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Posted: 4 years ago
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Such a lovely OS!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Fantastic os

Love the way you added ninad’s angle in the story

Poor Pakhi’s plan flopped 🥳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you for tagging me

a great Sunday surprise read... fantastic writing


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it reading 🥰 Sai was so cute 😘


He went to close the door when he saw Pakhi. She was probably woken up for water, she was standing there looking stupefied as if she saw some ghost.

I was laughing out loud at this and thinking 'Virat! She was just doing her watchman duty.' 😂🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Glad I checked all the tags, I am a bit ghum these days😆

This. Was .Awesome.❤️

You are so talented, I love your other SS very much as well, you are really good with your work😳

And this was just so lovely❤️

The way you portrayed all of this first of all is really fabulous, you made everything turn out so well. With the same circumstances, this is just beautiful. The way you showed Sai taking a stand for her self respect, yet staying strong was really good. I loved how you handled Sai and her decision here, awesome ❤️

And you know, my sadistic part loved Aai ka slap for virat, aur suno apni bhabhi ki baatein, har jagah se pitaayi hi meilgi usko🤣

And uff,

🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

The above emotinal lengthy thing is for your way of showing Ninu here👏

That was the best part, avval darje ke murkh, I agree, that is true🤣

But the way you brought out this convo is just amazing, this was my favourite part. cuz, he behaved like an actual father, a person who loves his son, and who is also mature and knows the society, a true wise elder. Really good.

And whiskey, yeah, he does need it. His brain cells will get active rather than getting numb🤣

And yes, his active brain cells worked well, PD ke ghar pe attack.🤣

Even I was thinking, don't the love birds realise in their love that kids are watching it, kahi bhi shuru hojaate hai🤣No wonder didi has free access to the room🤣

Amd anth mein, didi ki beizzati and navra baiko ka aankhon aankhon mein phasa liya😳 Wow❤️

Loved it totally❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely OS.... It should have been in the show... You wrote it amazingly. It was so good and the way this confession and romance blossomed here is too good. Kudos to you... Whenever you write any new OS, do tag me..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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awesome OS dear

loved it

especially the father son convo how ninad guided virat their heart to heart convo and finally sairat confessed their love

thanks for tagging me dear

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