Guddan's-REVENGE-OS [FF]{chapter 12 updated on December 16} - Page 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

no way...mn itni badi nahi hn

I m just in college😆
Pls call me mona ya moni jo bhi aapko pasand ho
Lkin mommy nahi
Maine kaya aur yashi ko name bataya to unhonr darling bana diya aapne mommy😆

Pls call me moni ya mona only aur kuch nahi

I know dear ki aap itne bade nahi ho as aapke exams chal rahe the and I am too in college It was just I was pulling your leg
Even there are my 2 friends whose name are mona but I call one mona and the other moni
Main aapko mummy kaise bana sakti hu??😉
Aapke liye Secret hi theek hai as agar mai darling bolungi toh aapko chalega nahi and as you are unique toh I don't want to call you mona or moni as mai already who 2 ladkiyon ko bolti hu..
toh aap secret hi theek ho mereliye aur mujhe pata hai ki aapko meri taang khichaayi ka bura nahi laga hoga phir bhi agar gussa aaya ho toh I am sorry
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

I know dear ki aap itne bade nahi ho as aapke exams chal rahe the and I am too in college It was just I was pulling your leg

Even there are my 2 friends whose name are mona but I call one mona and the other moni
Main aapko mummy kaise bana sakti hu?? 😉
Aapke liye Secret hi theek hai as agar mai darling bolungi toh aapko chalega nahi and as you are unique toh I don't want to call you mona or moni as mai already who 2 ladkiyon ko bolti hu..
toh aap secret hi theek ho mereliye aur mujhe pata hai ki aapko meri taang khichaayi ka bura nahi laga hoga phir bhi agar gussa aaya ho toh I am sorry

i m ok with the secret also...jahan tak rahi baat leg pulling ki.vo mn bahu karti hn apne friends ke saath..isliye i know ki aap leg pull kar rahe the meri..mn bhi aapki leg pull hi kar rahi thi...expereience hai leg pulling karne ka and karwane ka😆
Don't be sorry...mujhe bura bikul nahi laga

And mona darling ki baat rahi to jab koi mona sunta hai toh pehla word darling hi aata hai man mn

Because of indian films..tiger and mona darling
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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

i m ok with the secret also...jahan tak rahi baat leg pulling ki.vo mn bahu karti hn apne friends ke saath..isliye i know ki aap leg pull kar rahe the meri..mn bhi aapki leg pull hi kar rahi thi...expereience hai leg pulling karne ka and karwane ka😆

Don't be sorry...mujhe bura bikul nahi laga

And mona darling ki baat rahi to jab koi mona sunta hai toh pehla word darling hi aata hai man mn

Because of indian films..tiger and mona darling

Are I know ki aapko bura nahi laga issiliye toh kaha agar gussa aaya ho toh
and so toh hain but mona darling bhi acchaa lagta hai.I mean it doesn't sounds bad too but ya thoda over zaroor lagta hai.Also checkout my new TS apology who maine last comment main kaha tha na uss din mujhe jo fresh idea aaya tha who and mujhe pata hai aap mujhe honestly bataoge how was it?
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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Are I know ki aapko bura nahi laga issiliye toh kaha agar gussa aaya ho toh

and so toh hain but mona darling bhi acchaa lagta hai.I mean it doesn't sounds bad too but ya thoda over zaroor lagta hai.Also checkout my new TS apology who maine last comment main kaha tha na uss din mujhe jo fresh idea aaya tha who and mujhe pata hai aap mujhe honestly bataoge how was it?

24 th date is my last exam date...i am skipping the epispdes also..after 24..i will read your ts ..then i will comment how was it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#95
Inteha ho gayi intezaar ki
Aai na koi khabar 9th part ki😭😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

24 th date is my last exam date...i am skipping the epispdes also..after 24..i will read your ts ..then i will comment how was it

Sure Waise bhi mujhe koi jaldi nahi haiand Monday is near btw can I ask aap konsa course kar rahe ho?
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Inteha ho gayi intezaar ki

