SS - Pre - Mission Rituals _ pt 3(C) pg 23_updt 07 July - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Iss baar time pe aagayi mein🤣

Kya baat hai!!!

This was a fantabulous update😎

The loveliest part his, how well you have utilised the separation, which was only for a matter of hours, but it registered an impact which is still lasting and growing with time.

Thanks dearie!! 😳

Cuz, the way each others existence has gained a significant importance, this is phenomenal .

And how beautifully the feelings have evolved, as you said from getting a jittery feeling due to touch to pouring out the feelings in simple touch. Everything was just so beautiful.

Was just taking forward what they have showed so far... from Sai flinching when Virat tried to wake her to her holding his hand to sleep in peace... it has been beautiful!

So, the risk is far more worse than what has been told, agar sach pata chala toh Viru ko baiko dho daalegi🤣

Bilkul... dhulaayi hi hoti 😆

And the girls admiring in college, theek hai banda handsome hai, boys also admiring him, fanbase bada hai🤣

☺️☺️

And kaku and Ninu ki admiration, waah😳

Awesome update, waiting for next part eagerly😃


Thanks Shristhi!!! Bold dekhna... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Beautiful update

Loving the bond they share

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

I could hear KGF bgm when Sai walked back after the mass dialogue 😎


Feel good story. Loved it 🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Lovely..... The easy camaraderie that has formed between sai and virat..... The easy hug..... The casual approach without the extra drama is sooo much of love 💖💖


He and she became a bit like each other... shant till I come back... Once u are back, u will manage the family..... They have grown on each other...


Aai giving them the privacy An them having their me time.... 💝💝💝


Karishma is gonna turn out to be helpful in future .. I guess.....


Continue soon!!

Happy writing!!!


Thanks so much, dear! 🤗

The easy camaraderie that has formed between sai and virat - This is what has us all hooked, right?

shant till I come back... Once u are back, u will manage the family..... - Whether Sai accepts it or not, he is her touchstone, her rock 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sairat07

This was beautiful!

Thank u for the tag dear!

Commenting on both the parts...😆

First of all hats off to ur skill yaar ...Wonderful!!👏

Loved each and every bit of this ...The words, their conversation and the narration...👍🏼

And that dialogue...ped par ya fir electric post par chadke bhi call krunga🤣

And she was imagining it...And also was I !🤣🤣

Continue soon!!!

Happy writing!!!🤗


You are very kind!!


ped par ya fir electric post par chadke bhi call krungasmiley37


Sai ke paas wapas aana hai bande ko! She will kill him if he doesn't call, kuch bhi karega ye IPS wala! 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amor_fati

Wonderful.. as always👏

Loved the way she expressed he was more important to her than her studies and him acknowledging their growing proximity💕

Keep it coming!


Loved the way she expressed he was more important to her than her studies and him acknowledging their growing proximity💕


The thing with Sai is that she is not emotive much... no grand gestures, and whatever she feels, needs to be deciphered from her unsaid words, or from her casually thrown statement.

And that is where Virat becomes her ideal partner, even though they are poles apart. He isa calm man, he reads people, thinks over their words, actions and expressions.

To him, Sai is an open book. And that is why he let go of her bitter words, because he understands the reasons, not the words... 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nja91

FANTASTIC! Such a good read. Right from how their routine was set to how this mission shows their sync. Sai was so on point. She knew exactly the way to behave. There was Quiet efficiency. I love that valcony scene♥️ so so nicely written. Look forward to more.


That is what happens when you start living together... nothing else brings that kind of closeness between two people...

And that is the sole reason these two know eachother so well, and have managed to stay together, ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

A very beautiful update.

You have mentioned the progress between Virat and Sai so well. Their innermost feelings are so very well written. Simply amazing.


Thank you so much!!!! 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks a ton dear!

Ab mere version ke SaiRat ko bhi hashtags de de!! 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dee10

Honestly, am speechless. I cannot even describe in words how beautiful this was. For once, to me, it wasn't about Sairat but about those many many police, military, navy and air force officers and their families. some who go away only to come back as beautiful memories. Immense respect for these protectors of the nation and the sacrifices their families make. I am grateful that I was born in a country that doesn't have wars etc. but my heart literally goes out to countries that are war-ridden and innocent lives are lost every day. Thank you for tagging me into such a beautiful piece of writing. Hope to read more amazing pieces from you. ❤️ ❤️


Thank you so much for this comment!!! 🤗

This is exactly what I had in mind when I was writing this... the kind of sacrifices the families make are often romanticized and glamourized, but the daily anxiety and pain and uncertainty that they live with, is very, very real!

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