Bonded by Fate- AkshAn FF (Part 48 Pg 117) (UPDATED-2 Jan) - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

Ok bare with me it might become long since I am replying for the previous update as well.

Chalo bhai first thing first the ceremonial you are amazing nish and update was awesome. I really need to come up with something new even I myself am getting bored of repeating something everytime.😌

38 a & b

Done with that lets come to the update Mr. Karan is quite dramatic I must say😆 but isn't that one of the reasons why he and Guddan gel so well with each other and are best of friends. His entry at Gupta House and Rewati was 😆 had he didn't have a girlfriend already I would have shipped them. 😆So now he is the secret keeper hmm and his tareef for Jindal Sahab was 😆 I love their interactions can we have more of Karshat (Karan and Akshat😃)

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Another adhura confession I guess it's because of upcoming track you are planning with new entry Director-Producer Ekant Kapoor🤔. And see gudiya told you to not worry about uncle taking first step😃just be ready to keep up with him. Uncle was bold pretty bold👍🏼. The entire rain sequence was good and oh so romantic. Ummm Jindal Sahab Gudiya can you pass little bit of Maggie here as well pretty please. 😳So planning to bring back Saru bahu hmmm making Jindal Sahab agree to it is going to be a task I think. I'll be surprised if he agrees without any kind of protest as bringing her back will be almost equivalent to forgiving her. Waiting for your next update Nish as well as your reply.😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Poor jindal sahab bechare khush the ki bach gye lekin CBI guddan se kaise bach skte the🤣upar se inke armano pr v pani fir gya😆

Sochta tha ki vo kitne masoom thhe~

Kya se kya ho gaye dekhte dekhte~~😆

Continue soon😛

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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
👏🤣
I want more just like wanted wow just wow
.akdu uncleee for a moment I tought Guddan shouting AJ papa 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: captainplus

hi ! welcome to the forum 🤗

A great start 👍🏼
Would lo❤️e to read further 😊
continue soon ⭐️


Aye!Aye! Captain😉
Ill continue soon, if you promise to continue to be my critic😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Hi everyone..
I am new here.
Was planning to post something from few days but this story made me comment...😆

What a scene👏
Tm expect your scene to be fulfil in reality because guddan and an will do something like this😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: *Piku*

Welcome to the forum Nish_Vir 👏👏👏

You have written a beautiful Piece of relastic scene, through your writing I could just visualize AJ and Guddan in this situations👏

please update soon


I wrote the scene based on the fact that Aj and Guddan married each other for their selfish reasons.
Aj had been in love before but for Guddan, Aj is the first man in her life so she is bound to be attracted given his personality and decent behaviour.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
thanks for a fast update 🤗
this situation & conversation seems very much possible in the show
lo❤️ing how you kept both AJ & guddan's characteristics from the show intact. 👍🏼

would be waiting for more... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
I am loving this AJ😆
You are increasing our expectations for the series.

BTW...ahhh-mazing..👏

Best was hamari bahu😆

But I doubt... Will they share bed too easily?? 😃


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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: *Piku*

Wow

Very entertaining, I was thinking about a scene where Guddan uses AJ has a pillow. He will make very cuddly but cute grizzly bear 😆
I hope Guddan gives a fitting reply to her 3 bahus
I love how you add different scenes of Guddan falling n AJ catching
Please write soon


Since they are polar opposites, this method of torturing AJ was way more fun😆
Bahu ka bhi bura waqt jald hi shuru hoga but it will take Guddan some time to get accustomed to kitchen politics.
This fall-catch thing is the copyright of this serial ;)
It won't be fun without Guddan tripping on her own feet every now and then
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70

Nish you are fabulous, very talented writer 👏👏👏
Whistle, whistle, whistle what a brilliant chapter filled with entertainment, from saas bahu drama, to Arti, to the rendezvous in the corner😳😆, to both Akshst n Guddan feeling uncomfortable.
I really hope the 3 Devils oops I meant 3 bahus didn't make the hooks on the blouse loose,😡after all Guddan n all three are Ghar ke izzat of Jindal house.
I like Paloumis character, from show n in your story too😊
Nice development in the story😛
I wish I could write like you😭
Please update soon😊
Edited by *Piku* - 7 years ago

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