Aai na koi khabar 9th part ki😭😆

haaye aap kaho tohabhi post karde? but what to do I thought as the semester just started I will get enough time to write but yeh ulta ho gaya even the day before yesterday I had my lunch at 5 30 pm and love flourished ki link dhuund ke use bhi toh update karna hai
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Posted: 6 years ago
#98
Sure Waise bhi mujhe koi jaldi nahi haiand Monday is near btw can I ask aap konsa course kar rahe ho? BTW all the best for your exams dear I hope ypue exam is going excellent.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gayatri9

haaye aap kaho tohabhi post karde? but what to do I thought as the semester just started I will get enough time to write but yeh ulta ho gaya even the day before yesterday I had my lunch at 5 30 pm and love flourished ki link dhuund ke use bhi toh update karna hai



Neki aur pooch pooch 😆
Update aaj k aaj
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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 9

As Dadi announced that all will go to trip Lakshmi and Saru were superhappy and superexcited. They went to their respective rooms so they could pack their luggage. Durga leaved from living room calling as she has to do all the extra arrangements.

Dadi and Guddan too leaved in their room.

In Dadi's room-
Dadi was taking her bag out at which guddan announced Dadi you won't pack your bag to which Dadi looked at her shocked. Guddan still managed to give Dadi serious expression But after 2 minutes she couldn't control and bursted into laughter.
Guddan[while laughing]- Dadi I mean you won't pack your luggage.I will pack it,you just tell me kya kya lena hai.
Dadi-nahi beta,mera kaam hai main khud hi karungi.
Guddan- took bag from her hands.
Kya Dadi ek taraf beta kehti hai and dusri side you won't let me do anything.
Dadi looked seriously at Guddan-"Toh tu nahi manegi".

Guddan smiled and nodded in Ni"Umhmm".
Dadi finally had to accept her defeat and let her pack the bag.
Guddan packed Dadi's luggage as instructed by Dadi.

Dadi[in her mind] thanked lord Krishna- Kanha tera jitna shukriya karu kam hai,jo aapne itni achhi jeevansangini chuni mere lalla ke liye bass ab in dono main pyaar karwakar inka saath humesha ke liye likh do".

guddan- dadi done aur kuch lena hai.
This disturbed Dadi from her thoughts and Dadi said "Nahi".
Dadi-Comeon let's sleep we have to get up earlyand be ready as we can't be late.
They both slept.
Guddan slept holding Dadi's hand in her hand.


The very next morning all got up and get ready and came in courtyard and were waiting eagerly for the vehicles so they could proceed further.
Lakshmi-Babyboo kab ayegi yeh gaadi ab intezaar nahi ho raha dekho mere pair bhi dard kar rahe hai".
To this all laughed.
vardaan- Are Lakshmi just wait for sometime Abhi meri driver se baat huiwoh kisi bhi pal aata hoga.

And at the moment
Honk!! Honk!!
An luxury bus arrived in courtyard of Jindal Bhawan.

AJ- As in usual scolding mood." What the hell is this Vardaan?" I told you to arrange flight tickets.Ab hum sab kya bus se jayenge.

Vardaan- Who sorry papa actually I tried really hard but I couldn't arrangethese many tickets that too within such short span of time. Upar se Vacations sab kuch booked hai.
Even for hotel bookings we had to pay thrice of their usual charges then we could get booking. So I booked a bus for us.

AJ- But vardaan
before AJ could speak further Guddan interrupted and said
Guddan- Thank you vardaan ji aapne bahot acchaa kiya jo bus book ki. The whole family will be together and sabko apni space bhi milegi.

Vardaan- Thankyou! as he still didn't know what to address Guddan as in relation she is her mother but she is too younger than him sso within this confusion he didn't addressed her.

guddan- Chalo Chalo now aren't we getting late.
Everyone boarded in bus at last AJ nodded his head negatively and finally boarded in bus.

Everyone occupied their seats.
Kishore took a single seat Durga and Saru took one seat the Another Lakshmi and Vardaan and next to them Guddan and Dadi.
Aj sat in cabin though all insisted him to join but he didn't.


They prayed for their safe journey Had jaykaaras and their journey began.

To be continued as I typed it already late night but as it was late night I didn't saved it and while updating due to some error it vanished. So I had typed it again Sorry as raat waali update was too long and right now I could just do this as baaki bhi updates dene hai.
So sorry and do let meknow kitna boring lag raha hai..

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