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Awsome part
loved it
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Welcm Jasmine 😊
Nice update ... the story unfolds now ... But yet to be solved for AKSHAN

Update soon 👏😳



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Wonderful update
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Emotional update😭As I suspected Shorvari was diagnosed with a serious disease n so was purposefully created the drama😒Oh no she got cancer again😒But good Parth is with her now and with his love she will be cured😊All are happy and accepted her👏PreeDit scene was sweet❤️UrviKa scene was cute😳Surprised to know Yuvi is Twinkle's long lost friend and he used to call her as Twinka😳Seing her arrogant nature he is angry on herAkshAn scene was romantic🤪Poor GuddanLovely pics and songs❤️
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Sajda...tera sajda I'll worship you Part 5

Thanks to Mansi 4 sweet surprise banners





Edit credit goes to the real editor

Thank you each n everyone of u 4 supporting me in this journey.This SS is ending here.Plz give a detailed comment on the last part.Plz do write ur favourite character,favourite scene,favourite jodi n why u liked them.


Uruvi's engagement party...

Parth saw Shorvori and got mesmerised in her beauty.


Aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ho.. aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ik tuk tumhein dekhti hain
Jo baat kehna chaahe zubaan
Tumse yeh woh kehti hai


He walked towards her without taking his eyes off her.


Realizing that he is lost in her she blushed.

Aankhon ki sharm-o-haya maaf hon
Tumhein dekh ke jhukti hain
Uthi aankhein jo baat na keh sakeen
Jhuki aankhein woh kehti hain
Aankhon ki, aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon




Before he reached near her she pretended to be ignoring him and walked away.

Parth:Oh no...


Shorvori giggled seeing his condition.

Kajal ka ik til
Tumhaare labon pe laga loon
Haan chanda aur suraj ki
Nazron se tumko bacha loon

Parth walked after her.He held her hair.She turned back smiling.


O.. palkon ki chilman mein
Aao main tumko chhupa loon
Khyaalon ki yeh shokhiyaan maaf hon



Slowly he came towards her.

Hardam tumhein sochti hain
Jab hosh mein hota hai jahan


They shared a romantic eye lock.

Madahosh yeh karti hain
Aankhon ki sharm-o-haya maaf hon


He whispered in her ear:You look very beautiful Princess.

She closed her eyes feeling his breath on her ear.


Yeh zindagi aapki hi amaanat rahegi
Dil mein sada aapki hi muhabbat rahegi


She opened her eyes slowly.

He walked away smiling.Shorvori smiled sweetly.

In saanson ko aapki hi zaTwinkurat rahegi
Haan is dil ki nadaaniyan maaf hon(HDDCS).


Guddan was restless not seeing Akshat around.

Guddan:Why did'nt Akshat arrive yet?

Suddenly Akshat entered.Guddan was so happy that she ran towards him to hug him.

Suddenly she came back to senses and controlled herself from hugging him.

Guddan:How are you Akshat?

Akshat:I am fine Guddan.How are you?

Guddan's face blossomed.


Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek huye din rain hamaare


She thought:For the first time you asked me how I am.I am very happy Akshat.

Guddan:I am also fine Akshat.


Hum se hum hi chhin gaye
Jab se dekhe nain tihaare

Akshat thought:I know that you are surprised about me talking softly to you.But before this party gets over you are going to get one more surprise..the biggest surprise.

Sajda..(My name is Khan).


Suddenly Shorvori came:Guddan...

Guddan:Shorvori ..this is my husband Akshat Luthra.

Shorvori :Nice to meet you Akshat.

Akshat:Even I am happy to meet you Bhabhi.



Shorvori was surprised.

Akshat:Parth bhai told me everything on the phone.I am really happy for both of you.

Shorvori blushed.

Twinkle could not believe her eyes seeing Yuvraj at the party.
Twinkle:Yuvraj..here?

Rakhi,Mahesh and dadi came.
Rakhi:We only invited him here.


Twinkle could not believe it.
Mahesh:Yuvraj came to meet us.He told us everything.So we invited him for the party.


