New innings- os- part 3 page 5 updated - Page 3

Loved pp being sensible for a change.... She owned up for her actions and also showed the mirror to virat ..... That crazy family also had no other choice but to listen to their favorite bahu.....

Please continue with a part 2.... Mayb better equation between Pakhi an samrat and sai!!!

FANTASTIC!!!!!👏👏👏

This is what most of the audience must have thought after seeing Pakhi... Like come on yaar it's 21st century... Who the heck does such things when rejected.. Life is to move on!

Loved this write-up by u!! That's very well written! Perfect dialogues and everything pointed out wonderfully 👍🏼

If they show Pakhi doing this i'll just forget all her bad actions till now😆

More importantly welcome to the forum!🤗 Hope u have a good time here⭐️

And yess also waiting for second part😳😃

I wish something like this would happen, but I know it wont

Anyway, an amazing OS❤️

do consider continuing this with Patralekha having a conversation with Sammy and Sai🤗

Wow. Patralekha rebuking Virat is something we will be ae to see in FFs only. Good job. Please continue writing ❤️

Thank you all. As a new bie, I was allowed to post only 11 post yesterday. Thank you everyone for the encouraging comments. I will try to continue this os.

Sahi waqt -part 2

Disappointed. This is the only feeling that she is feeling right now. Bhavani Chavan never felt this humiliated and helpless. Virat's sahi waqt finally arrived, but not by him. Due to his personal relationship with Nagesh Chavan, DIG has come to their house and delivered the news to them.

Virat walked into the house wishing that nobody questions him,to pick some important documents. The unusually calm atmosphere scared him a bit but his priorities are clear, Sruthi needs him and he has to stand by her, at any cost. With this thought in mind, he cleared his throat to let them know the reason for his visit.

Before he could speak anything, his gaze fell on DIG sir and with the look on his face, it is clear that his cover was blown and everyone knows about his secret mission. He is clueless about his feelings right now. One side, he is happy that everyone would understand him now. He is worried about sruthi too. He cannot deny that he felt a sudden surge of joy thinking that his family would applogize for misunderstanding and disowning him.

He could not help but think why is everyone looking so sad, as if they lost something. Did DIG sir inform that Sruthi is not his wife and Sahas being not his blood? Oh no, did they misunderstand again, this very thought scared him. Putting a brake on his thoughts, Bhavani moved towards him and held his hand.

" I was always proud of you, Virat." Uttered Bhavani shocking everyone, much to the delight of Virat.Her calm voice and these words are like a balm on his heart.

" Do you know what is your Kaka Saheb's favorite possession?" Asked Bhavani with fondness twinkling in her eyes as she reminsced the memories of her Husband.

" Farz" replied Virat proudly.

A mirthless chuckle escaped her mouth.

" And clearly you have let us down today" said she with a voice that is devoid of emotions.

" no Kaka, you are misunderstanding me" said Virat pleadingly.

" Let me finish my dear" said Bhavani non chalantly. Nothing will soothe her, today.

" Your Kaka Saheb put his country before anything. For him, his duty is beyond everything. Nothing, nothing could come in between. Not even me, his love of life" This is the first time, Bhavani spoke about her relation with her husband like this.

" I should have envied but I felt proud to be his wife, Chavan's reputation is nothing without the sense of patirotic feeling"

Nobody dared to move a finger. Even Karishma could not comment daddo sutto. Under the pretense of being a tough patriarchial woman lies a woman for whom nation comes first

" You have been my favorite among all the kids. When you cleared and joined IPS, my joy knew no bounds."

" How could you? How could you betray your uniform Virat?" Bhavani questioned frustratedly.

Before he could open his mouth, she shut him up with her raised palm indicating him to stop giving non sensical explanations.

"If you had cheated on Sai, I would have atleast forgiven you due to my partiality. But you betrayed the Nation by aiding a naxalite. When did you become so delusional that you could not decide what is right or wrong? " Bhavani questioned Virat fiercely.

" You failed Virat" spoke DIG with disappointment evident in his voice.

Nobody could say anything.

Let me know your comments.

Even audience vl also forgive him if he cheated on sai. But he cheated his uniform his nation made fun of Police officers job. Feeling guilty of killing naxalite. Praising woman naxalite as bahadur. Prioritized her. Without any guilt shame and thinking he z doing great job. And expecting others to understand him. And blame innocent people.

Fantastic! This is exactly what should happen on the show but sadly it wont.

Wah.. aisa hi hona chahiye. BK has always been so proud of Chavan surname. I can totally see her getting upset like this when she knows what V did.

I only wish if they have the sense to show this.

Wonderful work. Keep writing 👍🏼

This feels refreshing and I'm glad you're able to wrote something on this plot. I for one cannot..

Also, could you please mention the page number of the new chapter too while updating your topic name with new chapter... it'll be easier for us to find the chapter if there are many replies and pages have grown