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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: captainplus

Awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️

read both parts in one go...😛
& loved it ! ❤️

Akshan's growing bond is beautiful
Though they fight a lot but can't see each other hurt or in pain
will be waiting to know what happens next morning 😳

continue soon...


Thanks...I will😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Thanks dear😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Salam and hi.
Thought to add a new point in my akshan story.

Enjoy 😃


AKSHAN OS- chapter 4(c): ZID

His eyes open with a sweet scent.he lifted his lashes and it was all dark in the room.curtains were set as guards to not let any Sunrays enter in the room. Birds were singing outside giving a soothing effect to whole ambiance.a smile lingered on akshat face.after many years , morning has been so peaceful and beautiful.he closed his eyes and breathe in trying to capture the morning within him.suddenly, he felt something soft in his hands.he moved his eyes towards his hand and found his fingers intertwined with a hand and he absolutely recognize who it was.he sighed and look up and found a beauty in her deep sleep.he slowly lifted up and there she was with her hair again all over face and her mouth open.some moment slip in of akshat while adoring this beauty.he realized quickly and saw guddan sleeping half seated without a pillow at her back and it was obvious that she has been sleeping with this posture throughout the night.he slowly take his hand off and softly handle her and try to lay her on bed.suddenly, akshat phone rang and guddan opened her eyes.and what she saw was a choker.
Akshat one hand was under her head, other at her waist , face inches apart and it was not usual.something was different in this touch.guddan pushed him back.

" utar gaya na apka bukhar. Kh dijye ap check karrhay thay pool side ki tarhan k main zinda hun ya nahi. Aur pichli bar geele the abki bar apne glasses bhi utar diye. Is bhool main mat rahyay k glasses utar kar main apko unkle bulana chor dungi"

" chup! Bilkul chup! " akshat hold her from waist and pulled close. Guddan couldn't stop herself from looking into his eyes; they were still red but now of deep sleep, his hair was on his forehead enhancing his features and yes ,without glasses, he looks young.

" tumhain theek se bed par laita raha tha bass aur kuch nahi" akshat cleared his stance and left her softly.

" and ainda kuch bhi ho tum bed par mat sona"

" kun? Meri tabiyat kharab honay par mujhay balcony main sulayain gay?"

" tab main balcony main chala jaon ga"

" but ap neend mn..." She couldn't complete her sentence.

" meri tabiyat ko kuch bhi ho, tum bed par nahi ao GI.main bukhar main behakta hun agar ghalti s kuch kar ..." Akshat left in between and went to check his phone.

Guddan realized that she has over think every situation until now.she tried to stop him but he quickly went to washroom.

...
All were doing breakfast when came into picture.

" han han nikal raha hun. Bas tickets confirm hon to mujhay batao." Akshat hanged up the phone.

" maa main 1 haftay k lye Turkey ja raha hun. International conference hai" akshat informed.

" magar lalla Teri tabiyat theek nahi." She sound worried.

Guddan heard this plan.

" wah! Uncle 1 haftay k lye jarahay.yani pura bed, kamra ,ghar Sab par main khullay ghoom sakti" guddan smiled in her thoughts.

" naa lalla.aesa nahi hoskta." She ordered.

" ya to tu nahi jaraha ya phir apni biwi sath lekar ja"

Akshat choked with this demand.
" kon maa?" He asked lost

" guddan ! Aur kitni biwiyan hain Teri"

" dadi kun meray plan ki band Baja rahi" guddan thought.

" magar maa yeah kia karay GI wahan?" Akshat was annoyed.

" Jo biwi karti hai" laxmi added.
But realized her mistake.

Akshat glared her and on other side, guddan sensed danger.

" lalla yeh tera khayal rakhaygi .jese kal raat rakha."

And both knew what happened last night.

" nahi..." Both declared.

" bas ja guddan beta, back pack karo apna. Aur lalla tu ticket ka intezam kar. Visa to hai iskay pas yeh bahana mat banana."

Akshat head started to spin and guddan legs started to shiver.
On other hand, 3 devils were shocked
" didi ,meray babyboo to meray pas 1 ghantay ko bheja Jata hai aur khud AJ 7 din is chuyya k sath turkey main honeymoon manayn ge. Tayari karlo Sab.is ghar main hamaray bachon s pehlay hmara devar hi akar rahayga."laxmi got furious.

" musibat" guddan thought.
" Maha mussibat" akshat declared.

New story
New chapter😉

Both unknown of the fact what God holds for them in this zabardasti ka honeymoon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
👏👏👏 so aapne bhi inhe honeymoon par bhej Diya main bhi sich rahi thi but I think I will have to think for a new plot. It's awesome Mera din bana Diya aapne
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

👏👏👏 so aapne bhi inhe honeymoon par bhej Diya main bhi sich rahi thi but I think I will have to think for a new plot. It's awesome Mera din bana Diya aapne


Don't need to change the plot.
Phle nish n honeymoon bheja hai😆

We can have 3 different versions of honeymoon trip.😆

And thanks alot😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
👏i surely want to see this in the show are yaar tumbe excitement aur bada di
.haldi do nesx part

Hinemoon turkey hyyy😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Icebubble

👏i surely want to see this in the show are yaar tumbe excitement aur bada di

.haldi do nesx part

Hinemoon turkey hyyy😳


Thanks😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Wah wah kya badiya update Diya hai
I just loved it alot
Akshan ki honeymoon wah kya baat hai
So will we get its continuation as a new chapter

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
"Main bukhaar mein behakta huu"

And I was like koi mujhe utha lo!!❤️
Guddan ko pyaar se bistr pr letane ki taiyaari🥳
"Ho raha hai tumhe pyaar sajnaaa

P.S zee rishtey awarrds ki hug se nishant ka chehra aankhon mein utr gya He was looking damn cute!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: attiya1.3


Don't need to change the plot.
Phle nish n honeymoon bheja hai😆

We can have 3 different versions of honeymoon trip.😆

And thanks alot😃

honeymoon na ji na main toh unhe rituals ke liye trip par bhejne ke baare main soch rahi hoon Let's see what happens bcoz I don't feel to write nowadays dekhte hain

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