Twinkle was stunned.
Dadi:You both need to talk and sort out everything.

Yuvraj went near Twinkle.
They both were very emotional.

Twinkle:Yuvi...please forgive me.Don't be angry with me.

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil


Yuvraj:Twinka..in childhood too we used to fight a lot.But could I be angry with you for a long time?


Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Junoon hai mera
Banoon main tere qaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil


They shared an emotional sweet eye lock.

Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera

Twinkle:I was really proud Yuvi.You opened my eyes by breaking my arrogance.Thanks for coming back to my life.I need you Yuvi.I want you always.Please don't leave me.
Yuvraj:I will never leave you Twinka.Because you are my life.


Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera




They held each other's hand and smiled romantically.

Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil(ADHM).

Mahesh:Where is the boy Karn?

Everyone including Uruvi turned around.

Suddenly the spotlight fell on Karn.They were surprised.

Karn:Hey everyone..have you ever fallen in love?

Everyone replied:Yes.

Karn:I have also fallen in love.But only with one person.

Karn pointed his finger towards Uruvi.She got excited.

Karn gave her a flying kiss.


She showed him a puppy face while receiving it.

Karn started dancing around Uruvi.Everyone enjoyed it.



(Yeah baby when you see me coming

Yeah
Yeah you better run for cover
Yeah
Yeah coz you know when I find you
Yeah
Yeah I'm gonna be your lover) 2

Tujhse log kahenge,
Na kar pyar mujhe
Main tho lakh bura hoon,
neend chura loon, hosh uda doon
Mein tho baho mein le ke
Raah bhula doon, bath bana doon
Chahe jahaan dil ko chupa
Baathon hi baathon mein,
do mulakaton mein le loon

Baachna ae haseeno,
Lo mein aa gaya
Hey baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya
Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se juda

Karn started dancing with Uruvi.

Heyyy
Baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya
Hey baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya

Haiii haiii haaiii haiii


(Yeah baby when you see me coming
Yeah
Yeah you better run for cover
Yeah
Yeah coz you know when I find you
Yeah
Yeah I'm gonna be your lover) 2

Heyy
Tujko mein zaamane ke aage main
chedunga na chodoonga
Aankhein churayegi bhi tho milaunga
Ja ja kya bahane banayegi
Dekhuga dil phenkunga
Jootey mootey wade suna ke
Fasaunga

Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se juda

Pandit and Preeti too danced.

Baachna ae haseeno,
Lo mein aa gaya
Hey baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya
Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se juda

(Yeah baby when you see me coming
Yeah
Yeah you better run for cover
Yeah
Yeah coz you know when I find you
Yeah
Yeah I'm gonna be your lover) 2 :
Bachna Ae Haseeno

Uruvi came near Karn with juice.
Uruvi:You must be tired after a fast dance number.Drink this.
She made him drink it.

After a few sips he said:You too drink it as you too danced.
He made her drink the juice from his glass.She was shy.
She saw some juice drops on his face and wiped them with her hand.Karn was lost in her.She blushed.


Karn and Uruvi exchanged rings.

Karn:Uruvi...are you reminded of something seeing these rings?

She blushed.

Flash back...

Karn gave a box to Uruvi

and opened it before her.It was a beautiful finger ring.She was surprised.

Karn:Did you like it?

Uruvi:Of course yes.It's so pretty.But I never expected such a beautiful gift from you.

Karn smiled:May I make you wear this?

She blushed:Yes.

Karn:I will make you wear it only if you permit me to make you wear rings through out your life.

Uruvi was confused:Means?

Karn:I love you Uruvi.Will you marry me?

Uruvi was surprised and happy:Yes Karn.

Karn was so happy that he slipped the ring onto her finger.

Present...

Uruvi:How can i forget your beautiful proposal?

Karn:Even I can't forget that moment as it made me realize that how much you love me.

Uruvi blushed.

Akshat went near Parth.

Akshat:Parth bhai..don't waste time.You propose to Shorvori bhabhi.

Parth smiled.

