OS: In my arms! (Poetry🙈) - Page 2

Note: While Sai's feelings show her acceptance, Virat's feelings show disbelief and pride in owning her! He cannot believe he finally got her

Virat's feelings

Did those eyes that never bowed down

Lowered to my gaze! Unable to meet the desire shown

Surrendering her whole being to me in the name of love

Did those cheeks that added only innocence

Turned beet red! at my intimate presence

Raising the flames in me that had only known the douse

Did those lips that always quivered at my queries

Answered now with kisses splurged in series

Rendering me speechless to question her love ever

Did the slender neck that wore the symbol of my life

Unfolded the expanse to mark her as my wife

Giving all the rights to touch where ever but nothing left

Did those enticing mounds hiding the golden heart beneath

Invited me openly to ravish as I covered them as sheath

Showing the place where my worries are washed away when I rest

Did the voice that never took my name in full

Drove me crazy with the screams that echoed the same

Pleading me not to forge any kind of distance in between

The Sai Joshi! My wife, my love and my partner in crime

The unstoppable wild cat, I proudly unleash to the world as mine

For I now know how to tame her with love, held captive in my arms!

forgot to tag people

Do not want to miss you today

Mee first...I went Awwww...

If Sai's feelings were that she knew the person that nobody else even realized...Virat's feelings are "Look..she is mine!" Stamping her with his name, being...but he still says Sai Joshi? thats the ultimate tribute to her. He may possess her body and soul but not her roots.

Yes Sai Chavan is his desire but Sai Joshi is his pride!

Perfectly describing Virat's feelings.... it will be unbelievable for him and take time to sink in his acceptance and her love for him by her

Awesome.... beautiful 😍

Sundar❤️, Viru boi ko apne kismat par yakeen nahi ho raha🤣

You are good at prose, better at poetry Sadhika...

Few words yet impactful...

Loved the poem... V cannot believe his luck. And how you have described the tender love and passionate love all in one go.

Beautiful 🥰🥰

Wow that’s a compliment!!

I like poetry but I don’t know the rules of various forms of it either in English or any other language! I try to rhyme but the math doesn’t work out making it uneven 😅.

Ooh wow! 👏 Mujhe kuch kuch ho raha hai 😆

So sensuous, full of desire...but with so much tenderness and feeling!

Loved it!❤️

And it sounds just like Sai Joshi...untamed, unabashed, unlimited .. when she knows what her heart wants 😳

Last two lines were goosebumps☺️