SaiRat SS - Lost chance or new hope? Part 15 pg 44 - Page 6

Oh boii!! Can totally imagine Chavans being this cheap🤢

Interesting update❤️

Oho noo... dnt make sai believe that vile woman and her supporters.

Are no need to say all this...

I understand... I am thinking of taking it a bit differebtly where V needs to wake up and see how wrong he was...

Hope it convinces you in the end. 👍🏼

Yay a story based on this insufferable track, I will wait for your updates rather than the episodes.

well written
Even in fanfic can’t stand the Chavan’s and Pakhi cheap they are

Wow sai pregnant 😃

Pakhi n chavhannis so cheap😡 sai should not trust pakhi thoda toh virat ko jhatka lagna chahiye

Bohut trust karta hai pakhi par toh gift toh Banta hai virat keliye😆

Thank you awesome story👏

Even in your FF ka AU, I'd have liked Sai despite her insecurities not allow herself get manipulated by PP/BK and also that Sai would not get pregnant. Even in the show I feel like Sai is not ready to be a mom. She has barely started her career. Infact she hasnt even graduated officially and they are showing her planning a family. Medical career is a long drawn out thing and it demands a lot of sacrifices. it makes no sense to show V obsessed with baby and claiming to be a supportive husband who understands the demands of hos wife's career and Sai also ok with going the family way at this stage in her life despite supposedly having a calling and a focus on her professional aspirations .... V definitely needs to see how wrong he has been in his conduct for a LONG time. V needs to see that he should be focusing on Sai's physical and mental health and not obsessing over baby, he needs to see that his " family" is a bunch of insensitive pricks that never evolve and are really not dil ke acche as he thinks.

I know the effort that goes behind conceiving a plot of your own and actually putting that down on paper in a way that flows like a real show vaala pplot with scenes, dialogues etc. and as a person that has tried to pen my own FFs, I know that I crave 2 things- honest feedback but also approval! so I was torn between giving you my actual opinion versus coming across as harsh and nitpicking even though you are making an effort to give a better plot than show makers.

Yyayay ! Sai is pregnant. 😍😍😍😍😍

Istg pakhi is the worst. Uske baar mein pdhna is also a headache. I hope virat comes to know about it. Also I want sai to tadpaofy him. Like serial mein to dikhega ni ye idhar hi dikh jaye🥲

Awesome ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

I agree..

In real life, i would not want Sai to have a baby either...

Any career and especially when you are starting out is stressful and demanding... And the ones which do not have a desk job... More so...

I understand that. I am part of a similar one 🙂

Ideally I would want SaiRat to sit together and plan a baby on their own terms. But even in real life, sometimes you have to give in to the whims of the married family... To what extent depends on how you stand on that issue.

What Sai is doing in the show or the SS is purely her choice but I am making her pregnant to solve the ulterior motive of the SS. I am selfish that way. 😉

Hope it works out in the end and convinces all of you.

Thankyou for the comments too... I do like to read and understand how the story is received and since it's still a work in progress... The suggestions make it better.

Heyy there, 1st of all tqsm for the tags ♥️.

Coming to the story, this is something much better than the current plot shown! Sai leaving that mad house, showing mirror to Virat , him giving firm answer to kaku & asking them to stfu is need of the hour 👏🏻♥️.

Kaku, paapi & sonali r literal black mark in the name of womanhood, chiii, not surprised seeing their dirty tricks 🤢🤐. Feeling very bad for Sai, that she has to go thru endless mental sufferings 😭. I'm in 2 minds seeing her 2nd pregnancy. Happy that she's conceived again, but also sad ki her pain still hasn't been addressed. Now also she has a huge pain to endure until virat comes back. Hopeful that she questions him straightly & Virat blast his fam & permanently leaves that hell!

Excited for the next part.

Ps- Could you plz show Sairat's emotional talks, Virat's apologies /self introspection, celebrating their pregnancy together & a happily ever after? Also show kaku gang getting punished severely with jail sentence & some slaps & face blackening of paapi?? They deserve atleast these 💥.

Thank you so much... 😊

I agree ... Even i don't want Sai to be pregnant a second time... Using it for a plot point here.

Hope it is satisfying in the end.

Won't give out much... But all that you mentioned is in my mind too. 👍🏼