Parth went near Shorvori and pulled her hand.She stared at him in disbelief.
Parth:I want to tell you something Shorvori .
Shorvori :Say...
Parth:Unknowingly I gave you a lot of pain.I apologize again and again.Please forgive me.

Shorvori became emotional and held his hand.
Shorvori :Parth...what is the need of all this?
Parth:It's needed Shorvori .Even if I apologize thousand times what i did to you cannot be forgiven.
Shorvori 's eyes became teary:Please stop it Parth.It hurts me.
Parth:I am sorry Shorvori .
Shorvori :If you want to tell me this I don't want to hear anything.
Parth:I want to tell you another thing too.People say that love happens only once.I disagree with it.Because I have fallen in love again...with you.Again I fell in love with you Shorvori .

Shorvori smiled.

Yeh meri kahan sunti hain
Yeh pal pal jo hoti hain bekal sanam
To sapne naye bunti hain


Parth extended his hand towards her:Will you be my wife?

Shorvori held his hand smiling:Yes,I will marry you.


Hmm.. aankhon ki, aankhon ki
Gustakhiyan maaf hon
Sharm-o-haya maaf hon


In excitement Guddan held Akshat's hand.Akshat smiled.

Suddenly she realized what she did and took off her hand from him.
Guddan:Sorry.
Akshat just smiled.


They shared a romantic eye lock.

Aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ho.. aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ik tuk tumhein dekhti hain
Jo baat kehna chaahe zubaan
Tumse yeh woh kehti hai
(HDDCS)


Everyone clapped their hands.They became shy.

Guddan:You are very lucky Shorvori .Only lucky people get love from the person they love.
Suddenly Akshat held her hand from behind.


Guddan was stunned.
Akshat:You are also lucky Guddan.
Guddan stared at him in disbelief.


Teri kaali akhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudoon, sapno se aage
Ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon..


Akshat:I misunderstood you a lot Guddan.Because of my misunderstanding and ego I hurt you a lot.I am really sorry.
Guddan could'nt believe that Akshat apologized to her.


Sajda tera sajda
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon


Guddan:No need to be guilty Akshat.It's your memory loss which erased all our beautiful moments from your heart.
Akshat:You are very nice Guddan.Your good loving nature turned my stone heart into a soft heart.

Ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon..
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]


Akshat:My arrogance made me tell you that I will never love you.But you had faith that one day I will love you.I failed and you won Guddan.But I am not at all sad.In fact I am extremely happy that I have failed for the first time in my life before your love.Your belief in love won Guddan.I have started loving you.
Guddan could not believe her ears.

Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon


Akshat:Yes Guddan..I love you.
Guddan smiled emotionally.

Raanjhana.. nainon ke teer chal gaye
Saajana.. saanson se dil sil gaye
Palkon mein chhupa loon, tera sajda karoon
Seene mein sama loon, ho din rain karoon


Akshat knelt down before her holding her hand.
Akshat:Guddan...do you love me the same way you used to love me before?

Guddan said emotionally:What kind of a question is this Akshat?My love for you is endless.I will keep loving you till the end.

Palakon mein chhupa loon, seene mein sama loon
Tere ang rang rang mera bole
Ho.. ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon


Akshat smiled:A loving woman like you is my luck Guddan.
She smiled.


Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon


Akshat:I am sad that i don't remember any beautiful moment of our life.Can you please help me to recreate those beautiful moments again with more love and beauty?
Guddan nodded smiling.

Veliya.. kya hua jo dil kho gaya
Mahiya.. ishq mein Khuda mil gaya
Zara aankh se pila de, tera sajda karoon
Zara khwaab saja de, o din rain karoon

Akshat:Will you marry me again my baby doll Guddan?


Guddan was surprised:Yes,I will marry you thousand times Akshat.

Zara aankh se pila de, zara khwaab saja de
Mere honthon se mann tera bole
Ho.. ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon


Akshat got up happily and cupped her face in his hands.

Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon


They joined their foreheads together with a romantic smile.

O.. teri kaali akhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudoon, sapno se aage
Ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon..
Sajda tera sajda
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon
Aa...
(My name is Khan).

