it in next part. So will write more but I am expecting the same response you all showered in the previous 3 4 parts of the story.So please agar buri lage toh bhi batana...

Chapter 5

As Akshat told Guddan that he is going to take her to her College reunion.Herface felt down and she released herself from his arms.

As she turned away Akshat too got sad,Guddan.

Akshat- Guddan please,don't be so cruel with you.

Guddan- I am not coming,I can't.

Akshat- But Why?

Guddan- Abhi toh batayaa there are many preparations of the social function to be done. I can't leave my responsibility in between.

Akshat- I too just told you that Durga bahu will manage it and even she agreed.

And just now you was ready to go for a date and suddenly after listening college reunion's name you got busy.

Guddan- there's nothing like that,I had already informed the authorities that I won't be able to come.

Akshat- That's not the problem.

I had already informed them in morning that we both are coming and even they badly wanted both of us to join.

Guddan was still refusing his proposal of going to College reunion.

He made her sit on bed .

Akshat- Look Guddan, I understand that you don't want to face Kabir and Divya but trust me Guddan isse tumhe kuch nahi milega.

To this Guddan really got annoyed and yelled at Akshat.

Guddan- For how many times I need to tell you that I had nothing to do with both of them. They both were cheat and I don't even want to spoil my energy and time talking about them and if you wished to talk about them then see you in evening.

Saying this Guddan stood up and began to leave the room.But Akshat stopped her by holding her arm tightly. And now Akshat made her forcely sit on bed and he again holded her hands in his.

Akshat- Guddan I didn't really intend to annoy you, I didn't wanted you to get troubled but at the same time I don't want you to repeat my mistakes.

Guddan you remember before some months even I too was rejecting for Singhania's party as I was afraid that Antara's memories will haunt me. I will miss her more. But you forced me to attain the party and I had good time with all of my friends.

We all spent quality time with each other,we all cherished our favourite memories and that was the time I realized I missed so many happy moments in between years I could have and I regret for it.

Similarly Guddan I don't want you to be away of this,Your college life was not only about kabir,Divya and their betrayal but also about your friends about your dreams,your aspirations.

Guddan don't you think you re doing injustice with all your friends by not going just because they both will be there.

Guddan- They both are not the reason infact they both had favored me as if Kabir hasn't leaved me I hadn't got you...

Akshat- So atleast come with me to say thanks to him as maybe indirectly they too are our shippers and one of the reason that we are happy together today.

Guddan- sadly accepting her defeat, So you are not gonna listen.

Akshat nodded in No.

Guddan- So finally aap nahi maanne waale?

Akshat- Guddan why do you ask such questions jiske jawab tumhe pehle se pata hote hai.

To this she nodded yes in defeat.At this he smiled

Akshat's- That's like my girl.

Guddan- he kissed her forehead and went for office saying " Be ready. I will just come.

In evening around 7 pm in Akshan's room.

Guddan was wearing her earrings at the moment akshat enters room and he keeps his hand on stomach and pulled Guddan towards him.

Her back shoulders now resting on his chest. He put his chin at her shouldes.

Akshat- Kyaa baat hai Mrs. Jindal aaj toh kahar dha rahi hai aap.

To this flirt she smiled and said "Jalne ki buu aa rahi hai nahi kahi se.

Akshat- nahi toh.

And they both bursted into laughter.

Guddan still laughing- go and get ready. I had already put your clothes in washroom.

Akshat- Bass yun gaya aur yun aaya and he actually came out in seconds holding pink shirt in his hand..

Akshat- What the hell is this guddan?

Guddan innocently replied- Shirt.

Akshat- Who dikh raha hai but pink shirt,you know very well that I didn't wear such colours.

Guddan- So now start wearing.

Holding the shirt on him

Guddan look it suits you

Akshat-Guddan, I am not gonna wear this in party...

To be continued

Note:- the scene of pink shirt I wrote at the time I wrote just for me but couldn't find place and I assure you all that this will be completely different from the one in episode.

Do let me know how boring is it going as I know though this part was only of Akshan their conversation might have bored you all but I thought it to be necessary so I wrote it. But Do let me know..

Thanks and keep bearing..

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awsome
Akshat convincing guddan to go for reunioun was really good
Loved it
Continue the next part soon
And plz update ur ff also
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: KajalTiwari

Awsome

Akshat convincing guddan to go for reunioun was really good
Loved it
Continue the next part soon
And plz update ur ff also

Thanks
Really
I thought it would be boring as likhte waqt mujhe bhi thoda bore huwaa
Sure
Which FF?
Kajal21 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Thanks
Really
I thought it would be boring as likhte waqt mujhe bhi thoda bore huwaa
Sure
Which FF?


Both but first revenge wala plz
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: KajalTiwari


Both but first revenge wala plz

Why you say so much plz main itna bhaav khati hu kya?
I will try for it soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow gayu nice chapter
Akshat make guddan understand

continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing
Update Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it dear
Loved how made his Mrs agree to attend reunion along with him
Waiseh update was small toda bada Karo nah next update mein
Do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ohh So sweet of you.
Sorry as for Love flourished I made you wait for too long.
Actually it's just that in between travelling my time goes more.It's fruitless.Though I manages to read replies and topics in forum in that time but can't update it as my friends are there along with me..
so time ki tangi instead of not being so busy.

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