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Posted: 4 years ago
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...for two things

1) Rain romance. SaiRat jaha h, vaha to baarish ka mausam bhi chal rha h. To inka rain romance kaha khaa gaye ye log. Imagine agar Viru ne Sai ko aise hi kiss kiya hota lekin dono bheege hote. πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯(I think I will write an OS on this)

2) For them to change the track. Virat ka I love you perfect tha. Aur har tareeke se actual lag rha tha, kyuki Sai ka reaction was legit. I am sorry for writing in Hinglish, but bear with mere saath.

They could have shown like this, Virat Sai ko propose krta, Sai gussa jaati. Virat Sai ko manaane ke liye bolta, " Sai I get that you don't feel the same way about me. Lekin chinta mt kro, humara rishtaa vaise hi rhega jaise h. Aur agar tum chahti ho to bas keh do, main iss bare mein kabhi tumse koi bhi baat nhi krunga. Aur humare beech kuch bhi awkward nhi hoga" aur Sai ispe maan jaati aur halki si smile de deti.

It would have been the perfect blend of romantic and angsty. Virat propose bhi kr deta, uska dil bhi toot jaata, Sai ko ye bhi pta chal jaata ki vaada is over, Sai ki nazron mein Virat ki ehmiyat bhi badh jaati ki banda mere liye kya kuch krne ko taiyaar h, aur track bhi different ho jaata. Aur agar inko Sai ka internal struggle dikhaana hi h, to it would have been the best way. Gaalt time pe proposal milta h to insaan apni feelings se aur bhaagta h. Which is what they want right? Confession ko aage badhaane ke liye, I mean?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Write a story yaar...idea acha hai

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