Everyone clapped their hands.
Mahesh:Guess we will have to conduct the wedding of all our children on the same day.
Rakhi:Yes Maheshji.
Preeti:Please conduct our wedding too please.
Pandit:Why Preeti?Are you in your senses.Don't make a fool of yourself.We are already married.

Preeti:So what?Pandit..I love you so much that I want to have a fairy tale wedding with you again.

Maine pucha ye dil se
Main kyu hoon jahan mein
Ek dhahkan boli tere liye


A sweet smile appeared on Pandit's face.

Maine yaadein tarashi
Aur khwaab bana di
Nayi duniya basa di tere liye


They shared a romantic eye lock blushing.

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye(Fitoor).


Dadi:Ok ok.We will conduct your remarriage too.

Pandit and Preeti smiled:Thank you.

Twinkle held Yuvraj's hand and told them:Please consider us too.

Rakhi:You both are kids.First complete education.Then we will think of wedding.
Twinkle and Yuvraj were shy.
Mahesh:We have already talked to Yuvraj's parents and we have decided to conduct your engagement.
Twinkle and Yuvraj were very happy.
Twinkle:So sweet of you all.
Twinkle hugged Mahesh and Rakhi.
Dadi:Mahesh..call Panditji and fix a day for the engagement of Yuvraj and Twinku and the grand wedding of Luthra new generation.
Mahesh:Yes..now itself.
Everyone smiled happily.

They played music.

All the couples danced romantically.

Yeh kya hua
Kuch pata na chala

Kyun haadsa ban gaya silsila
Tukdo mein tum the

Tukdo mein main bhi
Tukde bane toh hum bane

Yeh dil zindagi se
Khafa ho chala tha


Jisey phir se jeene ke
bahaane tum bane

Tanha safar ke mushkil dagar mein
Tum humsafar jo mil gaye
Hai zakhm saare sil gaye

Bikhre pade thhe bezaar lamhe
Kaanton ke jaise har jagah
Woh phool ban ke khil gaye

Sadko pe kitni shaamein guzari
Wohi raat hote aashiyane tum bane

Yeh kya hua
Kuch pata na chala(Broken).


After some weeks...

Twinkle and Yuvraj got engaged.


Finally the big fat wedding day of Luthra siblings occured.
Parth-Shorvori ,

Akshat-Guddan,


Uruvi-Karn,


Pandit-Preeti

got married happily.
While watching the wedding Yuvraj and Twinkle imagined their wedding with each other.


Yuvraj and Twinkle looked at each other.
Yuvraj:What are you thinking?
Twinkle blushed:I was dreaming of our wedding.And you?


Yuvraj blushed:I was also dreaming of our wedding.


They smiled romantically.



The End

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Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#26
Awww happy ending
Loved this FS 😳👏

What I loved the most in this part was that Akshat called Guddan "BABY DOLL"
Awww ...



Do write more such writeups Jasmine😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27
It was so cute
Loved ur fs
All jodi was my fav especially akshan
The way akshan proposes guddan and asked for forgiveness was really worth watching
Plz do write more stories on akshan
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#28
Awesome update
Love it
Favourite jodi is always akshan
All akshan scenes are amazing specialy akshat's confession
All other jodis are also amazing
Thanks for pm
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Beautiful update👏ParVori scene was lovely❤️Akshat came back and talked sweetly with Guddan surprising her😳What's in his mind?Good Yuvi isn't angry with Twinkle and both are together❤️Beautiful way of Karn's arrival and dance was cute😳PreeDit too dancedFB was romantic❤️Parth's proposal was sweet😳She said yesYaay Akshat realized Guddan's love for him and proposed her and she acceptedHis baby doll❤️All wedding on the same day and TwiRaj's engagement done😳Fav jodi - U already know as I only told u to write on them😛Fav scene - All scenes❤️Fav character- Shorvari as she didn't wanted to hurt Parth rather she made herself bad and Guddan for selflessly loving Akshat and her belief in love😳Songs and pics👍🏼
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